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The Violet Fox

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Run.
That’s what instinct told me.
But in order to save the secrets of my people
and to protect my brother
I have to become the enemy.


There are two kinds of people in the land of Marlenia.

The Marlenians, who live on the surface,

and the Freetors, who are forced to live underground.

The war between them ended two hundred years ago, but the Freetors still fight for the right to live under the sun. Fifteen-year-old Kiera Driscoll embodies the Freetors’ hopes as the Violet Fox. In a violet cape and mask, she sneaks around Marlenia City stealing food and freeing her people from slavery.

Then the Elders task her with a secret mission: retrieve a stolen tome that contains the secrets of Freetor magic, something the Marlenians both fear and covet. Kiera must disguise herself as a noblewoman and infiltrate the Marlenian castle before the Freetor-hating Advisor finds out her real identity, before her brother is imprisoned because of the secrets he hides, and before she falls any more in love with the prince she’s supposed to hate.

More is happening in the castle than she realizes, and Kiera is faced with a difficult choice. Will she be loyal to her people and their fight for freedom, or will she be loyal to her heart?

288 pages, Paperback

First published October 11, 2012

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Clare C. Marshall

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Clare C. Marshall grew up in rural Nova Scotia with very little television and dial-up internet, and yet she turned out okay. Her YA sci-fi novel Dreams In Her Head was nominated for Canada's 2014 Creation of Stories award. She is a full-time freelance editor, book designer, ghostwriter, and web manager. If there’s time left in the day, she devotes it to Faery Ink Press, her publishing imprint. When she’s not writing or fiddling up a storm, she enjoys computer games and making silly noises at cats.

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Profile Image for Christina (Ensconced in Lit).
984 reviews290 followers
September 10, 2012
I was asked by the author to review this book; this does not bias my review.

The Violet Fox is a fun filled adventure about Kiera, a young spunky girl, who is the masked "Violet Fox" who basically steals from the rich Marlenians in order to feed her people, the poor Freetors. The Elders tell her it is time to infiltrate the castle and get information about hidden magic that may destroy them, so Kiera is sent to the castle in disguise as a beautiful princess from the North. She catches the Prince's eye... and he catches hers. Kiera once thought her life was black and white, but she soon learns that things are not what they seem.

There is a lot to like about the Violet Fox. There were a lot of unexpected twists and fun characters. I liked the Prince a lot, as well as the creepy Ambassador. I also enjoyed that the back story ended up being more complex instead of one set of people being evil and the other good.

I had a couple of issues with the book. One is that Kiera is almost too arrogant. I cringed a couple of times when she puffed out her chest and talked about how much better she was than anyone else as the "Violet Fox." I know that some of this is probably intentional, to show how much she evolves over the book. I guess I was a bit disappointed that there wasn't more internal dialogue about how her opinions were changing. Instead, it just felt that a man was the reason for her change in heart, not because she was growing herself.

That said, this was a fast paced adventure and fun to read.
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Author 3 books16 followers
June 13, 2020
Despite how I enjoy insulting bad books in private conversations, it's not that fun to write bad reviews. Making fun of a book in chat is one thing, but to have to write a one star review is another. For a book to be one star for me, it has to not just be generically bad. It has to be offensive, annoying, and, most of all, have gotten my hopes up. I didn't come into this expecting a masterpiece. I wanted some lighthearted, dumb fun, and it didn't even deliver on that.
My first problem: a history of slavery and oppression told through the eyes of a cocky white girl. Yes, white people have been slaves. However, that doesn't continue to affect them to this day like it does Black people so it feels gross to have that narrative told by an unlikeable white brat. Which brings me to my second problem: the main character, Kiera, is so, so, so unlikeable. She's cocky. She's spiteful. She's violent. Yet we're supposed to like her. Every woman around her, barring a friend we barely see, is watched with a scathing eye, portrayed as fat, ugly, and "slutty" (read: wears a low cut dress and wants to marry a prince. Oh, the horror). Sometimes, dialogue lines take detours just to call the love rival fat and I start to wonder if this is the person who wrote all the Fat Monica Jokes from Friends. It’s not funny, it’s not cute, and it’s not a reason to dislike someone, but I suppose we’re supposed to roll our eyes at the foolishness of a “fat girl” thinking she can end up with the prince. That’s worse, though. That’s gross.
Almost worse is when Kiera looks down on them for being catty and arrogant when she was just thinking about how she's prettier and better than them. It reads less like an actual published novel, and more like a power trip written in the notebook of a petty high schooler. No shade to petty high schoolers, I get that coping mechanisms are needed to get through school but usually they don't get published and find their way into my unfortunate hands.
Also, Kiera is a Mary Sue. She's good at everything. Okay, she's bad at some things, but here's the problem: she suffers almost no consequences for what she's bad at. In order for something to be a character flaw, it NEEDS to be treated as a flaw by those around them. But no, everyone loves or grudgingly respects her and even though she's a reckless child she gets the super special mission. Gag me.
Also, she takes the place of a noblewoman to infiltrate the palace. Sounds fun, right? Wrong. Because said noblewoman's dialogue is written in an exaggerated and unidentifiable accent that makes it hard to read. This means Kiera imitates it for the rest of the damn book. Not only is writing accents like that borderline offensive, the fact that it makes the dialogue slow to read destroys what little immersion it had to offer, because there are some genuinely good descriptions to be found in these pages. And oh, the hypocrisy! Kiera and her people beating up a woman and enjoying it is completely fine, but the enemies beating up one of her people is despicable! What the hell.
What makes it worse, what makes it so, so much worse, is that there are so many places where this could have been a good book. There are times when Kiera’s sue-ness is barely noticeable and the plot becomes interesting… and then either she does or says something ultimately mediocre that's portrayed as the most amazing and revolutionary thing, or another young woman comes into the scene and she's invariably portrayed as a tittering moron, and that brief moment where I enjoyed it is gone.
Let me be clear in one thing: yes, these women own slaves and should not be shown in a positive light. But showing them as stupid is not the right way of saying owning slaves is bad. Writing the women as being nothing but vapid and shallow while the men are all scheming and intelligent does nothing but imply that the women are too stupid to have a thought that maybe this is wrong. It diminishes their contribution to a cruel system, and a woman's autonomy to be as good or evil as she wants based on what her goals are. It lets you dismiss it as "oh, she's just too stupid to know it's wrong!" and erases her culpability in everything. It is not, not, not the right way to write women on the wrong side of history. How do you do it, then? Make them smart. Make them have more goals than just marrying a prince and being a rival of the main character. Make them have enough basic intelligence to be held accountable for the horrors they're involved in.
Just don't do this. The slavery narrative is already hard to pull off respectfully, and this book is basically How Not To Do It 101.
If you want a forbidden love, Cinderella-esque tale with a competition for a prince, I beg you When Wishes Bleed. It doesn't pit women against each other, it doesn't imply that being fat is a reason to dislike someone, and the love is much less shallow. You're even still supporting an indie author by buying it.
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673 reviews1,720 followers
October 22, 2012
Giveaway on my blog! http://somelikeitparanormall.blogspot...

