re-written and re-read: jan. 4 2026
edit: okay. one of my biggest pet peeves in this book is that mortal and mortality is constantly used when it should be human or humanity, yet in the damn BOOK BLURB it says that the last of 'dianna's humanity' has been ripped away. WHY DOES THE BOOK KEEP SAYING HER MORTALITY HAS BEEN RIPPED AWAY. SHE'S ALWAYS BEEN IMMORTAL.
my original review had a tw for rape because Dianna disguised herself as another woman to sleep with and then kill a man. That scene has (kind of?) been removed. It's still made clear that Dianna disguised herself as someone else and slept with and then killed him. But, the mention of Dianna also killing all of the other sex workers who were with her, was taken out. It's still technically rape since Dianna was disguising herself as someone else to sleep with someone who otherwise wouldn't have slept with her. It’s odd to me that it was changed without any actual changes whatsoever. Just like the whole ‘Samkiel calling his mom merda’ thing in book one.
Before I start my review of the actual book, let me complain very loudly about that blood-spattered note meant to recap the events of book one. First of all. Who approved that art? Who thought it was a good idea to put red text on top of a blood-spattered background in sloppy midwestern wedding invitation cursive writing where the spatters are sometimes placed directly over the text, making half of the sentences illegible? It legit just looks like the author didn’t know how to spell ‘unbeknownst’ and tried to hide it with a blood spatter. Second of all. The fact that it took not even a full two pages to recap an almost 900-page book is hilarious to me. And the fact that Amber got a fact about her own book wrong in her own recap is also hilarious. Did she forget that Dianna didn’t kill that one celestial and that he killed himself? Apparently.
Here’s the thing. These books could be enjoyable reads if Amber gave them more time. The writing is so stiff and clunky. There are so many words that could be combined or sentences that could be cut altogether that would make this flow so much better. It’s like the editors have never heard of contractions before. There are entire chapters that should be cut because they contribute nothing of value to the plot. They’re just there to fill space, and this book is already nearly 900 pages. Like, the entire picnic/volleyball chapter was so fucking unnecessary. We do not need any more filler chapters. All the characters still speak like robots. Everyone has the same voice, even though we have multiple first-person POV chapters, but not a single character has their own ‘voice’ as it were. If not for the chapter title telling us whose POV we’re in, I never would’ve been able to guess whose POV I’m reading from. Some of the POVs seem like they’re there just so a ‘spicy’ scene could be included, but again, they contribute nothing to the story. The Throne of Broken Gods reads as if Amber were desperately trying to revamp it to reflect what she actually wanted the Book of Azrael to be, but it suffers greatly. Once again, this book is far too long. Nearly 900 pages of nonsense. 400 of those pages are Dianna’s villain spree and Samkiel cleaning up her messes and thinking about how much he wants to save her. 200 of those pages are Dianna being sad about her sister and pushing everyone away, while she talks about a lock on a door in a house rattling 87 times. I’m assuming the actual plot of this book is crammed into the last 200 pages, but it took so long to get there that I stopped caring.
In book one, Dianna and Liam drive and fly from place to place, even though they could teleport, and are betrayed by everyone they encounter as they search for The Book of Azrael, which is said to contain a god-killing weapon, among other things. The moment they find it, they lose it to Kaden. Then he kills Dianna’s sister, Gabby, on live television, simultaneously announcing to the world the existence of Gods and Monsters(something we were told they already knew in the first chapter of the first book, but apparently they all universally forgot and had to be reminded). Now, Dianna wants vengeance and plans to kill literally every single person who happened to be involved in her sister’s death.
So, Dianna is going from faction to faction, slaughtering every single person who happened to be in the room when Kaden murdered her sister. It doesn’t matter that most of these people seemed to have no idea Kaden intended to kill her. It doesn’t matter that Kaden is meant to be so powerful that no one but a God King could kill him. It doesn’t matter that even if these people did try to intervene, they more than likely would’ve been killed alongside Gabriella. Nope, Dianna doesn’t care. They’re all on her shit list. And to get strong enough so that she can kill all these people and be an all-powerful badass, she kills and eats countless mortals. None of these kills is shown on the page. Dianna never reflects on the fact that she just killed and ate a bunch of innocent people who had nothing to do with her sister’s death. The only thing that matters is her revenge. She kills Drake, that one guy she pretended to kill in the last book, but this time she kills him for real. She slaughters Camilla’s entire coven and a few other covens, too, but spares Camilla. She threatens Samkiel’s family 1000 times. Stabs him in the gut, and he gets a boner from it.
Liam is constantly having random monologues about how he and Dianna haven’t discussed their exclusivity. Why is that relevant at all? See, this is where I just started wanting to rip chunks of my hair out. Because nowhere in this book do Liam or the Hand really condemn Dianna’s actions. They’re all about saving and protecting poor little precious Dianna because she’s “starved for attention”. She needs a hug, and then she’ll stop mass-murdering everyone!! She kills Tobias, and then Logan and Neverra are like
OMG YES, SLAY, SHE’S OUR QUEEN. I DON’T EVEN CARE THAT SHE’S A MURDERER SHE’S AMAZING. OMG
Xavier and Cameron take her out to get wasted at a bar even though she’s literally under house arrest, but she deserves a night of fun even though she’s a mass murderer! Then, when a bunch of vampires show up and beat the shit out of her, and Samkiel blames Xavier and Cameron for it, she stands up for them, and they’re all like OH MY GOD, WE RESPECT YOU SO MUCH.
