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Legendary Hearts #1

The Heart of a Dragonslayer

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The youngest son in a large family, easily overlooked by busy parents and siblings all significantly older than him, Remira has worked hard to get to where he is, though most would consider it little enough. A soldier at the local garrison, he spends his days protecting the village and surrounding land from encroaching beasts, and his nights assisting his parents with the family business.

It's a better life than anyone expected for him, but still Remira longs for more, to visit places he only hears about, to see the stars through telescopes he's only ever seen in catalogues. Opportunities like that don't go to the youngest son of furriers, however, and so he makes do with ogre-slaying and stargazing.

Then, in the aftermath of a traumatic event, he learns some surprising news: his parents have arranged a marriage for him, and not to the local he'd been dreading, but to a merchant couple they've recently contracted with who live in a city several days away and are seeking a spouse with both martial experience and mercantile knowledge.

It's not the opportunity he ever expected, but it's certainly one he's determined to meet and exceed—until he arrives to meet his future spouses and learns they never really wanted the marriage at all and fully intend to send him away the very moment the trial period is over.

353 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 14, 2023

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Megan Derr

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Megan is a long time resident of queer romance and keeps herself busy reading and writing it. She is often accused of fluff and nonsense. When she’s not involved in writing, she likes to cook, harass her wife and cats, or watch movies. She loves to hear from readers and can be found all over the internet.

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187 reviews505 followers
June 21, 2025
I was confused at points and I think the world building could use a little bit more depth but otherwise I enjoyed this book!! I’m going straight to the characters because there’s a handful of them. The MC is named Remi, he lives in a large family that he’s always felt isolated from. Until he slays a dragon and then they seem to flip like a coin, giving him all their attention. He is very hot headed and stubborn, to the point where it got annoying at times. Although, it wasn’t the kind of stubbornness that just went unnoticed, he was definitely called out by multiple characters. But he also has a sweeter side and a loyal side especially when it comes to his friend Coree.

I loved Coree, he was my favorite, the shining star of this book. He’s such a fun character, he’s free and kind, also fiercely loyal to Remi. They would do anything for each other. I know the next book is supposed to be about Tanessa but I really want one on Coree!! Tanessa was introduced at the start of the story then later on she was thrown into Coree and Remi’s duo. And I usually hate hate hate when authors do that but I actually think it worked here? Idk how. I just found myself enjoying Tanessa as a character and I think she blended in with the chemistry of the two friends. Finally there is Remi’s promised Makia and Elijah, and I liked them both but I felt like we didn't get to know them very well. It felt like their page time was cut short. I just wanted more. More tender moments, more angry moments. Literally anything.

The world building was alright but nothing special. My favorite bits were all the little pieces of information we got on like animals, food, jewelry. But I was missing out on the relationship aspect because most people in this world seem to be in a three person relationship and I’m pretty sure there’s a purpose but it wasn’t specified, unless I missed it. Lastly, I would like to give a shout-out to the writing style because I thought it was good, descriptive and pretty. It’s one of those that you have to take your time with (which I’ll admit I didn’t totallyyyy do) and then there’s the angst the amazing crippling angst, I honestly wish there was more, I wish they dragged it out, it was really good.
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625 reviews379 followers
June 11, 2025
3.5 stars. I feel like the story, characters and world building had some fantastic potential but it just ended up falling over a bit at the execution for me.

Remi Darken is the youngest son of a poor merchant family and sees an opportunity to establish his own identity by becoming a garrison soldier in his small village. After encountering and slaying a dragon, Remi finds himself bestowed with new magical powers and a new impressive title of Ser Dragonslayer. Unaware, whilst off slaying ogres and bandits, Remis parents have arranged his marriage to the powerful and affluent owners of the Three Apple Merchant company Elajih and Makia, and sets out for a new town with a tentative hope of a happy future and relationship. However, once he arrives, finds that his reception is not what he expected and his Promised partners do not want the marriage nor him, however, Remi is determined to see out the trial period of the arranged marriage for his family's business sake.

This had quite a unqiue queer normative society to play with, where the societal norms includes various configurations of polyamous couplings, primarily triads. I found myself so curious about how human nature works in this world, cause from what I could tell there appeared to be no interpersonal drama, envy or jealousy in any of these relationships, which would be a lovely peaceful world but I just can't imagine it haha.