Fantasy is a real hit or miss with me and I'm so happy this was such a hit! Kiera is a Freetor, living under the surface, having to steal from the Marlenians above in order to eat and survive. Two hundred years ago there was a war which drove her people underground. The elders have the power of magic and must keep it protected since it is the one thing the Marlenians fear. When a tome holding the secret of Freetor magic goes misssing, Kiera must pretend to be a Marlenian noble woman to find it and return it. Living as the enemy becomes a problem as she begins falling for the Marlenian Prince Keegan.

Kiera was a very strong character. She put herself at risk daily to help bring in food for her people and to free slaves. She wore the Violet Fox costume to raise hope and to show the Marlenians that the Freetors were a strong force and would never back down. Though to be fair there was a lot of mistreatment and prejudices on both sides. The Marlenians were doing horrible things but the Freetors did some horrible things back. Like kidnapping Lady Dominique so Kiera could take her place. Lady Dominique was indeed an awful girl but probably did not deserve to be held captive. But then Lady Dominique would mention cutting out Freetor tongues and I would understand where Kiera was coming from. Right and wrong can be hard to decide when your people and family are murdered and starving.

Kiera becomes Lady Dominique and heads to Prince Keegan's birthday celebration. Kiera takes along her brother Rordan and other Freetors undercover. Kiera tried to pretend to be the Marlenian hating noble woman but can't help challenging Keegan's beliefs. Keegan begins to see why a Freetor may act the way they do and how they are just trying to survive. Keegan began to seem like a great guy but when he thought Rordan was Kiera's lover I thought he became kind of selfish. Kiera asked him to help protect Rordan and I didn't feel like he tried hard enough. At first I excused this because I thought The Advisor was to blame. Keegan couldn't go against him. But then when secrets and twists came out about The Advisor I blamed him for the awful things that happened. It was just such a huge thing and I felt like Kiera should have held them more responsible since I was pretty upset! I'm kind of off on a tangent that probably makes no sense until you read it and because I'm trying not to spoil it, but I just wanted a bigger reaction out of Kiera for something so horrible that happened to someone close to her. I did understand that there was a lot of pressure to stick with the mission and to keep her cover as a Marlenian.

The Violet Fox was a very exciting fantasy with great world building. I could picture their underground home perfectly. The romance had a very realistic feel and I was happy there was no love triangle. Plenty of action kept me turning the pages and there were lots of twists, one big one I especially did not see coming at all! And I am not easily shocked with plots twists. I also really felt the emotion through the characters and one really shocking and depressing scene literally had me in tears. I'm still upset lol But there was humor as well to offset the somewhat depressing plot. Seeing Kiera go from rags to riches and impersonating a noble woman had me laughing at times. The ending was a nice wrap up of the events of book one but also set up all the work Kiera and Keegan have for the next book. Very excited to see where the series goes next!

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My shoes touched a soft surface, and I was momentarily set off balance. I stopped and stared at the red surface, testing it gingerly with my pointed shoe.
"It's called carpet, Sis." Rordan muttered. "Let's keep going."
"It's like...grass," I whispered. "But it's inside."

"The court never allows a lady to reveal herself," Keegan replied. "Please...allow me to know you."

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*I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review*
Profile Image for Megan.
1,884 reviews52 followers
October 26, 2012
I loved this book. To me, it was sort of Robin Hood mixed with Mockingjay mixed with a fairy tale with a little bit of The Time Machine sprinkled in all rolled up into one story. I had no idea what to expect and while there were tons of elements from other popular stories, I thought it was a unique and well executed idea with a strong female heroine. The cover is also stunning and caught my eye when I was asked to participate in the blog tour.

The world building in this novel was superb. I felt like I really understood the way people lived and thought and the prejudices they kept. The characters were also well done and complex and believable. I loved Kiera as a character. She was strong and valiant and opinionated and cared a lot about her people, enough to become The Violet Fox, a symbol for her people. I say that the story reminds me a bit of Mockingjay and there are similarities that I think other readers will enjoy between Katniss and Kiera. I prefer Kiera mostly because even though they were both strong symbols of revolt in their worlds, Katniss was accidentally symbolic and Kiera was The Violet Fox on purpose.

