This is not the greatest piece of literature in the world…but I still liked it!
Unlike the other ones I’ve read of this series so far, there were more translation issues in this one. My favorite was when Kirito came out with “I am restlessness.” Of course my brain went straight to the overblown and dramatic, the tone deepened, the scene darkened as I imagined him as the embodiment of restlessness, its avatar in the digital world…unfortunately my imagination broke down right after that because the next sentence simply didn’t match the Otrantoesque scene in my head. It would have been pretty epic if he had meant to say that and had some sort of whole subplot built around it but Alas, it was just a mistranslation…sigh.
The female characters in this one are just as laughable and two dimensional as the others. While being full of tropes, they are still not as bad as Elric of Melnibone, so I give him some props in that area. I would probably have bashed this a lot more of I didn’t have intimate experience with how much worse it can get.
The one tiresome aspect of this particularly novel is the tropeness of Klein. He actually had some characterization in the anime, and in the other books so it was sad to see him reduced to awkward hormonal socially inept gamer guy. Well that and Kirito’s pointless wandering into calculating the internal dimensions of a dungeon. I mean seriously? The character even comes out and says it was pointless? If you know it is so, you should delete it! Leaving it in as a joke just makes it even more lame, cut such nonsense out.
But…I still liked it. I enjoyed it. It made me laugh, even as it made me cringe. I’m going to read the next one…and the next…and probably the next as well, because they are fun and I actually like Kirito, even if he is have awkward and half annoying. He’s cute. Like the baby brother I never had. I wish I could dive in and explain females to him, he needs it.
On the other hand, there is one good thing in this book. Kirito leaves the safety of the city to go and adventure on his own because he understands a fundamental truth, you can not cower in the safe zone. You will never grow, and when that safety dissolves, as it inevitably will, you will be so weak that you die on the first negative encounter. You have to go out. You have to explore and you have to become stronger, so that when the safety fails, you are not left mewling to die. When you go out and explore you become incrementally stronger with each trial that you face, but if you stay in the safe zone, you stay the same without any chance to grow, and that’s tragic.