Lacking
Found this book story frustrating and skimmed at times. The H, Maddox, lost his mate, so he thought. He finds out the h, Evangeline, is not dead. The law related to bonded mates can’t help since his bond with the h is broken and has not been “registered” beforehand. He tracks down his mate, who has memory loss for the past year or so, which is all the time that she’s known him, so memory loss that spans back to include even meeting him.
It is talked about how the bond has not been registered, but they went to a courthouse, and gotten married, which would be on record, but do you think he ever goes to pull that marriage license? And why wouldn’t that be on record when he went to the para department that keeps track of bonding certificates? They’re not the only human/para mating and can’t be the only ones that got married along with becoming bonded. That makes zero sense.
He sends Colt to visit a witch to find out if they can remove the bond severing that was done by another witch, and to find out if there is other magic involved, since his mate has no scent whatsoever, and Colt only asks about the bond, he was supposed to be getting a witch to come for that, AND for finding out what other magic might be in play, but do you think that is even anywhere in the narrative? And Colt has suspicions he doesn’t tell Maddox?! Seriously?!
Maddox gets to the cabin after spiriting has mate away, and then says let’s talk about it in the morning? You just kidnapped her, what? That was totally stupid. It made no sense, along with the fact that he didn’t have a copy of their marriage certificate.
Evangeline knows she has memory loss. Why is she written to be such an idiot in the things she says? I get she’s been kidnapped, but let’s be real, she’s not going to dismiss someone telling her he knows her, shows knowing her, even if she was kidnapped. She kept repeating she didn’t know him, KNOWING she has memory loss and she talks like she doesn’t.
The witch visits Evangeline in her dreams, and sounds so delusional, yet Evangeline wakes up and remembers it, and thinks she is not going to tell Maddox because what if the witch was right and he was mistaken about her being his mate? Is she stupid, or is she stupid? Earlier she claims to know how wolves think of their mates, so why would she think this? It’s just dumb. Can we get a smart, intelligent, non-idiot acting h? Not in this book.
He drugged her the first time, okay made sense, though wrong for him to have done. The second? Why? The was no reason.
The h sneaks out behind the H, she doesn’t leave as she hears her “boyfriend” talking about the hiding her scent, but she doesn’t hear everything else he was yelling? He yelled out how the h and H were mates! That he hid her scent for that reason, so H wouldn’t be able to scent and find her, yet she doesn’t hear him?
Why would she think that Adam loved her? He KNEW she was mate to Maddox and INTENTIONALLY kept it from her then pursued her. That should have been an immediate telling him she never wanted to see him or have any contact with him again, not excuse his behaviors as because he loved her and people do stupid things when they love someone. What he did was from obsession, selfish and self-centered. She should not care why he did it, telling him he showed that he didn’t really care about her with what he did and his deliberate deceptions. Maddox was an arse for his deception as well and the things he did, he doesn’t get a pass, but his was not on Adam’s level.
Pricilla drama is overdone and unnecessary cliché drama. There are dire consequences for messing with a bonded mate in the para community. Yes crazy wouldn’t care, but still. And the whole talking to the threat person and broadcast how he’s coming for her so she has plenty of time to do something and get away - major eye roll cliché ridiculousness.
There’s no pack interaction, no interaction with his parents, no confrontation be Evangeline with Adam or her mother, we just get told about both, both of which is super tame given how they lied and deceived her for three years.