The Violet Fox was a bit of a superhero and a Robin Hood and I loved that Kiera had the guts to go onto the surface with the Marlenian people dressed in violet and wearing a mask, despite being the most wanted Freetor. She got herself into some sticky situations, but she had no fear. I also loved the close relationship she had with her brother, who kept her grounded. When she took on the mission to stay in the castle as a noblewoman, I realized how little fear she really had. As long as she was doing the right thing for her people, she was fearless. She chose to be the Violet Fox, but she didn't hide behind a mask or a persona. She truly wanted to help her people and did what she had to do. She learned the ways of the Marlenian people enough to fit in flawlessly and that’s where the story really took some twists and turns.

Kiera grew as a character as she was imitating a Marlenian. She finally saw things from their point of view and it changed her in many ways. Still, she continued to do the right thing and kept close to her brother. She questioned many of the actions of the Marlenians and drew the attention of the prince, who was intrigued by her outbursts. This is where Kiera's convictions aren't quite so clear to her and she struggles with preconcieved notions. From this point, I felt like the characters were believable and the story was real because of the decisions and emotions all of the characters had to deal with and overcome.

This story had tons of eventful scenes and adventure, but the thing I liked most about it was how the characters grew and how different elements came together at the end. It was well written and descriptive from Kiera’s point of view. There were a lot of twists as the story progressed, making it entirely unpredictable to me. Even when I thought I had things figured out, I was wrong.

I would definitely recommend this to others. Kiera’s strength as a female character was refreshing. I cannot wait to read the sequel. While this book ends at a good stopping point, I am excited that there will more to the story!
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523 reviews143 followers
October 28, 2012
Be sure to check out the ongoing book tour, I have a review, first 3 chapters, and a giveaway at my stop, there is a fun scavenger hunt as well.



This book really impressed me, it really left an impression on me as well, it was so well written, it pulled me in right from the first few pages. It had me thinking about it for a week. In fact, before I decided to do the book tour, I read the first 3 chapters that is up free by the author, for anyone to get a taste, and I was hooked, I signed up right away, and anxiously awaited for the review copy of the book. I started to read right away, even though I really should have been reading other tour books first, but could not help myself, it was THAT good, so I read and finished in less than 2 days, and it’s not a short book, just could not put it down.
I am going to keep this as spoiler free as I can. I do not want to spoil anything.

This book has such a great story, I am not even sure of the target audience, but think all ages above 16 or so will really enjoy it. There were parts that reminded me of classic fairy tales, like Cinderella (more like the movie Ever After with Drew Barrymore, in fact one line in the movie was in this book too, but will not tell you what it is, and by no means is it a copy of the movie, just like one sentence is all, and I loved it)

In this story, we have some magic, the people who have this magic are called Freetors, and have been forced to live underground by the Marlenian people. Seems in their history, that the Marlenian wanted the magic for themselves, but the Freetor’s Elders refused to give up the secret, so they were exiled, and the Elders are the only ones who know the secrets and can use it, as they do not share it freely with their people. So the Freetor’s constantly have to steal food and necessities from the surface, as they can’t live aboveground, they get executed if found. There is a lot there about all that but that is a basis on it.

The story is more about a young Freetor girl, Kiera Driscoll, aka The Violet Fox. She is one of their best runners, meaning thieves, she dresses in a violet cape and mask, and plans with others on the stealing of the food to pass out to her people, she is smart, quick, and strong willed. I love her. She is a great fun character. She has no family but her brother left, and they are really close.
I loved the suspense of the story, as Kiera has to go undercover into the enemy’s castle, to find something that was stolen from them.

I really enjoyed the budding romance that Kiera finds.
I found myself crying in one very emotional part, something very unexpected, and was a surprise to me, as it’s something you do not see too much of in books. I can’t tell you what, as it would spoil it for you. But it’s emotional for sure.
Here is a sweet part for you, non-spoiler:

And then the next thing I knew, his arms were around me again and he was kissing me. Softly at first, but then more urgently. I responded, my cheeks flushing. Some forgotten part of me knew I should stop, but she was lost in a sea of anxious passion. We fell together upon the bed, and the blankets tangled around us.
I fell asleep with his arm curled around my waist and his body curved with mine. In those precious moments I felt no regrets and surrendered to a sleep that already felt like a dream.


This is a book I can’t really say much more about, just that it’s a wonderful story, and I highly recommend it to anyone, it will satisfy the people who like romances, or historical romance, even paranormal romance, suspenseful too. It’s got a little magic, which will satisfy the paranormal lovers, but not so much to turn away the people who don’t usually read that kind of book. It really is a book most people would get hooked on. Clare Marshall does a brilliant job of writing both the sad and emotional scenes. She also weaves a complex storyline that I think will attract most audiences.

I was so happy to see it’s a series, at least another book, called The Silver Spear. Great part is, this book Violet Fox at least does not have some huge suspense filled cliffhanger. At the end of The Violet Fox, there is a short expert of the next book, and boy does it sound good. I can’t wait. I will for sure be reading it.
5 stars out of 5 for me.


Profile Image for Leela Martin.
119 reviews
May 22, 2019
I enjoyed this book, it reads really easily and it is action packed and full of surprises! I'm looking forward to reading the next books in the series.
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204 reviews11 followers
September 25, 2014
I have been having withdrawal symptoms from fantasy novels lately. I absolutely love the worlds that authors can create in this genre and am slightly obsessed with the fighting and warrior-ness and magic that goes on in a fantasy novel. So it was with great surprise that I started reading this book and found that it was indeed a fantasy novel. I really have no idea what I originally thought this was going to be about, but I was completely stoked that this would sate my imagination.

