CW: domestic violence (recounted), infidelity (recounted), death of a parent (recounted), car accident
Closed Door Mods: Chapter 6 (some parts), Chapter 13 (some parts), Chapter 22 (some parts)
I would like to thank NetGalley and Harlequin Romance, Afterglow Books, for providing me with a free e-ARC of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review.
Frustrated by the way their lives have turned out, Charly and her two best friends move to Timber Falls to open up their dream bar. However, their vision for the bar is met with opposition from the town’s residents, including the former owner of the bar, Jaxon. From there, tension over the state of the bar grows while also dealing with their feelings for each other.
I had relatively high hopes for The Devil in Blue Jeans. I love small-town romances and I have been wanting to read more cowboy romances. The plot concept caught my interest and I thought it would be a nice, quick read. Yet, I was left disappointed by this book.
Of course, I don’t know if there will be any final edits before the book goes to print on February 20th, 2024, but there are quite some critiques I have for this novel.
First, while I didn’t notice this when I first started reading, the writing style definitely needed some improvement. I’m not a fan of writing styles and dialogue where it seems highly unlikely that a person would say something like that in real life. Kennedy’s writing style was mediocre at best and overall the writing felt forced.
Secondly, the character development and plot execution felt off. While Kennedy had a great plot concept surrounding the book, its execution fell flat for me and there didn’t seem to be enough of a build-up to the book’s central conflict nor was there a solid transition between events in the book. On the other side of the coin, other than some inklings here and there, there weren't any signs of character development in Charly and Jaxon. And for the rest of the characters, they just felt like they were merely there for the main characters and did not have any supporting plot lines of their own (with the exception of two characters).
Finally, I just didn’t feel like the relationship between Charly and Jaxon felt believable. I think this complaint ties into my first two critiques of the book, but I just couldn’t see it for them nor did I quite find myself rooting for them. There really didn’t seem much there and while there was a good build-up early on in the book, it just couldn’t last.
However, there were some things that I liked about the book. In addition to liking the plot concept, I felt that Kennedy did a great job with world-building in creating the small town of Timber Falls and living life in rural Montana. Additionally, I thought Kennedy also did well with crafting the banter between Charly and Jaxon in the beginning of the book.
Overall, while I wanted to like this book, I just don’t think this one was for me.