review by Megsly
Have you been waiting for that super original paranormal series that keeps you gripped to the edge of your seat? The one that you can't stop reading and find yourself sneaking new pages in when your boss isn't looking? The one who's characters you lust for and who's plot you just can't quite figure out? Well...then Pulse is not for you. It's more along the lines of a rewrite of Twilight, The Vampire Diaries, and every other YA vamp series that has been written thus far.
Pulse by Kailin Gow is the first book in the Pulse series. It follows the exploits of Kalina (First things first, I'm always thrown off by a main character who's name is nearly identical to the author's name. It throws off a Mary Sue vibe...) and she's...well, Kalina is kind of a bitch. She makes good grades in school and works diligently at being the best she can on her high school's cheer leading squad. She doesn't understand other girls, and refers to them as stupid: "Other girls were stupid - girls who didn't get good grades, who drank too much at parties, who cried about breakups in math class." (Location 185 on Kindle) She's pretty and popular and happy, for the most part, but so far from being able to relate to her peers that she seems out of place in a high school. Something that is referred to, but is never made clear, is the fate of Kalina's parents. First off, she's adopted but her adoptive parents died in an accident and her brother (I have no clue if he was adopted too, or if he's a biological sibling, or what) is the one who's raised her, well...taken care of her. I'm not sure of the dynamics there, perhaps it's something that's made clearer in the future, but as far as Pulse goes, it was a jumbled mess mentioned in passing.
One normal part of Kalina's life? She has a boyfriend. A hot boyfriend named Aaron who is just as flawed as her petty classmates that she looks down upon. The flaw, however, is a lethal flaw (or so Kalina thinks.) His addiction to the family wine leaves him intoxicated much of the time, leading to their breakup because Kalina doesn't condone alcoholismc (quite frankly, for a girl who finds flaws in everyone around her, I'm surprised she even gave a wine drinking hottie a second look). Shortly thereafter, Aaron is dead and Kalina blames his love of wine for it. Kalina's feelings on Aaron are a conflict for me, as a reader, but I'll explain more of that later.
A few months after Aaron's death (I think, it's never really explained. The passage of time in this book is...well...nonexistent? It could be a week, a day, a month, hell...it's never made clear) Kalina runs into his brother, Stuart Greystone who has come to take over the winery that Kalina believes lead to Aaron's death. Stuart is slightly older than Aaron, and looks remarkably like him with the same hazel eyes and sandy brown hair, despite the fact that they're only half brothers. Another sudden development is the appearance of Jaeger Greystone, the oldest brother of the trio.
Okay, so to be honest, it doesn't take long for my impression of this book to sour. As soon as Jaeger and Stuart are introduced, the reader learns of the bitter rivalry between them. Very quickly, Kalina finds herself over at the Greystone's, first, because Stuart is a hottie and secondly, because she's intrigued. Stuart is claiming that he doesn't believe Aaron's death was an accident and immediately they set about researching the family history to find clues about what led to his demise. While at the Greystone manner, Stuart decides to break Kalina into the family secret when she blames alcohol for Aaron's death. He claims that no, Aaron was not an alcoholic. He was nothing of the sort, and the two disagree, which leads Stuart to admit the truth. "Aaron was a vampire," he says (location 1184) and immediately Kalina declares, in instantaneous verbal denial with an accepting internal monologue all at once, that vampire's don't exist.
And this was the point where the book lost me. I'm not sure if it was the method of which they share their family secret, or if it's the sudden Vampire Diaries flashbacks I get when reading. Jaegar and Stuart were born in the 1300's, changed when they were young, along with their father. In the 1800's, their father met a woman and fell in love, and together they had a child (a dhampir, half vampire-half human) that they named Aaron. Shortly there after, Stuart and Jaeger's father changed the girl to a vampire, and on Aaron's 17th birthday, he was converted to a full blooded vampire, because God forbid the mother of this child have her son grow to be physically older than her. Who cares for souls and such (in this series, it's a proven fact. Vampirism = bye bye soul) when your son may actually out-age you!
Jaeger fully endorses nibbling on humans, in fact, he loves it. Stuart and Aaron, on the other hand, do not. They instead drink on Vampire Wine, which is consecrated wine blessed by the one and only vampire priest to walk the earth, therefore turning the wine truly in to the blood of Christ and Vampire Wine was what Aaron constantly consumed.
Kalina takes all this information surprisingly well, and soon finds out that she's "special." Her blood has the power to give a vampire extraordinary power or, if it's given to the vampire willingly, can restore their humanity. And wait, it gets better...literally, only a few moments after this information is shared with her, Greystone Wineries come under attack by wayward vampires intent on claiming Kalina as their own. What does our cheer leading heroine do? She pulls a Buffy move and stakes her first vampire! Pretty impressive for someone who just found out vampires really do exist.
And only a day or two later....GASP! Kalina is making out with our hot middle brother Greystone vamp, Stuart. Wait...PAUSE! Didn't Aaron just die? *flips back to the beginning of book* Yup, there's the mourning and the sorrow and the "Omg, my lame boyfriend who was an 'alcoholic' just died, and as much as I blame him for his own stupidity, I miss him! But I don't, I'm angry, but I do miss him!" Yes, Kalina, I find you to be a fickle character who obviously, despite your pretentious ethical code of "thou shall not drink, whine over boys, or do badly in school," you're willing to just throw your "love" for your old boyfriend to the side for his older brother. I guess making out with all the brothers (cause she totally kisses Jaeger, too) is something every good girl does.
Despite my displeasure with the character predicaments, I read on. And was still displeased. But, by all means, please pick up this book for yourself and give it a go, don't let my opinion stop you, but just be warned. The writing isn't bad by any means, though the author tends to use words that don't fit with the story and it's clearly written for young adults. Most of the story is told from Kalina's point of view (though not in 1st person) so I can't really justify a 17 year old girl referring to photographs as daguerreotypes or repeatedly use the term louche in reference to Jaeger's rakish ways. The characters seem like a mixture of the Salvatore brothers, only their rings contain "life blood" instead of Lapis Lazuli to protect them from the sun. Kalina strikes me as a Buffy wanna be, and the plot makes no sense and has so many holes it's practically dead on arrival. Unfortunately, for Kalina and the gang, I will not be continuing onward with the remaining four books in the Pulse series. They'll have to go on alone in their future exploits.
-Story Elements (plot) – 4
-Character Development - 3
-Grammar & Punctuation - 8
-Prose – 6
-Paranormal Element - 7
Total Score: 5.6/10