Because I am picky about fantasy novels, it takes certain qualities to make one amazing in my eyes. I mean, I will always like them, but for a book to be phenomenal in this genre, I have to immediately feel a part of the world and characters that have been created. I always talk about a feeling of regalness when I read fantasy novels. My back becomes straighter, thoughts of honour enter my mind, and I instantly become a warrior. When that happens, I know I have hit the jackpot book-wise. And here, I definitely hit the jackpot.

What to say... This book immediately sucked me in. I felt so close to the main character, Kiera. She reminded me of myself. And while her recklessness as the Violet Fox is quite dangerous and stupid at times, I...just...I loved her enthusiasm. I loved that she gets this indescribable rush when being chased by guards. Living underground in a world of uncertainty whether or not you will be alive to see the next day, her heart is what keeps her sane. I have no words right now for how amazing I think this character is.

And her brother... He keeps her in line, whether or not she likes it. He would give his life to protect her, and she his. They are just the perfect team. And while things may become disagreeable between the two, no matter what, each has the other's back. And I, for one, having a brother myself, would not want it any other way in a story.

And Kiera's friend, Laoise. I cannot wait to see what is in store for this girl. She is so sweet, but I can see a fire burning inside her that has yet to be revealed. I just have this inkling that we have not heard the last of her. She is a fighter, just like Kiera, albeit maybe not so obviously, and I just know in my heart that she will do something amazing in the story or stories to come.

I think that I am slightly obsessed with the North's accent now. You see, I have been saying dialogue in books out loud since the Harry Potter books at the age of 11. I love how it transforms me into the characters, and I especially love to do accents. So it made my day when Kiera first talks to the woman she must portray for her mission for the Elders. When the noblewoman started to speak I was like "YES! FINALLY!", because usually, unless an author writes how a character speaks his or her words, such as in this case, I have to make up my own way of speech. I loved it!! I hope more of that is portrayed in the coming novels, because it was fun to say.

This world of Freetors and Marlenians, of free men and servants, of deceit and love, is just so infinitely worth every page, sentence, paragraph, and word. It was...it took my breath away, and I have already donated to the Indiegogo campaign to help fund the second book, The Silver Spear. I believe in this project so wholeheartedly and still cannot believe how much I enjoyed this first book. There is definitely more to come, and I cannot wait until I can indulge in more of this outstanding tale.
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Author 6 books76 followers
October 21, 2018
As someone who's always loved the idea of a masked bandit and highway robberies, think Scarlet Pimpernel or Zorro, this book really appealed to me. This novel, the first in a series, is told from the point of view of Kiera. A member of an oppressed people (the Freetors), she is a freedom fighter who dons the mask and name of the Violet Fox to steal food and supplies from the rich Marlenians.

Kiera is chosen for a special mission to retrieve a missing tome of magic. She disguises herself as a kidnapped princess and alongside her brother and other Freetor spies she infiltrates the palace. The plot is fast-paced with some twists I honestly did not see coming. The characters are all really interesting, flawed and forced to make big ethical decisions. It was so the kind of internal turmoil I love to see characters go through.

I will admit that I wasn't super into the love story between Kiera and the prince who doesn't know she's really the Violent Fox, but I'm never super into love stories to begin with, and there was more enough other things I loved to make up for that. I highly recommend this to people who love a good cloak and dagger fantasy story, with a dash of romance and family drama!
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731 reviews432 followers
November 1, 2012
Some months back I was involved in the cover reveal for The Violet Fox and while the cover is eye catching the original synopsis didn't really give too much away.

Run.
That’s what instinct told me.
But in order to save the secrets of my people
and to protect my brother
I have to become the enemy.



That always tends to leave me intrigued, so I added it to my huge TBR pile and thought that it would be something that I would eventually get around to reading. Well, then I was contacted by the author who asked me to be a part of her blog tour. Clare C. Marshall is so sweet and so enthusiastic that it was impossible not to get involved and share in her excitement. So that lead to The Violet Fox being on top of that TBR pile much sooner than I anticipated and all I can say is, thank you to Clare because her book is awesome!!!!

The world is full of different classes of people and so it is in The Violet Fox. You have the Freetors who live underground and you have the Marlenians who live above ground. The Freetors are forced to steal and scrounge for what they need to survive and the Marlenians live off the land, run the businesses and live a completely different existence to the Freetors. Kiera Driscoll and her brother Rordan are fighters which is a section of Freetors who are sent above ground to steal food and wares to provide for the rest of the Freetor population. But Keira is much more than just your average fighter. She is The Violet Fox. Dressed in her cape and mask, she exudes confidence which comes from the fact that the Marlenians have never been able to catch her.

But Keira is about to be sent on a mission which will change her life and the lives of many. She is to go above ground and infiltrate the castle disguised as a Marlenian noblewoman. It is there that she catches the eye of Prince Keegan. But how will he feel once he learns that she is a Freetor who has deceived him and everyone else.

I absolutely loved the world and the strong and interesting characters that the author has created. Keira is so strong and confident as The Violet Fox but I loved that we got to see her vulnerable side as the story progressed. Rordan was such a protective brother and the direction that his storyline took threw me for six!! The romance between Keira and Prince Keegan was sweet and adorable. But I also loved that there were things that made me laugh. The authors description of Keira being prepared to infiltrate the castle was hilarious as were her descriptions of the ladies in court. I also have to say a huge thank you for not leaving us with a massive cliffhanger. Despite there being another book in the series, this one was finished off nicely by wrapping things up but also leaving us with a feeling of "what will happen next"!!