Whilst I didn't dislike the main coupling of Remi, Elajih and Makia, I struggled to really invest too much in their chemistry. I think the biggest barrier for me was the fact that as the story is single POV through Remis eyes, much of the conversations and development necessary to understand the thawing between him and Elajih and Makia happen in conversations off page that the reader is absent from these and is told about them after the fact, so as a result it all felt a bit sudden to me.....and honestly considering the potential desire and passion that could have been included in the spice scenes between these three, their moments of intimacy just left me feeling a bit cold.

Derr seems to have really refined this delicious flavour of angst lite that comes from a source of rejection, unrequited affection and self doubt that I find delectable every time I come across it and I always eat it up and this time, with Remis dejection, was no different 🤌🏼

Honestly, this story was completely fine, I think just way too much was squeezed into a 300 page book and the whole thing could have benifited significantly from slowing down and breathing, even if that meant splitting it to two books. Don't get me wrong, I still demolished this and enjoyed myself, but it's definitely not my favourite Derr.
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2,389 reviews33 followers
September 17, 2025
4.5 stars, rounding up - This was a really engrossing read and a return to form for Derr, since I've found recent releases to be a little lacking. It is both action-packed and emotional. Remi is a sad boi who doesn't have time to be sad, he's too busy kicking ass. It leans a little more to the fantasy side than the romance, tho I did enjoy that aspect, too.

In this world, triads are considered the optimal romantic arrangement, and after slaying the dragon and healing (a bit) Remi travels from his humble home to the city to meet the established couple he has been promised to by his family. When he arrives, the first half of the couple he meets is clearly disdainful and not at all enthusiastic to have Remi join their coupling. So, he puts his head down and gets to work being useful in other ways around the household. He is accompanied by his friend, who provides some emotional support.

Pretty quickly, he starts winning over everyone around him, me included! I mean, he just kept becoming more and more endearing and I legit cried at a couple of points bc he was just so Big Strong Babby who needed a hug. I don't think I've spoilt much, so I'll stop while I'm ahead but this was really fun and I might have to reread it.
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Author 21 books1,472 followers
June 21, 2023
Perfect

Absolutely beautiful book, full of emotional ups and downs and a delicious edge of pining and yearning to top it all off. Magic and adventure, fabulous found family vibes and a decent slice of smexy times. Excellent epic fantasy romance. Solid HEA and MMM.
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919 reviews
June 15, 2023
GODS THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!

Loved every minute of it and now I want Coree's book!

If you're looking for a found-family, hurt/comfort, MMM fantasy book, look no further!! The synopsis for this title doesn't do it justice. (But I kind of like that now that I'm on the other side of it because its like knowing what's behind the secret door)

HIGHLY RECOMMEND if you can't tell by all the shouting!!!
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3,980 reviews30 followers
June 28, 2023
June 2023
Kindle edition

I do prefer MMM, there's something about it that feels balanced. This one was a bit confusing with the village and parental relationships. Pre-dragon, Remi gets hit with news of an arranged marriage. Post-dragon, his family seems loveable and doting. It's only the fact that his friend is there that the real truth about them comes out.

For a moment there it seems like three will be four with how close the two friends are. But it was called 3 apples so quickly forgot about that. The friend's fate was obvious as soon as power transfer was mentioned. The berserker was a nice add on character.

The relationship itself was touch and go. Remi was a tad too sulky. I thought that was it after T told him to put a stop to it, but it got a bit annoying. I was glad they all worked it out, they made a nice trio.
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Profile Image for Light.
475 reviews13 followers
June 24, 2023
3 Stars for the story. 1 star for the MMM romance turnabout in emotions from them hating Remi to loving him was too abrupt. Didn’t like that progress , the dynamic between the three … meh. I usually don’t like MMM but I thought this one would be different.
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224 reviews3 followers
June 19, 2023
This was good but also some how off for me. It was a short time frame with a kind of insta everything. I usually don't mind that with fated mates situations but this was not that. There was animosity on day one then adoration two days later from the two promised. No unavoidable biological instincts included. Then there was the long but short unbelievable and unreasonable angst. This all happens over 2 maybe 3 weeks. They had jobs, daily errands, went on quests, and had recovery times from injuries in that time. They met new people and made connections that felt inorganic and forced. Then poof they have put together a new legendary justice league force and the trio is sexing it up so is all good? Also ngl I was hoping for Coree to be a fourth. I mean why not? He is such an important person to Remi. I wanted them to be together more than I wanted the trio. I make all these complaints but still want to read the next book.
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1,909 reviews289 followers
May 26, 2025
I do love entering a Megan Derr world and this one was another great place.

