Barker & Llewelyn have been hired to find a man’s missing daughter, and their investigation quickly spirals into a cesspit of missing girls who are kidnapped, drugged, raped, mutilated, murdered, and discarded in sewers. They have to work quickly if they wish to save the latest victim from such a fate.
I found this story of interest, even though the author continues to largely keep the details hidden from the reader before unwinding it all at the very end in a lengthy explanation. I immediately knew the killer (and also noted the Stead red herring because, well, I’m acquainted with Stead from being a huge Titanic buff. He was one of the many victims).
My problems with this story are twofold. One new, one old.
The new problem: socialism. I had to eyeroll over it. Why would Barker even care if people were socialist? You’d think he’d be happy there were people willing to help others. Llewelyn takes him to task and compares his position to that of the charity’s, which was amusing, but it got irksome hearing characters bag on it constantly.
The old problem: Llewelyn. I can barely stand him at this point. This case is, to refresh your memory, about girls being kidnapped, drugged, raped, mutilated, and murdered, and all he thinks about is chasing women. That’s it. Middle of the case and he’s excited to take Beatrice Potter out on a date while using the case as an excuse to be with her. When he sees a possible suspect watching him, he decides to ignore it because there’s a woman here to captivate him!
When he goes to see the charity women about the girl, all he’s concerned about is their appearances. He muses over one woman even though she’s married. He’s baffled over a plain woman having an “Apollo” for a husband and how on earth could they possibly be together? (I don’t love that at the end of the book the conclusion is basically “he didn’t love her”). He’s suspicious of the charity doctor solely for having no interest in the women he works with.
At the end of the book, he mourns his wife and wants to find her grave. DIRECTLY after, he tries to find out Potter’s connection to another man and THEN his BEST FRIEND Israel’s girlfriend comes to confront him about Potter and he lusts over her. “How often does one find a girl at ones doorstep delivered like a parcel?” He says, he tells Mac to get her a flower, and he says “She was leaning toward me a little too close for strict chasteness, perhaps, and I noticed something; I could detect the scent of powder. Despite the fact this woman was being courted by my best friend in the world, for that one brief second, I desired her”. He has to “think it over”. And this is RIGHT after he tells her that he couldn’t be with Potter because their romance would be marred by his wife’s death. All he does is chase after women. It’s disgusting. As Mac said, he has his “nose in the air like a pointer after every woman’s scent”.
Every time a woman is introduced, I start grumbling to myself and rolling my eyes because inevitably, Llewelyn is gonna be hard as a rock and chasing after her. It’s not funny; I don’t know if the author means it to be, but it’s not. Probably because every woman inevitably wants to bang him. Even Miss Potter, who talks of celibacy and how marriage is tyranny is tethered to a politician (secretly) but still somehow charmed by Llewelyn after speaking to him…what…four times? Total? Including the time she cast him off? The women in the stories are there for Llewelyn to want to bone or to be repelled by. If they’re: 30+, ugly, and fat, then they are also smelly and of no value. If they’re: under thirty but preferably late teens to mid twenties, stunningly beautiful, and thin, then they have worth. Like…what did Beatrice Potter add to the plot? She was there to do inquiries of her own and hired on by Barker but…what did she do to help them? It seemed like she was solely there for Llewelyn to desire carnally. And, of course, there will be a new woman, or two, or three, in the next novel.
And, finally: I don’t understand Llewelyn’s beef with his former roommate. Llewelyn had Clay’s sovereign in his hand and then punched him. Clay is a scumbag, no doubt, but Llewelyn would have probably done the same if the roles were reversed. He shouldn’t have married his wife—he admitted he was tricked into it!—and it was against the university rules anyway. He also wouldn’t have cured her; it was consumption. Clay didn’t rob him of time spent with his wife—the disease did. And I don’t really buy him missing her or mourning her, because as I said above, he’s told Amy how his relationship with Beatrice wouldn’t work and an INSTANT later is about to kiss Amy! WHO IS DATING HIS BEST FRIEND! Maybe I would believe it more if he didn’t hit on every single woman that crossed his path and consider marriage even if/especially when he knows nothing about the women and their ideals are utterly different to his, like, say, an Irish nationalist anarchist, a rabbi’s daughter who is devoutly Jewish, or a staunch socialist, as if his wife hadn’t died not even TWO YEARS AGO.
I at first rated this three stars, but the way Llewelyn acts brought it down for me and I’m going two stars. I can’t stand his behaviour and it detracts from the mystery because he in fact deviates from the case in order to romance women. I wish he would tone it down and direct his attention toward the mysteries. I wish the author would place more clues in the story so I can better solve it. And I wish that there would be more of Barker’s presence in the stories with more of his story, because at this point he’s the reason I’m coming back.