A fantastic start to the series!! If you like your books to have action, suspense, magic, romance, evil and kick ass characters, then you can't go wrong with The Violet Fox!! I'm so happy that I got to read this much sooner than anticipated and am really looking forward to reading what happens next!!

4.5/5 Stars!!

Review first poted at YA Book Addict... http://youngadultbookaddict.blogspot....
Profile Image for Courtney.
160 reviews29 followers
May 26, 2013
The Violet Fox was a delightful read. When I first read the premise, I knew this was my type of read. It has action, adventure, romance, and a strong heroine. Kiera is far from a weakling. She takes many risks, stealing as the Violet Fox, so that her people won't starve. Times are rough in the Undercity where the Freetors live. Food is scarce, and Fighters have to go on missions to the surface to steal food. The little food they steal is then rationed. If a Freetor is caught above, they are enslaved, left in the dungeon to rot, or killed in a public execution. Despite all of these dangers, Kiera continues to put her life on the line out of her concern for others. She may be reckless at times, but you have to admire her bravery and toughness. I certainly did. She seemed so much older than her fifteen years.

The Violet Fox does a great job of exploring the deep-seated animosity that exists between two different peoples. The Marlenians hate the Freetors because they refuse to hand over their magical secrets, and the Freetors hate the Marlenians because the Marlenians have exiled their people underground. Time and time again, we have seen prejudice rear its ugly head, and The Violet Fox is a perfect example of a centuries long feud. I felt the hatred between the Freetors and Marlenians was clearly shown, and it was often disturbing in its extent.

There was not a slow part in this book, as I was entertained by the subterfuge and political intrigue. I loved the description of the ladies at court, and it was amusing to have all their faults clearly displayed. I also appreciated the vivid detailing of the castle's interior, including its tapestries showing battle scenes from history. I would like to learn even more about the human god and their religion because I found it fascinating.

While I thought the romance that developed between Prince Keegan and Kiera was touching and adorable, it progressed faster than expected. When the book began, Kiera felt nothing but hatred for the prince. Yet her feelings for Keegan appear quite suddenly. There were a few holes in the plot or at least a couple of things that bugged me, but not overmuch. I wish that all of the Freetors had learned magic, instead of just the Elders and the Elder apprentices in training. I was hoping that since magic was the main reason behind the Marlenians and Freetors being enemies, that there would be more magic throughout the book. But magic doesn't really happen until the end. It was hard for me to think of the Freetors as a threat, when only select individuals know how to use magic. Though, yes, they do steal from the Marlenians and hurt the economy. In all honesty, the Freetors' lack of defenses made me wonder why they hadn't been crushed before. But there are reasons given.

I am not a fan of main characters speaking in a dialect. Even though Kiera was in disguise, I hated having to read what she said in a Northern accent. It was very distracting.

Overall though, this book was a fast, wonderful read. I'm happy I had the chance to read it, and look forward to the sequel, especially after a couple of twists at the end.
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149 reviews15 followers
November 7, 2012
I loved The Violet Fox! Clare really blends the popular genres, Dystopian and Romance, well together.

At times it felt like I was reading Grave Mercy by LaFevers, the world Clare has created for Kiera is very similar to the one Ismae inhabits. However, I enjoyed The Violet Fox so much more the characters were all relatable and their actions, understandable. I find that Clare keeps a certain realistic tone in her unrealistic/fantastical writing. She's created a society of US versus THEM, or Freetors versus Marlenians.

I enjoyed Kiera as a character. She embodies all the attributes a YA heroine must; courage, brains, strength, wit, modesty (well in MOST cases at least haha) and she has a good heart. We see her bravery as she undertakes the mission to save her people, Freetors, from those who live on the surface, Marlenians by joining forces with said enemy.

The action in this story is non-stop. Kiera's always getting herself into some sort spectacle whether she's Kiera or the Violet Fox. There are many fight scenes in this book, which should please those who enjoy strong action in their YA, but I think what I really enjoyed the most, was the interplay between the characters. I loved the sibling bond that Kiera and her brother, Rordan shared. Clare does a great job of showcasing the commitment these two share for each other and their Freetor people, through their courageous and selfless actions throughout the book. I will admit that there is a scene in this book that had me in tears because I didn't want to believe what I was reading was actually happening. I will say this about Clare's writing, she keeps it real. Sometimes not every story will have a happy ending and I can appreciate this, but the fact that I was crying for these characters just goes to show how well-developed her characters truly are. You feel their pain and loss, just as you feel joy for their victories.

On a happier note, I LOVED Prince Keegan! He's the dashing Prince Charming that every girl dreams of, even Kiera. I couldn't help but fall for this man as he relentlessly chased after Kiera, who refused to acknowledge his advances. The witty dialogue between these two kept me flipping the pages and had me crossing my fingers that they'd end up together. (Do they? Well you'll just have to read to find out :)). The star-crossed romance between these two, gives The Violet Fox a Cinderella-like vibe, in an environment closer to that of Katniss. Haha can you imagine Katniss as Cinderella? As funny as that sounds, it totally works with this book- there's even an evil step-sister character (who's not really a step-sister but you get my drift).

I can't wait for the sequel, The Silver Spear. With the way things are left off in The Violet Fox, vengeance is on the mind, the only question is, WHO will get the revenge they seek?

Cannot recommend this one enough to any fan of YA, it's amazing and I will be re-reading it over and over! Thanks so much Clare!