Remi was so sweet I loved him from the start. Elajih and Markia took a little longer to warm up too. I still wish we had seen a change before the Dragonslayer was revealed.

Coree was another I fell in love with and I hope to read his story one day.

My biggest niggle was the Dragon, I really prefer good dragons to bad lol.

Overall a good start to a new series.
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777 reviews
January 17, 2024
This started so good, but lost the magic on the way. I don’t know if it was really the writing or that Elajih or Makia were 1 or 2 dimensional. I liked Remi and the initial adventures with the dragon and how he came to be the Dragonslayer, but that’s it. His romance with his promised was not convincing. They changed their mind as soon as they learned who he really was and I didn’t like that, the whole change of behaviour towards Remi. I felt sorry for Remi throughout the whole book. Anyway, it was somehow entertaining.
Profile Image for ReviewerLarissa.
718 reviews33 followers
December 31, 2023
Classic Derr and way better than the other stories that were recently released.

A good fantasy story with plenty angsty and adventure and action and romance. Couldn’t put it down as I really wanted to know what happened to Remi!
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328 reviews1 follower
May 11, 2026
2.5 stars. What a strong start that went absolutely nowhere interesting!

I was immediately hooked by the premise: Remi is the sixth child (and unplanned to boot) and is the only solider in his fur trading family. When a dragon attacks his village he almost singlehandedly manages to kill it and (to his horror) is awarded the coveted title of Ser Dragonslayer. His family now are all fussing over him and have arranged a marriage to a very prosperous merchant couple (most relationships are triads in this world). Wanting to escape his trauma/the village fawning over him, Remi immediately leaves to settle into his new life with his promised. Except when he arrives, he discovers his promised, Elijah and Maika, want nothing to do with him.

All of this takes up the first third of the book and promises some really interesting dynamics. An unwanted spouse coming into an established relationship, Remi’s PTSD from killing the dragon (not to mention the myriad of physical changes in the aftermath — a result of touching the dragon’s heartstone), and Remi’s emotional issues from being ignored by his family. Unfortunately almost none of these really interesting ideas are explored.

Elijah and Maika’s resistance to the marriage has nothing to do with the fact they have been a couple for 18 years and have never been interested in a third and/or have concerns about introducing someone new to their relationship. Instead, the issue is that Remi’s family strong armed them into the marriage as part of their trading contract and Elijah and Maika believed Remi was in on it. Though what exactly they suspected Remi of being in on isn’t exactly clear — being sneaky and supportive of underhanded business practices?

After a few days both Elijah and Maika realized they were wrong about Remi being shitty (?) and do an immediate 180 and want to court/fuck/marry him. This tension is what I thought the core of the plot was and I was so disappointed about how quickly everything is cleared up. We see very little of this thawing on page and there is no slow burn. I wanted to see more of Elijah and Maika’s relationship— there was a reason they never brought in a third before but we never learn it! Unfortunately this was not the slow burn angsty, three people thrown together and figuring out how to make it work book that I wanted.

Once the 180 occurred, this was pretty much a conflict free insta love. There was almost no chemistry and very little relationship development. We really only get generic Flirty Banter ™ when all three characters are together. I ended the book with no real sense of either Elijah or Maika, other than Elijah is the merchant and was hot tempered when younger and Maika is a healer and from a rich family that didn’t support his marriage to Elijah. Every personality trait and relationship detail is told, not shown and it left me supremely uninterested.

We also don’t ever get any clarify on what exactly Remi’s family did to force the marriage on Elijah and Maika. I was convinced that there would be some reveal on a misunderstanding in the negotiations or something. This is even supported by the fact that Remi clearly has an incomplete view of his family and their status. Remi tells us that his family is in well-regarded as furriers, but not particularly famous or powerful. He’s from the middle of nowhere and is completely amazed that he could marry into a family as prestigious as Maika/Elijah’s. However when describing the negotiations, Elijah’s anger stems from Remi’s family “knowing how much Elijah needs the contract” and their implied upper hand in the negotiations. Additionally, many side characters seem impressed when they learn of Remi’s family and Elijah/Maika’s association with it.

