i really liked the writing of the book (creepy af), the building of the mystery, but the ending felt a bit meh. and it also was never explained why maya saw a vision of the bodies before any of the events transpired or why she knew someone was going to die, which kind of left me confused because i was expecting the book to be building to a supernatural explanation for the weird shit going on, but then it just turned out to be a fifteen year old girl murdering people. so… yeah, i just don’t get what’s going on there at all. it felt like the author just wanted to be creepy and spooky and mysterious. which he was, but also if you’re going to end the mystery by having basically all the ‘supernatural’ stuff explained away, but not explain why the main character of your book had a vision at the beginning… then🧍♀️
like i dont even need an explanation, if she can see visions thats fine, but bro, at least have her wonder about it. like wow i had a vision of all this, how strange??? its like she just forgot it was a thing.
it felt like the author wrote the first half of the book with the intention of it being supernatural, but changed his mind halfway through and didnt go back to edit. because youre telling me, my home girl maya went into the woods, saw three bodies in detail, right down to jewellery theyre wearing and clothes, only to later find out none of it was real and see those people walking around alive and well…. AND THEN all of what she saw comes true a few days later????? with the bodies in the exact spot with the exact clothes and the exact positions??? and you expect me to be satisfied with the end of the mystery being “well a crazy 15 year old was running around the woods murdering people” NO, something supernatural was going on there, maya was having fucking visions.
oh and also, i dont feel like the events leading up to the reveal of the murderer really supported the reveal. it was like ???? aight whatever. it was so underwhelming finding out it was a secret half-sister who’d come back to town for revenge. like it just felt so💀ugh. i was half expecting it to be jake who’d get revealed as the killer and like maybe he had an accomplice in the fox-mask. it would have been cool if he had been revealed because it would make a lot of sense what with him living in the rowan tree and knowing so much about it, etc. but as it was the half-sister thing came out of fucking nowhere. like we got told his parents split up but that’s basically all the foreshadowing that exists.
honestly this book only gets three stars because everything was so creepy and cool….. ring up until the reveal. and now thst im writing this i think im gonna bump it down to two.