Happy Reading!!!
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301 reviews10 followers
October 13, 2014
Keira Driscoll is what they call a Freetor, a people banished by the Marlenians to live underground. At the young age of 6, Keira joins a band of Freetor fighters who steal from the rich and give to the poor. She soon becomes widely and infamously known as the Violet Fox. She believes in freeing her people from the Marlenians who have enslaved them and will do anything to help them. When the leaders of the Freetor’s, called the Elders, ask Keira to infiltrate the Marlenian castle on a secret mission to retrieve an ancient Freetor book, she jumps at the chance to once again give aide to her people. What she doesn’t expect is to sympathize with certain Marlenians, one of whom is the handsome Prince Keegan. Disguised as a Northern Marlenian lady named Dominique, Keira can’t help but feel drawn to the kind prince. Will she really be able to do whatever her mission entails, or will she follow her heart?

Though The Violet Fox had a rocky start, I ended up really enjoying this intriguing young adult novel. It had a great set-up, with detailed backgrounds to this fantasy world that really added to the story. It contained castle intrigue, secret identities, handsome royalty, forbidden romance, a spunky heroine, fast-paced adventure, and a fairytale-like plotline that excited me to the very end. However, there were some aspects I didn’t enjoy. Before I get to that, I do want to mention that all readers have different likes/dislikes and this is only my personal opinion. What works for me could be a thumbs-down for you and what I didn’t like could be your favorite part of the book. That being said, I really didn’t like Keira. I thought that while she was certainly a kick-butt heroine with lots of spunk, she was also extremely childish and annoyingly arrogant. I thought that the relationship between her and Keegan could’ve been focused on a little more, instead of her just falling out of her head in love with him. My biggest aversion to this book however was not the characters or relationship developments, it was actually the unneeded use of magic. I really don’t like any books involving magic, but unfortunately I didn’t know that was a big sub-plot when I decided to read it. With that being said and without saying too much, I do want to add that this book had a really great ending filled with twists and turns, heartache and triumph. Overall, I enjoyed The Violet Fox and would like to continue Keira and Keegan’s story in The Silver Spear.

Even though I wasn’t too happy with several aspects to this book, I know that it will reach it’s intended audience and hopefully succeed! Recommended for fans of light fantasy, adventure, or dystopian novels, The Violet Fox was an intriguing read and definitely one of the most unique I’ve read this year.

**I RECEIVED THIS BOOK FROM THE AUTHOR IN EXCHANGE FOR MY HONEST REVIEW. MY SINCEREST APOLOGIES TO THE AUTHOR FOR MY DELAY IN REVIEWING.

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34 reviews3 followers
November 27, 2012
Review originally posted on my blog, A Bookish Co-Op

I must admit I had no idea what to expect when I started reading this book. I don't usually get into to fantasy because the story lines get confusing and proper nouns and key words are usually way too complicated to pronounce let alone keep straight without a master key while reading. But I was intrigued by the summary none-the-less.

Over all, I very much enjoyed this book. To me it felt like a nice mix between Robin Hood and Cinderella, more specifically the Ever After version with Drew Barrymore (There's a sweet little scene, if you've seen Ever After you'll catch it).
Now that being said, The Violet Fox and I didn't start off as the best of friends. No, ours was more of a progressive love. . .

I went from, "Stealing to fede the hungry, that's nice." *drums fingers on table* "Whoa! Chiquita has got some moves. Wait. She just did what to who? Feisty."
to, "Hm not afraid to tell royalty where they can stick it and yet make it sound polite. You little southern charmer you. Bless your heart. We can be friends."
and ended with a big, "HOLD THE PHONE! He's really- and she- but then this lady- and he and her- but Rordan- and she's gonna- what did he just say?!"
True Story.

I love it when a book keeps me far enough in the loop that I know where I'm going, but still manages to surprise me with a few twists towards the end and that's definitely what we get here.


Kiera is a wonderful character even if she is a bit too reckless. She kept me on my toes because I kept expecting her to get caught. At times though she did come off a bit arrogant. I can understand wanting to show off and best the Marlenian guards day after day, but even Batman knows when to hold back.

I really liked how see Kiera grow through out the story. She starts off as this cape crusader doing what was right for her people, but learns that its not all sunshine and lollipops for the other side either. I also liked Keira and Keegan's relationship. It was a little fast, but sweet. I definitely smiled and giggled more than once, though I really wanted to pull Keegan off to the side at the end and say, "You do remember that time in chapter 1 when you had like 4 lips because of this girl right? You do? Ok, good just checking. Heart you both!"

Over all I definitely recommend The Violet Fox if you're looking for a fun, fast paced read.
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322 reviews51 followers
November 12, 2012
Also posted on Rally the Readers.

* A copy was provided by the author for review.

When I first read the synopsis for The Violet Fox, I immediately thought of Robin Hood. I absolutely love Robin Hood, so I was beyond excited to read this. I was not disappointed! The Violet Fox is a thrilling fantasy packed with adventure, magic, social injustice, and political intrigue, all set against a richly detailed world. In short, it’s exactly my type of fantasy novel.

Hands down, my favorite part of the book was the world-building. It’s a critical element in any genre, but I think particularly so for fantasy, where you have to be able to believe that things like magic and mythical creatures are real. Marshall does an outstanding job of putting the reader right in the middle of both the opulence of the Marlenian court and the bleakness of the underground Freetor caverns. I also loved how thorough the lore of this world was and how well it was explained. The history between the Marlenians and the Freetors is a key part of the novel, and it’s never overwhelming to absorb.

