The love story was great, 5 stars for that. Xavier's sex game was not boring. His chaser!
And he says things like:
“You are not prey to be hunted. You, Sweetness, are a deity. A goddess who would have me, a mere man, as your loyal priest. If I were to taste you, imbibe you, I would forsake everything to feverishly worship at your feet, living for the next moment with you. My thoughts? Consumed by you. My dick? Blessed by your touch until I was nothing more than one of your many followers lighting incense in prayer. You would ruin me… with one . So, as much as I would love to set up an altar to that ass, self-preservation dictates I decline your offer.”
But I was constantly saying, "Wait, I'm confused." Things would jump ahead, then go back, all in the same event. And there was event, after event, after event. A good half of them could have been eliminated without negatively impacting the story. But I kept reading because I had to see what was going to happen, so...
It was worth it for the love story.