Imagine, if you will, an alternate earth where magic exists, along with many other mystical creatures: vampires, wizards, alchemists. Now, try to envision a different time. World War 2, to be exact.
In a time when a war is raging, and nothing is as it seems Isabella George finds herself in a tough situation. She’d grown tired of fighting, surviving and doing things that she’s been told were necessary for the well-being of many. Isabella George is a double agent (triple even) with the power of alchemy, which she needs to keep concealed. She realizes that she needs to go on one last mission and that her “particular set of skills” would be beneficial in order to accomplish it.
This world is jam-packed with magic, mayhem and the unknown—this includes Isabella’s past, for she longs to know what happened to her father, whom also honed her same talents. The only problem is that there is much more that Isabella doesn’t know, than what she does.
I had some real problems with this story—too many, to be honest. I truly dislike it when there is a book which lures me in with its idea (potential premise) then lets me down completely. This, unfortunately is one of those sort of books for me.
At one point it got so bad, that I began to nitpick. I don’t typically nitpick.
Suffice it to say, that I had a hard time getting through this book and I am going to give you a list of reasons why.
However, before I go there, I’ll start with the things that I liked about the read.
Pros:
1. I really liked the cover. There is something about abstract, simplistic art that always captures my attention. This book really nailed it in that aspect.
2. The idea. I am always attracted to “Out of the Box” literature. I love new ideas and original thoughts. So I found the premise to be intriguing and alluring. What nerd (like me) doesn’t love a good “alternate world and history” bit?
3. Stella (the best friend/office mate), I think was my favorite character. Out of all of the many characters that were introduced, she seemed like the most genuine.
That was about all I can present to you in the form of positives. I’m sorry. Now, before I get into the negatives, I feel the need to explain a few things about myself as I’ll be presenting you with the negatives from that perspective.
If you are anything like me, you enjoy a complex read, however said “complex read”, must be easy to follow.
This is what I mean:
In an abstruse read, there must be a steady rhythm and flow; a comprehensive “time line”, if you will. Something that while subtly unraveling an enigmatic story line will help the read not lose track of the happenings.
Think of it in a “Alfred Hitchcock’ sort of way. Our beloved Mr. Hitchcock had a knack for presenting a complicated story in a very comprehensive way. Then at the end, he’d hit us with a twist and left our mouths wide open and our minds blown. That is the sign of a truly genius way of writing a story which entails many facets.
It must be easy to follow, period. So, once again, if you’re anything like me, if a story is too difficult from the very start, then you find yourself undeniably frustrated and ultimately angered.
That being said, let me get into my thoughts as it pertains to the Cons.
Cons:
1. There were way too many characters introduced too quickly.
2. There were way too many different “groups” introduced too quickly.
3. The writing feels displaced. I’ll explain. While it’s based in the past, the writing is significantly modern.
4. The main character is supposed to be American, residing in England, yet her personality is too unstable. One minute she seems more English than American, the next minute it’s the other way round.
5. There were too many instances in which there was modern language/slang introduced into the story that did not exist in that day and time.
6. In the first few chapters, you are tossed directly into the middle of the action without even knowing how you got there. Basically, it was all over the place. I couldn’t, for the life of me, establish one main time line.
7. Then the story stagnates and basically loses all liveliness. Yet, still we are continually introduced to more and more characters without knowing who anyone really is, or what their actual purpose in the story is.
8. Way too many “code names” for the characters. You may need a pen and paper to keep track of who everyone is and what their code name is, and what role they play.
9. After a while the main character began to tick me off. She just seemed annoying after a while.
10. This book has several instances of “odd grammar” throughout. Little things, like not putting a space after an ellipsis. As well as too many ellipsis used.
11. Some awkward sentence structure as well. For example: (PDF Page 8) “I knew that if I kept pushing myself, that I’d faint.” It just sounds weird. It should be “I knew that if I kept pushing myself, I’d faint.”
12. Another example of odd grammar is whenever the main character, or any character for that matter quoted what another character said it was written incorrectly. Here is what I’m referring to; “Hmph…well enough. At least acknowledge all the hell I went through to get this formula here.” It should have been, “Hmph…‘well enough‘. At least acknowledge all the hell I went through to get this formula here.”
13. There was more odd terminology used, such as “high school girl”. In England it’s known as “Secondary Education or Secondary School”.
14. Oddly enough, I found a few hidden references to Sherlock Holmes. Like Baker Street, and Office #221B. Just weird. It made me wonder if it was intentional or not.
15. Most of the organizations named throughout the story weren’t even really explained. So the reader had no way of knowing what they really were.
16. Much of the characters seemed unoriginal. Like, a lot of the “bad guys” all sounded the same to me.
17. Even up until the very last chapter we are STILL being introduced to MORE new characters. This should be the point where things are being resolved. Yet, they are not.
18. There is absolutely NO resolution in this story. None of the problems were truly solved, things were still left in the air, there is a whole new level of conflict that is introduced—it’s an utter cliffhanger.
To make a long review, as short as I can without getting into anything else, I was very let down by this read for many reasons. I can only hope that the other two books are better because if I were to base my desire to read the other books on my experience with this one, I probably wouldn’t even attempt it.
Truthful Verdict: 2 Stars. I was highly unimpressed with this story.