Despite all of this, I think we (and Remi) are meant to immediately accept that Remi’s family did some shitty underhanded negotiations because Remi has been ignored and neglected by them for years. HOWEVER, we never see any of that on page — we are only told about it. The only time we see the family on page is post-dragonslaying, where they are extremely attentive and invested in him (though perhaps a bit too coddling and withholding important dragonslaying related information from him). I believe the intention was to contrast this attention with their previous neglect and fuel Remi’s insecurity that people will only care about him because of his deeds. Unfortunately this contrast completely fails because we never see any of that neglect on page. It failed so much that I assumed Remi was just an unreliable narrator and we would later learn his family Loved Him All Along. Not the case.

Another thread that left me disappointed was Remi’s underdeveloped trauma from his dragonslaying and all the physical/mental changes he developed. After slaying the dragon Remi is now faster and stronger, can’t ever get cold and feels extreme heat as mild, is obsessed with the color red, and is deeply possessive of his heart jewel (which he gives to his friends/lovers and can use to tell where they are?). These are a lot of dramatic changes, compounded with the trauma of watching 20 of his friends be brutally murdered. I wished we had gotten a complex exploration of how all these changes impacted Remi, ie frustration with never eating hot food, anger at taking on characteristics of a dragon who killed his friends, etc. Unfortunately we hear a ton about these changes (including being told Remi spends several days reading seven whole books about the extent of the changes) but never get any emotional reflection from Remi about them. It’s basically reduced to “bummer things aren’t hot anymore, but I have some cool powers.” Like the rest of the book, it felt underdeveloped and unrealistically easy and positive.

It’s crazy that I have listed so many issues and have not even touched on the fact that the second half of the book is focused on taking down a bandit ring that has been killing Elijah’s workers and stealing his wares. There was plenty going on without this subplot and it was so unnecessary. It was pretty much just a way for Remi to show off his special powers and impressively beat up on people before anything bad happened. Sure.

My final and most hater take is I really dismliked the found family of Legendaries that was assembled by the end of the book. Remi’s best friend becomes a wintermark (basically a dragonslayer but with cold), they rescue a Berserker who instantly becomes their BFF, and to top it off, a sineater comes to town (who the bandits were going to to kidnap but Remi foiled) and also instantly becomes their BFF. I barely know anything about the two love interests why are we introducing all these random characters???

This book started off with do much potential and upset me how much it squandered all those interesting plot threads.
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737 reviews6 followers
June 13, 2025
light, fluffy, quick: 4 stars because Remi's heartfelt yearning to be loved tugged at my own heart repeatedly. Will hit the spot of you're not looking for deep literature and want a quick read to make you smile. Warrior/ Endearing Remi's desire to be loved for himself, and not just how useful he is as a solider or a pawn in the marriage market, was quite well written.

The romance part where the other 2 (Elijih the merchant and Makia the master healer) accepting and suddenly loving Remi was a bit abrupt. Given how they treated him to start it's not clear WHY Remi would even want to join them? That said, I ate this up and would love to read Corree's story!!
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2,997 reviews67 followers
June 27, 2023
I was going to make this last, but that turned out to be impossible.

This is a fantastic start to a new fantasy series. Great characters causing tension throughout the plot, great world and magic system, I laughed, I cried, I want the next book. It could've used another edit pass, particularly in the second half, but that's true of a lot of self- and small press publishing. And, I couldn't care, which is why this earned five stars.
1,499 reviews
June 29, 2023
Derr has a way of hitting the sweet spot with the hurt/comfort and misunderstandings tropes I adore, and this book is rife with both of those tropes, relatable characters, and the found family I wish I had (minus the inconvenient curses). As always, too, the sex is sizzling hot and also tender.
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12 reviews
January 4, 2026
I loved this book! The story, even though simple, introduces quite a few interesting characters! And the evolution of the relationship was beautiful in my opinion, even if the plot remains fairly simple and the world-building a bit underdeveloped.
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1,218 reviews4 followers
June 17, 2023
hero with scars

A fresh take on a fantasy world, with guards and soldiers needed to fight off all the monsters that share the land with humans.

