Submerged

by Graysen Morgen

Assistant District Attorney Layne Carmichael had no idea that the sexy woman she took home from a local bar for a one night stand would turn out to be someone she would be prosecuting months later. Would she see the woman she spent the most amazing night of her life with through all of the legal red tape? Or would that night be forever tainted?

Scooter is a Naval Officer on a submarine who changes women like she changes uniforms. When she is accused of a heinous crime she is shocked to see her latest conquest sitting across from her as the prosecuting attorney and furious when the woman blatantly continues the case as if they had never spent passionate hours in each other’s arms.

Genres: Military Fiction, Lesbian

168 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 4, 2012

Reviews

[~ * K E L L I E * ~ · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed Submerged. I loved the characters and the story. I did find it hard to believe that a strong and respectable Assistant District Attorney (Layne) would firstly, not excuse herself from the case after discovering Scooter was the defendant and, secondly, fall to pieces when the going gets tough. All the self wallowing Layne did was a little annoying and retracted half a star.

Nonetheless, it was still enjoyable, albeit very short for the $10 price tag. In actual fact, I usually pay half that for similar length books. $5 would be a more acceptable price for this book.

4.5 stars

[Natsu · Rating 5 out of 5]

The needle continues to hover between 4 and 5 stars. It won't stop. 4.something. :)

I enjoyed the story although it could've been longer and Layne could've been written to not be sort of a weak little thing. I mean, Scooter was awesome and Layne was like.... for a moment, a pushover. idk. Maybe it's just me.

Overall, Submerged is a good read for me.

[Terry Baker · Rating 3 out of 5]

Scooter is a Lieutenant Commander in the Navy. She is currently the Executive Officer of the USS Lincoln, an attack submarine based near San Diego. She is well liked and has earned her rank and the respect of her crew. Scooter is also a lesbian and while she’s on shore leave, meets a woman in her sister’s bar. They have a glorious mutual one night stand.

When Scooter gets arrested and accused of a sexual crime by a female naval subordinate, Scooter is shocked to see the woman she’d been thinking about since their night together is the prosecuting attorney. What shocks and angers Scooter even more, is the woman ignores their night together and continues to prosecute her case.

Assistant District Attorney, Layne Carmichael hasn’t been able to forget the gorgeous woman she took home from a bar and had hot sex with one night. She would dearly like to see her again. She does, sooner rather than later. She has to prosecute her for a sex crime she can’t believe Scooter would have committed.

Will Scooter be found guilty or innocent? Is her distinguished career over?

Another really good, if somewhat short story from Graysen Morgen. The story is fast paced and exciting. The characters are multidimensional and interact well together. I don’t know much about submarines, but from the scenic descriptions I could easily visualize being on one.

As with all the other books I’ve read of Graysen’s this one has numerous typos and grammatical errors. If Graysen gets her books properly edited and drops the price, I think her books would be much sort after.

[Courtney · Rating 4 out of 5]

Too short!!!

Too short!!!

paid $10 for a short story!!! was a good story, but not worth the price. took me less than an hour to read

[Cindy B. · Rating 4 out of 5]

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