And like…what? what???? The celestials are supposed to protect mortals, right? Yet they’re over here lauding a woman who just slaughtered(and ATE) a shit ton of them so she could get revenge against people who just happened to be in the same room as her sister when she died. Like WHAT? Nobody ever addresses what Dianna did. Dianna only feels guilty because she is lonely and didn’t save her sister. She expresses remorse only for hurting her friends(and only when they tell her to her face that she hurt them), but none for the countless humans she killed in her quest for vengeance. I’m disappointed because I really think there was room for an in-depth exploration of remorse and atonement for those actions, but no. Like did everyone forget the entire first book? They were literally torturing Dianna because she blew up a city and attacked them all, and then when she and Liam made the blood deal at the end of it all she was going to be TRIED FOR HER CRIMES. YA'LL KNEW SHE WAS A CRIMINAL WHO MURDERED INNOCENT PEOPLE FROM DAY ONE WHY IS EVERYONE ACTING LIKE SHE'S ALWAYS BEEN A GOOD AMAZING PERSON. SHE'S EVIL. LET HER BE EVIL.
The only person who does speak out against Dianna ends up being a bad guy. And it’s wild to me that the author clearly wants me to disagree with him. But he’s right. Dianna did destroy two cities, she did slaughter a bunch of people and eat them; she did threaten and hurt Samkiel and the Hand. Like she did all of these things, and she was basically given the Nesta/Feyre treatment by being put in a fancy castle as ‘punishment’ and then forced to go on long jogs. There’s a council of mortals calling for her to be punished, and Samkiel’s response is to “put them in their place” by making the room explode. Am I the only one who’s seeing a problem here? Dianna should be punished. It’s one thing if she’d just gone after Tobias and Kaden, etc—the actual BAD GUYS. It’s one thing if she were being scary and threatening the others to get information, as she did in the last book. But she didn’t. She went way over the line. And the only thing she really seems sad about is failing to kill Kaden and avenge Gabriella. She doesn’t seem to feel bad about any of the innocents she’s killed. Nor does she feel any remorse over killing the people who didn’t know Kaden planned on killing Gabriella. (She does feel a little bit sad over Drake, but only because his ‘fated lover’ came to kill her for killing him(but the author also told us several times that htis lover was dead but apparently not anymore!!). But that’s literally 500 pages into this book. Like, sure, it’s revenge, and she’s mad, but it makes me unable to empathise with her because everything she's doing has no actual logic behind it. There’s also the fact that Samkiel and the Hand are constantly justifying her actions as if she’s in the right to do what she’s doing. And like…no? If you want to write an evil character, just let her be evil. Stop trying to justify her actions and paint her actual horrible deeds in a flattering light. Because Dianna is a mass murderer, and people keep saying she needs to be protected? I find it really disappointing that there’s really no exploration of how she feels about what she’s done. I would’ve really been interested to read her experience of genuine remorse instead of constantly thirsting after Samkiel any chance they’re together. Instead of feeling constant jealousy for no reason.
I wish the author had expanded more on the fact that all of this was a suicide mission, and Dianna didn’t expect to have to deal with her guilt or something. I wish that she had stopped her villain spree after she slaughtered Drake and his Coven. I think the book would’ve been better if she had maybe killed a few humans, and we saw it on page, then she went after Drake first. She kills him, and then she’s trying to convince herself that what she’s doing is right and that soon she’ll be reunited with her sister, etc. But then Samkiel captures her, and they force her to face the consequences of her actions. She actually faces the fact that she’s killed innocents. The book would’ve been far shorter and much better. And I really wish that the book would’ve dialed back the horniness by 1000%.
It feels like every single conversation in this book ends up centering around whom Dianna spread her legs for to get information or to get where she is in life. Nobody can spend a single minute with Dianna without making some crass remark about her vagina and how good it is and how everyone wants to fuck her or how everyone loses their mind once they fuck her. It is insane just how many times a conversation like this happens just in the first four hundred pages. There’s a whole chapter dedicated to Cameron and Xavier eating pancakes and talking about “how good it is” and why Samkiel is all bent out of shape about her. Like, Amber, what the fuck?
Then the sex scenes that are actually written feel…soulless to me? Like they’re just a list of actions. One of the scenes is Cameron basically using another woman to forget the man he’s in love with, and the whole time they’re boning, he’s having thoughts like, ‘god, she’s a righteous bitch, but she sucks dick like a goddess’ or ‘god, she may be a bitch, but her pussy is divine’. Like….oh my god?!?!?!