Realistic country boy with his own quirks and passions (and survivor’s guilt) winds up a hero at the expense of all his friend’s lives, making the accolades both bittersweet and triggering.

Builds tension in the will-they/won’t-they relationship between Remi and his reluctant spouses, I wasn’t certain if he’d wind up with them or some other type of relationship. Marriage for Remi is about alliance and doing right by the family business. While he hopes for affection and romance, but more that that, he wants the family from his hometown to thrive, and marrying well is his sacrifice.
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28 reviews
November 12, 2023
I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!I LOVED IT!

OMG, this book is so freaking good. I don't even know how to explain it. The story feels like a D&D game; I loved the characters. Remi is so cute; all I want to do is give him a hug and tell him everything is going to be okay. Makia and Elajih are an amazing couple and incredible love interests for our protagonist. The way they care for Remi makes my heart warm (in a good way).

But honestly, my favorite character so far is Coree. I don't know how to explain it, the relationship he have with Remi is so wholesome; he is incredible.

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS BOOK.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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964 reviews3 followers
November 23, 2025
Wonderful story! I can't get enough of it. ❤️

This book is gold! I love it so dang much. Remi is so cool! He's such a sweetheart, and he's so brave. I'm so happy he gets his happy ever after. He and Coree are so funny together. I love their banter. They made me laugh all the way through this story. I love them. I love Remi's promised. I'm glad they recognized he's a gem. They're so hot together. This book is so well written. I can't wait for more in this series!

I've read this book 4 times now. I hope it will be available in audio sometime. I would love to be able to listen to it.
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565 reviews39 followers
April 8, 2025
There were parts of this story I really enjoyed, primarily Remi dealing with the aftermath of the dragon attack and how it changed both himself and his social circumstances, and how he struggled to come to terms with it all. I also loved his relationship with Coree.

The romance however fell completely flat for me. His husbands hated him on sight but turned to instant love and attraction on a dime and it felt forced and emotionally unsatisfying.
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193 reviews
March 1, 2024
Yashhh, it's fantasy, romance and threesome . What more could you asked for.
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Author 8 books41 followers
March 2, 2024
I want to give this four stars and it was definitely enjoyable but... well, while I am not a hardcore Derr fan, I feel like this is such a Derr book, which is funny because if anything, I should say this is a Mary Calmes books. Because that's where this style of writing is super prominent, I read more of her books and that is where my taste for this style of character handling got super, duper old and annoying. But I actually enjoyed this and for a few blissful chapters didn't even notice what was happening so... Derr style.

What style is that? It's like special-snowflake trope except it's for the whole book. You take a super competent, kind, take-no-BS character (in this case, a Guy) and you put him in a "hovel". Maybe he has abusive parents or he has a low-paying and/or degrading job or he has no friends or all or some of the above combined with something else. He is not just a "poor boy" he is "What a poor boy!!!" and I guess you should feel sorry for him but he doesn't feel like he's that unlucky so you don't have to feel too sorry. Guy has to do something/go somewhere, usually against his will but he prevails upon this circumstance and finally, someone, usually a group of someone, finally notices what a Special Snowflake he is. But of course, there are more people so he goes/does something else and suddenly another group of people is forced to acknowledge his Amazing-Good-Perfect-Ness. Somewhere in there, he meets his The One (in this case, two of them) and they are also dazzled. I'd say the Love Interest(s) is not so easily dazzled to make him different from the masses but the only difference is with how much we see the LI being resistant before he becomes the biggest baddest superfan of them all.

In this beautiful fantasy piece, we also meet Other Special Snoflakes. They are not very obvious at first sight, you see. Just like the ignorant side characters, we have to be shown just how Special they are (there will be more books in this series so we have several).

I think you can see how and why I might have gotten tired of this particular style. (If not, this is FOR YOU). But I am glad I found enjoyment in this one and hey, maybe I just need a fresh take on what, I admit, I enjoyed for several books before that and may do so in the future.

Also, sorry, for making this review so vague and all about the style but it's really a nicely vague description of this book as well and I do recommend it honestly and heartily enough.
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1,229 reviews48 followers
August 4, 2025
Remi (25) was a unplanned and unwanted baby, born after his parents thought they were done having kids. He comes from a poor family. They provided for his physical needs, but didn't care much about his emotional needs. Remi's family is in the furrier business. But Remi has his own job in the military. He is an enlisted man at the village garrison.