Although I admired Kiera, whose alter ego is the title character, for her courage and fierce dedication to helping her people, at times I also found her a little too sure of herself. Occasionally her sense of invincibility as the Violet Fox sends her charging headfirst into situations. Kiera does, however, mature a lot over the course of the novel and tempers her swagger. Another character who really grew on me as the book went on was Prince Keegan. At first I wrote him off as a haughty, privileged rich guy with nothing but disdain for those beneath him. Like Kiera though, Keegan learns to see things from the opposing point-of-view, and he proves to be an honorable fellow. Finally, I have to mention Advisor Ivor Ferguson, the right-hand man to Marlenia’s ruler, the Holy One. The Advisor is quite an enigmatic character; I had a lot of fun trying to guess what he was up to.

With its vividly descriptive world, fully drawn characters, and engrossing story, The Violet Fox is a prime example of YA fantasy. I’m eager to see what adventures await Kiera (and the Violet Fox) in the next book, The Silver Spear.
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Author 13 books84 followers
February 10, 2013
The Violet Fox is about a young girl called Kiera Driscoll, whose people, the Freetors, were forced underground three hundred years ago and have been persecuted ever since. Forced to steal from the Marlenian surface dwellers to survive, the Freetors aren't exactly in anyone's good books, least of all Keegan's, the Marlenian prince. After a magical tome is stolen, Kiera is sent on a dangerous mission to impersonate a Marlenian princess and gain access to the royal castle, in order to retrieve the tome. Aided by her fiercely loyal and far more sensible brother, Keira goes into the heart of the enemy in order to save her people.

This is definitely a great start to the series and I'm already looking forward to the next book. The story itself is very twisty - every time I thought I'd worked out what was happening, something else cropped up and I realised I was wrong-either entirely or partially. The world is also very vivid-from the underground tunnels that the Freetors live in, to the castle inhabited by Keegan, the settings are beautifully described. The history of the world is also very vivid and scarily believable.

Kiera is a very strong character, which is good as the story is told entirely from her perspective. It's wonderful to see her grow from having a very black and white view of the conflict between the Freetors and the Marlenians, to someone who is willing to accept people for who they are-good or bad. I did at times find her a little impetuous and foolish in her behaviour and actions and I could see why her brother, Rordan, needed to rein her in. Rordan is another very clear character and his frustration at "handling" his sister is very evident and at times amusing. Some of the other characters could have been developed in more detail, but this is often hard when a story is told in the first person, so it's only a minor niggle.

Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this book-it made me laugh, cry and grip the edge of my seat whilst I eagerly turned to pages to discover what was going to happen next. If you enjoy fantasy novels, I recommend that you read The Violet Fox.
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107 reviews7 followers
October 19, 2012
When I first started to read this book, I have to be honest with you, I wasn't all that excited. The cover is not a favorite. However this is a perfect example of how stupid it can be to judge a book by it's cover. And if I am to be honest, I do. Very often I do. This book was amazing, great read and I am happy I said yes to this review because I was hooked after the first chapter.
It was well written and fun. Marshall was great at describing her world and it was easy to visualise it with the large underground caves and the beautiful castle above ground.

The main character of this book is a very strong female, maybe a little to strong or rather a bit to full of herself. She really believed in herself, so much that I was a bit annoyed with her at the beginning of this story. But she will be a tiny bit more humble as the story goes and she falls for the one person she should not. I love when you read a book and the author throws in things in the story you do not expect and that happens a few times in The violet fox and I love that. It gives you surprises and keep you on your toes.

The only thing I have that could possibly bring this book down a tiny bit is that I felt like to much happened in the end. I felt like the book didn´t have to have such a clean ending when there will be more books in this series. A cliff-hanger would have been great here but other than that this is a great read with lots of humour, love, excitement. And where our heroine has identity crisis and loyalty issues to deal with on almost a daily basis.

I can´t wait for the next book in this series and what will happen to our very brave heroine then?
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1,085 reviews101 followers
November 18, 2017
This story had a few classic (almost cliched) YA situations, but it was fun and easy to read. The characters are quite likable, and the relationship between Kiera and Rordan felt real.

The book started off right in the action, and it took a little bit to figure out the world set-up, but it's pretty straightforward and easy to get. At least there's no dreaded info-dumping, everything just seems to flow into the story.

I've had a bad streak of reading books I didn't click with lately, so finding that I really enjoyed this one made me feel much better. I love that Kiera is strong and independent, and stays that way, even after meeting Keegan. That's such a great thing to find in YA stories.
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Author 1 book95 followers
October 16, 2012
The author sets up the fantasy world of Marlenia and the history behind the Marlenians and the Freetors so well! There is a lot of backstory in the beginning to set up this world and the conflict that makes Kiera's subterfuge necessary - first as the Violet Fox and then as Lady Dominique so that she can find something that has been stolen by the Marlenians and hidden in the castle. The pace is a little slow in the beginning but it moves much faster as the story develops. There is much that Kiera does not know, and it seems like everyone is keeping secrets, making the final third of the novel full of shocking twists and turns.

Kiera is a strong character, with a few flaws, but with determination and heart and she gives up much for her people. The romance between Kiera and Prince Keegan is very sweet, and I was very curious to see how the author would pull off such a star-crossed, impossible relationship. It is interesting how the story is resolved - it is an uneasy but optimistic resolution that sets up the next book in the series. Overall, I found The Violet Fox a very well constructed story - absorbing, action-filled and suspenseful with great writing and characters.
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67 reviews2 followers
October 6, 2019
The Violet Fox is a fantasy story featuring a young girl caught inside a battle between those who live on land and those who live underground. She's from underground and her people starve everyday and barely have enough to eat. Some of her people go to the surface to steal food, jewelry, and goods and bring it back home to share with others. Her people can barely manage to feed their family and the war between the two races has been going on for two hundred years already.