There’s a sudden background on Dianna thrown in that should’ve been given to us in the last book. We’re told that Dianna and her sister were once named Mer Ka and Ain, but her backstory never gets expanded on. The name appears approximately 5 times in this 900-page book. And then it turns out that wasn’t even actually her real name. We’re given a random ritual that makes no sense, where Dianna burns Gabriella’s body and spreads the ashes over a beach so that all of her ‘parts can be reused,’ but…how are they being reused by disintegrating into the ocean? We’re given flashbacks from the first book that should’ve been included there instead of being sloppily inserted here. These books need such heavy-duty reworks. Like, I really do think this had the potential to be a cool series, but it’s just so poorly written that I'm constantly shaking my head in disappointment.
In the midst of Dianna’s raging, she goes after a fate called Roccurem He repeatedly mentions that gods have tried and failed to kill him, yet Samkiel and Dianna continuously threaten to rip him to shreds. They annoy me so much, let me tell you. She calls him Reggie sporadically throughout the book; I don’t really understand why they couldn’t just stay consistent with that. But it makes sense since we called Samkiel Liam for an entire book, and that name is now completely obsolete. But anyway, this fate is literally playing matchmaker between Dianna and Samkiel. He’s just floating from person to person like, ‘ayyyy he loves you. Give him a chance’. He literally set up Dianna getting beaten up by vampires in an effort to push her closer to Samkiel. And Xavier and Cameron let it happen? So, that’s fun. Lmao
It feels like Dianna and Samkiel are aimless and have no purpose whatsoever. Dianna wants to kill Kaden, but nobody is really focusing enough on the havoc Kaden might be wreaking. Nobody is really trying to find him. They’re all so focused on Dianna and the bullshit she’s doing and making sure she feels better that they’re letting Kaden and the fact that he’s gonna probably destroy the world fall to the wayside. This book suffers greatly because of this. 400 pages of Dianna pointlessly slaughtering people and pushing people away. 200 pages of Dianna thirsting after Samkiel and refusing to face her grief. What is the actual plot of this story? Why did that need to be 600 pages when you could’ve explored that entire arc in like 150?
Last thing I’m going to vent about, and then I’m done. I hate Dianna. She is so beyond annoying. She’s gullible as hell and believes anything anyone tells her. Kaden shows up once to tell her Samkiel is betrothed to some woman, and he’s obviously lying to upset her, but she believes him in .2 seconds. Never once questions that he might be messing with her. And it just makes me dislike her so much. After she was betrayed like ten times in the last book, has she learned absolutely nothing? She’s 1000 years old and has no concept of treading cautiously, or I don’t know, using her brain before reacting? She gets jealous in a heartbeat any time Samkiel mentions a woman he knows. Xavier and Cameron make up a girl Samkiel is dating, and she gets murderously jealous. Like, girl, you are not cute. And it’s not cute for Samkiel to behave this way either. Ya’ll are thousand-year-old celestial gods, and you still get as jealous as high schoolers? Grow up.
Dianna never shows any remorse for being a mass murderer. Everyone constantly forgives and justifies her actions. Vincent is the only person to call her out for being a mass murderer, and he’s continuously threatened and berated for it. Even though Kaden is plotting to end the world or something, Samkiel decides that postponing everything and going on a date with Dianna is more important. So he asks Camilla, who’s been absent for hundreds of pages, to pose as him during a council meeting, something that literally never happens. The chapter could’ve been deleted, and it wouldn’t have even mattered. I’m shocked that an editor left it in there because the next time you see Logan, who’s meant to be watching over Camilla as she poses as Samkiel, she’s not with him, and the entire council is like ‘oh, where’s Samkiel? He’s been gone for three days? So literally, why was Camilla even mentioned???
Then they play beach volleyball and have a picnic. Dianna and Samkiel have an ice skating date, break into a food truck and fuck for three days. Dianna masturbates and talks to a star cuz she’s lonely. Dianna and Samkiel have some of the longest sex scenes I’ve ever read in my life. Then they have a dinner party where everyone shits on Vincent despite the fact that he came there to apologize. All of these scenes added absolutely nothing of import to the story. It was all filler space that would’ve been better suited in a fucking novella or something. We stray too far from the story's plot too fucking often.
Logan and Neverra are talking about having babies despite the fact that they are actively fighting a war rn. Xavier gets a fiancé who literally appeared out of nowhere. He doesn’t even get named. Just a nameless faceless man that Xavier is suddenly engaged to. Seriously, if anyone knows who this guy is and when he first appeared in this book, please tell me because I have no idea who he’s talking about.
Even though Samkiel insists Kaden is not blood kin, we find out a hundred pages later that he is, in fact, blood kin. He’s his brother. Dianna is adopted. Azrael is her dad. Reggie/Roccurem(seriously, pick one) is working with Kaden all along. Vincent is also working with Kaden, but legit, I don’t blame him because why the fuck would he stay friends with Samkiel after he got treated like shit for calling out Samkiel’s mass murdering girlfriend?
The last hundred pages are the only plot that actually happens, and it’s the only part of this book I actively enjoyed. The end.