Coree (25) has been Remi's best friend since childhood. He is also enlisted at the garrison.

Humans have to defend their villages from paranormal creatures. One day, a rare dragon attacks Remi's village. Most of the men from the garrison are killed in the attack. Coree is badly wounded, but survives. Remi manages to kill the dragon.

Remi wakes up from a coma. His family tells him they've arranged a marriage for him. It's been in the works for months, but they never told him till now. (They never tell him much of anything on any topic.)

They worship a deity with two spouses, so their traditional family is made of 3 spouses. Remi is betrothed (promised) to an established couple. He's contracted to live with the couple for a 3 month trial period. Then they can decide to marry or not.

While Remi's been in a coma from fighting the dragon, the villagers have been mistreating Coree because he survived. They start rumors that he tried to run away, etc. (Which was not true.) So when Remi travels to the city to his promised couple, he takes Coree with him.

As soon as Remi arrives, his 2 promised, Eliajih and Makia, tell him outright that Remi's parents blackmailed them into the arrangement. After the 3 month trial period, they won't agree to the marriage. Remi decides to stay the 3 months and fulfil the contract, because if he left, he'd ruin his family's business.

Elajih and Makia made the arrangement before Remi slayed the dragon, so nobody told them that Remi is the one who did it. Remi doesn't say anything either, because he's trying to avoid fame and recognition.

This book has a medieval setting. Eliajih and Makia are in an import/export business. Their shipments were being attacked by bandits. Remi is required to protect the shipments while he's there for the trial period. So there's a lot of stuff in the book about that. The group of bandits is actually trying to collect the four "legendaries": berserker, sineater, wintermark, and dragonslayer. They already have a berserker and a wintermark. Remi and Coree free the berserker, and she joins them in their quest to free the wintermark.

Meanwhile, the head of the bandit ring shows up at Eliajih and Makia's house intending to kill them. Remi comes home and the bandits try to set him on fire in the fireplace, but killing the dragon made him immune to fire. He kills the bandits.

Eliajih and Makia obviously figure out he's the dragonslayer. They are immediately much nicer to him. But he wants to be loved, for who he is, not for slaying the dragon. They insist they were going to tell him the day before that they really do like him, but Remi didn't come home till they were busy being held hostage.

So, right at the end, Eliajih and Makia decide they love Remi. Remi's so desperate to be loved that he just goes along with it.

Coree always wanted to travel the world, and he leaves to start his travels at the end of the book.

This book is mostly about the bandits and the legendaries. The throuple has almost no interaction. It was still an interesting story. I liked Remi a lot, and his friendship with Coree.
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46 reviews1 follower
March 16, 2026
Decent story; insulting proofreading

As is all too common with Derr’s books, the plot is engaging, but there are a lot of issues. The characters are recycled, the banter is tepid and tired, and the worldbuilding, usually a strength, is lacking in this book. The Legendaries are interesting, with unusual abilities, and the abilities are probably the most creative element of the book, but that by itself doesn’t constitute the kind of colorful, imaginative culture and delightful background tidbits that I’ve always looked forward to when I buy one of Derr’s books. And, frustratingly but unsurprisingly, the copy editing/proofreading is nonexistent. All too often, the reader has to supply words (and occasionally remove them) to make sense of sentences, which is egregious. Homophones are used incorrectly (“to” in place of “too,” for instance), which should be caught by a simple grammar check. It’s true that a writer shouldn’t proof their own words, but geez, Megan Derr always credits Samantha M. Derr as her editor. Does “M” stand for Megan? Is English a second language for Samantha? Even if Samantha is reading as a developmental editor only, couldn’t she be talked into doing a final read-through to catch these glaring errors? Crowdsourced editing is a thing now and can be used for generating ARC reviews on the day a book goes live, as well. I, myself, would be happy to do the proofreading for nothing but a copy of the finished book. I might not be perfect, but just being able to read a mostly error-free Derr story would be worth the effort. I used to one-click every book, but I only buy a couple of the most intriguing ones now because I know that she doesn’t respect her paying readers enough to actually finish her work, and I don’t want to encourage that kind of casual insult. All in all, this is uninspired, a far cry from earlier series like Unbreakable Soldiers, Dance with the Devil, or Tavamara.
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2,872 reviews13 followers
September 2, 2023
A truly phenomenal book!

