Well, at least I got closure. I feel like a shoulder devil waving my little pitchfork around saying all sorts of bad things again, sigh, but Girl of Nightmares is almost a complete letdown. I'm not the biggest fan of Anna Dressed in Blood, but Anna still managed to be dark and very disturbing when it needed to, this sequel doesn't even come close. Rather than stepping up her game, filling up this sequel with scenes even more visually haunting and memorably terrifying, Kendare Blake doubles down on exactly the parts of the first book I found lacking, the mythology behind the athame and Cas and Anna's relationship.
I can't believe I'm saying this, but nothing really happens, twenty six or seven of Girl of Nightmare's thirty chapters border on the tedious and dull. Anna had some standout, genuinely creepy scenes, whether it was Cas seeing Anna for the first time, or the corpses in the basement of Anna's Victorian house, or the Obeahman attacking and eating various characters, Girl just doesn't conjure up those terrifying images like Anna did. Really, I can't for the life of me point out anything in this book that got anywhere close to the same reaction from me as those scenes from Anna did. Cas's first kill of the book in an abandoned barn, didn't really feel the suspense. The attack of the corpses in the suicide forest, meh, a bit too late in the game. The final showdown with the Obeahman, really more satisfying on a emotional level than as a terror inducing nightmare. All in all, I'm gonna sleep soundly tonight. I don't know why, but the atmosphere has completely shifted from the first book, it doesn't feel chilling and creepy, just confusing and depressing. Anna was already skating on thin ice as a horror book, it's really more of a darker ghost busting actioner about a boy trying to kill a murdering ghost than a true horror novel, but Girl is just simply not terrifying - at all.
Instead of eerie hauntings, gruesome corpses, and a story about a boy trying to kill a cursed ghost girl who's already killed dozens of people, I get a story about the boy trying to bring the girl back from beyond. It just feels completely different. Cas himself admits there's really no urgency, rather everyone around him just tells him it can't be done - except he'll suddenly get a tip from the same people who just told him it couldn't be done and move along the trail of breadcrumbs to the next clue. There's research, metaphysical debates, really the entire first half of this book can pretty much be summed up as Morfran or Gideon telling Cas, nope you can't bring Anna back, impossible, nothing good can come of it, while Cas himself considers believing them, thinking yep he's crazy, until he sees Anna again and forces Morfran or Gideon to give him another hint. All the secrecy and lying by people who actually know what's going on just to stretch out the story, I can't believe a killer ghost plot has come to this.
Maybe I would've liked this book more if I'd actually cared about the athame from Anna Dresed in Blood instead of just accepted it as a plot device to drive the ghost busting action, but I doubt it. All the new stuff about the Order behind the creation of the athame, why are we wasting time with them when we can be killing more ghosts? Politics can be terrifying, I know, but wrong kind of horror. If I can use a television analogy, Anna already felt more like Supernatural than a horror movie, Girl is like Charmed. Less creepy, more soapy drama, talk about magic and magical organizations, and the odd special effects enhanced demon fighting ghost busting scene. Hey, Cas, Thomas, and Carmel can be Prue, Piper, and Phoebe, new girl Jestine can be Paige! Dammit, that thought might be more terrifying than anything in the book ... although it's oddly appropriate, Carmel has weird emotional problems too leading to an unexplained about face and Jestine's also the perfect yet straight laced new character.
My biggest complaint though's still reserved for Cas and Anna. I don't like Cas. He's cocky, condescending, and now I can add moody to the list of his faults. He's not as bad here as he was in Anna, at least this time around I haven't found that choice quote I can throw into this review to show just how incredibly full of himself he is, but in a book that's all about making me sympathize with him, nope, it's hard nearly impossible for me to care. Once I figured out the focus of this sequel isn't on killing ghosts but is basically the Cas show, a part of me couldn't wait to get out of jackass angst central, now that there's really not much horror to distract me. And as for him and Anna, wow, can I say massive instalove? I still have no idea why he likes Anna, although it's nice this time around he can throw out the good old standby lines about admiration and understanding. But that really doesn't explain much, does it? Also, let me just say Cas uses the word love to describe his relationship with Anna exactly once, and it's not even awkward, because nobody bats an eyelash and it's just dropped. Umm.
I'm disappointed. But I'm going to grudgingly admit I like this book for one reason and one reason only, the closure I got from the last few chapters. The one thing I think Girl of Nightmares does right is wrap up this two book series, not just Anna's story, but also Cas's, his friends', his father's, heck even Will's and Chase's, in a way that I really feel does a lot of justice for these characters. 2.5 stars.