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262 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 7, 2023
The Wild Hunt: The Complete Series 2/5 stars
The Savage Fae's Mate 3/5 stars
The Feral Fae's Human 3/5 stars
The Brutal Fae's Life 3/5 stars
The Vicious Fae's Love 3/5 stars
The Barbaric Fae's Soul 2/5 stars
The Primal Fae's Queen 2/5 stars
Page 854
The 6th and last book, The Primal Fae’s Queen.
I have to say that in terms of characters, Naomi started off well. Understanding that she was also at fault for the way Aev and her relationship soured is definitely a plus, but I’ll need more from her.
Page 859
Huh, okay now I get why both Teris and Naomi behaved in such cold manner towards others. They had a past, a past they had to move on from, or rather were forced to move on. Interesting. While it’s not an excuse for behaving so coldly, it is definitely a reason.
Page 920
To be honest, I am liking Teris and Naomi more than I thought I would. The story is still rushed, the writing style is still weak, but it is less harsh. Whilst Naomi and Teris are cute together, I felt that the romance was rushed. I understand why… because of the plot and their past, but with how much history they had, I would have needed a bit more build up, a bit more longing, a bit more tension. It was too fast.
Page 970
Oh come on! Are you seriously telling me that Naomi had to ask the creatures for help, and they went along with it just like that? Are you telling me that this side-plot was resolved with just 2-3 sentences? That’s just so weak. At least a heartfelt speech, a little passion or an explanation could’ve helped. Instead we got a “we need you to protect us” and a roar as an agreement. That’s pretty disappointing.
Page 972
That had to be the most disappointing fighting scene ever. Why, you may ask. Because there was none. Teris went into the fight as the chapter ended. Next chapter’s first sentence, “the fight was over…”. I mean… way to minimise the weight of the plot, I guess.
Page 980
This book has the weakest execution of the scenes. No fight described even though the fight was a side-plot. They followed the creatures to fight again, only to have nothing but Teris and Naomi talking mind to mind and the fae resolving the issue with some power display in 2 paragraphs. It’s incredibly disappointing.
And the actions don’t make sense. One second they are in their animal form and then they are conversing in their human form. When did they change? If the author doesn’t want to keep repeating that they shifted, she could just hint at it. Teris was in his animal form and then he hugged Naomi to his chest. When did he change? My mind didn’t switch and now I am imagining a sabretooth hugging a human looking fae.
I am so confused with what is going on most of the time because everything jumps around. The scenes, the descriptions, the execution. It’s messy.
Page 994
Well, now that I finished the 6th and last book, The Primal Fae's Queen, and the series, I have to say, I was left disappointed with this last book. I liked Naomi and Teris, which I didn't think I would. But other than that... the plot was just there, boring, the writing was weak, the execution of the scenes were lacking or ignored, and important scenes were often skipped.
The descriptions were surface level with barely any depth to them and often felt messy as I didn't understand how we got to one point from the other. We weren't told or shown when something happened, the scene/action just switched. I had to force my mind to adjust to the new picture and It is disturbing when someone is reading in a way that a whole movie goes through their mind. It's like someone cutting a scene off.
He was the one sprouting crap about not letting me mate with anyone else, which meant he was planning on mating with me and would do it to stay alive. So, there was no risk to me. Outside of the basic risk that Teris potentially was to my heart, and mind, and every other damn part of me.