Remi is the forgotten child so when his parents let him know they have made a match he thinks it cannot be anything big. Dreading that news everything gets delayed when a dragon attacks his hometown and he sets out with his fellow soldiers to defend the town, fully believing he will die. Instead Remi kills the dragon and finds himself changed and in a town that both worships and fears him. Desperate to get away from it all he heads to meet his new betrothed, but to find that they don't want him either.

This book starts off truly heart breaking a really rakes some time to build away from that. Though Remi doesn't whine or act down on himself, he has pretty much always been the forgotten child. Youngest of his siblings, too young to be close to them, he has felt apart from the family traditions and the things that are received. He becomes accustomed to expecting little help as he finds his own way, while still ensuring to support his family and not be a burden. Defeating a dragon puts new focus on him that he doesn't enjoy when he feels that having allowed the dragon to kill others was a failure rather than a heroic action. Even when his betrothed reject him, he is heartbroken and bereft, as he had secretly hoped this would be a love all his own, but determined not to let it break his contract and loyal to following through with the job promised side of it all. As he shows himself to be loyal and steadfast despite the cold reception it brings to question just what the problem his betrothed have with the situation is. As Remi proves himself to his betrothed they must also prove themselves to him, showing him that he is worthy of love and allowed to expect love and trust in return. It was a truly beautiful book and one I expect to visit again many times in the future.
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362 reviews51 followers
March 30, 2025
4.5🌟
At first the beginning of this book was confusing but I have never been this scared for someone’s life within just a few chapters because Remi how did he just chase off a dragon like that I was shouting don’t die don’t die but homeboy just had to do it I’m glad he saved the village but he almost lost his life doing it

Anyway I was more worried about the arranged marriage the way it was giving and the way his parents were going about it buying him all these things which was cute at first until you realize they weren’t even being nice about it but because it’s Remi and he loves his family he just went with it still I was worried and they proved me right because the men involved hated him from the start

Anyway I’m glad we got that out of the way because the way they warmed up to each other oh Makai and Elajih they are crazy Makai it was very obvious who ran the house the moment I met him Elajih is so so mischievous while Remi is a brat and I loved that dynamic and it wasn’t just about Remi being a dragon slayer they warmed up to him because of the things he liked the way he defended their shop the way he cared stuff like that that’s what made them grow closer and it was so cute and nice to see

I also loved the found family aspect I wasn’t expecting it I thought it was just going to be Coree but then more people came and then more and suddenly there was this really cutesy found family and I loved it

Oh and let me tell you if you’re picking up this book for romance you’re getting crumbs the action far more than the romance but when the romance did come it was sweet the random kisses the kisses kisses kisses they just could not get enough of each other they were clingy in the cutest way yeah I know so nice

Ahhh this book was a fun read
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1,553 reviews7 followers
September 10, 2023
Dragon Red, Dragon Fled

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The start of a new series, this book has interesting complexities.

Remira Draden was unexpected. Born when his parents had left off child rearing, he was treated as an afterthought. His clothes were always reworked hand-me-downs; his space was always where he could find it. He learned the family business, but he was never slated to inherit it, and so, was never taught its secrets.

To earn money, he joined the local garrison, though he was usually home on the weekends, to help with the furs. His best friend, Coree, also joined the garrison, and was also the youngest son.

But things changed drastically, when a dragon was sighted outside their village. There had been no warning, and they were ill prepared to deal with this type of monster. But they suited up with what they had to hand, and proceeded to try to protect the village and their families.

No training in the use of dragon fighting weaponry, their small complement of guards, and only a smattering of knowledge of dragon lore, didn’t stop them from ranging out to protect and defend. Arrows and spears, swords and minimal armor, were no match for the fire breathing, man eating red dragon in the near valley, but they tried.

Twenty-one died. Remi, refusing to let their deaths be in vain, kept fighting, kept attacking, kept immobilizing. He slew the dragon. Then remembered that he needed to get the heartstone, lest the fire of the dragon explode and destroy the village. The blood of the red dragon burns like fire. Remi was forever changed.

And his parents have a use for him.
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