This book hardly felt like a romance to me. The romance felt very underdeveloped, with insufficient depth.
There are quite a few things this book does incredibly well that we don’t see in other romances.
For example, there are small depictions but meaningful conversations on boundaries and consent. We see Violet and Xavier have some necessary dialogue on boundaries and consent related to what is okay to do and what is not. Things like holding hands or giving hugs, which might seem superficial to some but I think is necessary. Just because they pretend to be married doesn’t mean they can do anything and everything with each other if the other is uncomfortable. I appreciated this, as it’s not as common as I wish it were in romances. Second, I always appreciate it when there isn’t a third-act conflict, which seems to make up most romance books, adding nothing but drama, pettiness, childish behavior, and conflict that could have quickly been resolved or avoided had the characters simply conversed. There’s also how Violet and Xavier are both people with aspirations and dreams, with Violet wanting to be a celebrity stylist and Xavier pursuing a basketball journey to go into the NBA. While Violet succeeds in her field and pursues her dreams, Xavier’s dreams are cut short due to a broken Achilles. Yet, this is a little more refreshing because he doesn’t give up and continues finding ways to make up for what he lost. He doesn’t dwell on what could have been the past but instead focuses on what could be the present. On the other hand, Violet continues moving forward, ensuring she has a big reputation for herself. Seeing a confident black woman succeed in the fashion industry in a romance novel is empowering. I loved the author’s addition of feminism shown this way. Violet doesn’t forget where she comes from and acknowledges those who have helped her make a name for herself. There’s also great honesty in becoming highly involved in “hustle culture,” showing the pros and cons of giving it your all only to fall behind when you’re too tired. Still, the author shows her female main character as positive, always finding ways to compensate for her losses, keep moving forward, and not letting herself be talked down.
However, while this book provides new and necessary themes that other novels don’t, it fails to give us a successful execution of a romance, which I would say is more of this novel's primary and center point.
There’s potential, not just with the second-chance but with the good ol’ marriage of convenience. In this case, the marriage stems from a lie our famous stylist made up, which is a little flimsy, but it can still manage to capture one’s attention considering the opportunities it presents to both characters. Done out of panic and unprovoked thoughtfulness, Violet lies in an interview and states she recently got married to her high school sweetheart, who happens to be an English teacher and basketball assistant coach. Everyone knows it’s Xavier, especially those from their small town. And Xavier is quick to accept this as not only something helpful for his sake–to become an assistant coach at Riley University because, for some reason, he wasn’t able to before because he wasn’t married, and so therefore his unsettled life was an obstacle?–but also because it’s allow him to get a second chance with Violet, which is all he wants.
Yet, for a second-chance romance, the second chance felt irrelevant. If I hadn’t been reminded and knew beforehand that Violet and Xavier were high school sweethearts, I would have assumed they were strangers first who simply connected on a basis related to attraction. This only further proved why second-chance romances aren’t easy to execute. In my opinion, second-chance romances are unsuccessful without some sort of conflict or drama. You can keep your story low angst, and I’m not saying I want some childish third-act breakup that doesn’t help the cause, but the story feels a little pointless if it’s too fluffy. The way I saw it, the second chance was too…easy.
I was rooting for Violet at the beginning. I was ready for her to make Xavier fight for her once again after what he did. While their circumstances and reasoning for the breakup are the usual kind (the kind where character A–in this case, Xavier–breaks up with character B–in this case, Violet–because character A believes character B deserves better. You know how it goes), but even with that, I had hoped the author would take the route of a more complex second-chance. For me, a second chance doesn’t work if no persuasion is involved, and I never felt like this had it. Violet tells us, the readers, repeatedly that she’s not going to give in to Xavier easily, but, surprise! She does. She never made him fight for her. She never made him find different ways to make him trust him. He’s trustworthy, but just because we know that doesn’t mean she does. I never saw how or why Violet was in love, or at least developed feelings, for Xavier again besides their past. This structure is so lazy to me. It doesn’t give me enough to root for the characters when their love is based on the past and not the present. It’s evident that love stems from the past for most of the feelings. While some moments between them in the present time can add to their past love and current feelings, there wasn’t enough depth and substance. I thought the author lacked the substance necessary to make the relationship more believable, as if it wouldn’t stand tall if it weren’t for the past. I can easily say that Xavier’s point of view was more favorable than Violet’s, mostly because we know he regrets breaking up with her and never offering her an explanation, so seeing his regret and feelings for her are more obvious compared to Violet’s contradictory attitude. Violet simply gave in too easily, and I had hoped she’d put up more of a fight, especially with who she was when they were kids. Xavier described her a spitfire, and it felt like she was much more like that when they were kids than now as adults.
Adding on to that, I don’t consider this a romance like others because of the focus on Violet and Xavier’s careers and personal lives. It’s entirely realistic, which I can easily say is are bonus point to the author. Yes, romance doesn’t cure all. Yes, a relationship and a full-time career make juggling the two difficult. Yes, it’s difficult to always be on board with what your partner wants. The romance doesn’t fail to provide realisticness, which I always appreciate. However, I guess the realistic part of it is also what makes the story less succulent. There isn’t enough page time between Violet and Xavier that makes the relationship stand out, much less the development I thought was missing. A lot of time is given to their careers, such as the basketball games of Xavier’s students or Violet’s styling job with Karina (although I did love her as a side character, don’t get me wrong). Due to that, it is even more challenging to see where the romantic feelings between both leads come from. The writing also had a very back-and-forth feel to it. Sometimes the story focuses more on Violet’s and Xavier’s emotional journey and then focuses on their romantic journey, causing a contrast to the writing, It’s difficult to pinpoint a genre, as it felt like a mix of romance and women’s fiction, yet neither genre suits it. While romance may be appropriate, I thought it was missing parts of its strength, especially as it’s a second-chance romance following two high school sweethearts.
I feel like I wasn’t the right audience for this, or perhaps my expectations differed. I think anyone who goes into it with a different mindset would be able to enjoy it much more than I did.
ARC provided by NetGalley + Berkley in exchange for an honest review.