I love the fantasy elements. The setting was thoughtfully planned out and reading about the conflict between the two races was intriguing. I also love the romance that blossoms in the story!

I was excited to start reading The Violet Fox because I love supporting local and I love the colour violet! When I got to the first exciting part of the book I felt like I could not put it down. I really enjoyed reading it and I am so excited to get the next book. This book is truly a solid classic fantasy book for any book lovers out there.
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526 reviews50 followers
October 30, 2012
This was a well written original tale with a little mix of Robin Hood and Cinderella. I am very intrigued and looking forward to the next one. It is so refreshing to get a good book for under $5!
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27 reviews1 follower
February 27, 2013
A great adventure/romance by a great writer. Like a mixture of Twilight and The Mask Of Zorro, but better! I highly recommend this great book
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Author 2 books8 followers
August 22, 2014
Beautifully written and interesting right to the end! Clare creates an amazingly interesting world and a fantastically strong female character that you will fall in love with.
45 reviews
August 8, 2025
Okay, this book started out much stronger than I anticipated, with good world-building, fast pacing, and generally good writing. Where it goes wrong in my view is on two points: first, the whole plot rwist with respect to Kiera's dad and the subsequent events and dialogue around that; and second, the romance plotline.

The notion that Kiera's dad is just kind of puttering around for years without being recognized or confronted by another Freetor is insane, particularly when he's taking actions that lead to deaths of Freetors. His rationale for leaving his kids and his people behind was also thin to the point of nonexistent, and - while deadbeat dads are certainly realistic - no one is the villain in their own story and you'd expect to see some more mental gymnastics on his part to justify how he went from present, involved father to abandoning his children and aiding in the persecution of his people. That whole storyline felt thin as Gulag soup.

The romance was nuts, too. It basically goes from "you're a monster" to "you're sort of okay" to "I love you" in a handful of interactions. This book was too short to plausibly reach an ending where Keegan is willing to give up his whole life and belief system for Kiera and Kiera is willing to forget Keegan's alignment with the people who have been murdering her people (including her own brother).

To sum: great world-building and a strong start but the character/relationship development and subplots need work.
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271 reviews1 follower
April 29, 2025
4.25 It was good.

The plot twists were well done and kept me going, about the last 3rd I got to one that had the "nope, I need answers" and saw me plowing through about 80-90 pages (it's not a terribly long book). The thing is, I've said this before, but when you do a book written from a first person narrative you have to adjust and understand the narrator may have some biases. For instance, there's a person complaining about how Kiera describes a rival character in an unflattering way, often making references to her weight. . . being that she doesn't like this character that makes sense. If you don't like a person, you're not going to describe them in flattering terms (at one point she also refers to said character as having plump worms for a mouth). Whereas I can understand the disdain for people who act sh*tty, what I had to remind myself of has to do with the ending.

It's very rosey and optimistic to the point of feeling Disneyfied or unrealistic. I then had to remind myself this is the author's second book, but more importantly the protagonist is 16 and well. . . often thinks like a 16 year old (IE not realistic). That being said, this sort of optimism will likely be challenged in following installments. I'm eager to see where that goes, especially since I bought the series at a convention (the author was a pretty nice person)
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Author 112 books19 followers
September 20, 2018
So, I was at SaskExpo this last weekend and I stumbled on the author's table more or less by accident. As a writer myself I'm always drawn to tables full of books. I had a pleasant chat with Ms. Marshall and wound up picking up the three books in the series that she had for sale as it was a good deal.

What I didn't realize until I cracked the first one open a few days after I got home was that the series is written in first person. Usually this is an automatic nope for me. I abhor first person perspective books. I've only ever read one that was any good. But, I bought them, I liked the author from the brief chat we had, so I decided to just try.

I was relieved to learn that the first book is quite good. It took me about a day to plow through it as it's an easy read. Given that it's YA, the resolution to the plot was relatively easy to see coming, but that's ok. You expect that sort of thing in certain genres. There was one twist I did't see coming and that was nice. I like surprises.

I started on book 2 last night and I hope it's as enjoyable as the first.
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Author 7 books100 followers
August 15, 2018
In the land of Marlenia, the people were divided two hundred years ago by a civil war. Now, the privileged live on the surface while the impoverished are forced to live in tunnels underground. But the underground Freetors possess a magic that the surfaced dwellers envy and fear. Keira, becomes a symbol to the other Freetors of hope and justice and is chosen by the Elders to infiltrate the royal palace on the surface. Her mission takes a turn as she becomes enchanted with the prince.

This story flows so well between the many points of action that it is difficult to put down. It is a well woven story of many threads and truly unexpected twists, full of strong women characters. This is also an important story of prejudice and politics and how easy it can be to dehumanize people who are different.
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Author 4 books8 followers
October 14, 2023
The Violet Fox, es un libro escrito por Clare C. Marshall @faeryinkpress el cual me sorprendió de manera positiva. Nos revela un mundo dividido en dos bandos: humanos que viven en la superficie y otro bando que vive bajo tierra. Es una historia entretenida y fácil de leer en la cual seguimos a nuestra protagonista quien vive diferentes aventuras para tratar de ayudar a su pueblo. Dentro de sus páginas podrás encontrar acción, romance y engaños. Si te gusta la fantasía en definitiva este libro es para ti.
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