Harbinger of Justice is a fast, immersive fantasy debut that pulls you straight into a harsh desert world full of shadow magic, political unrest, and creeping horror. Set mainly in the desert city of Yontar, the story follows two younger characters dragged out of street-level survival and two more experienced adults whose past choices come back to haunt them. What starts as a personal struggle for survival slowly opens into something much bigger: an ancient power, a growing rebellion, and a vision of justice that is anything but simple. The plot moves quickly, often with real tension, and there is a strong sense that something terrible has been waiting beneath the sand for a long time.
The world-building is easily the book’s greatest strength. The Egyptian-inspired setting feels strange, lived-in, and increasingly unsettling the deeper you go. Architecture, myths, underworld factions, and shadow-based magic all work together to create a place that feels distinct from standard fantasy fare. The magic system is especially intriguing, mysterious even to those who wield it, and the cosmic-horror undertones give many scenes an eerie edge. Rai’s point of view stands out in particular, thanks to his sharp voice and his shadow companion, Fox, whose presence adds both tension and dark humour. Nya’s storyline is more emotionally raw, especially in how it handles her relationship with her abusive, sick mother. It is uncomfortable at times, but refreshingly honest and rarely explored this deeply in fantasy.
The book is not without debut-level rough edges. The ending feels rushed, with the final stretch resolving major plot threads and character arcs too quickly. Several flashback chapters slow the pacing and feel more like backstory dumps than natural parts of the story. Some character decisions, especially from Nya, can feel inconsistent, clearly serving the plot rather than the character. Dialogue is functional but sometimes repetitive in structure, and a few moments near the end rely on convenient travel and timing, which lowers the sense of danger when it should be highest.
Even with these issues, Harbinger of Justice remains a strong and engaging read. It delivers memorable characters, a vivid and unusual setting, and a morally grey conflict where intentions and ideals clash rather than neatly divide into good and evil. The foundation is solid, and the promise for future books in the series is clear.
Verdict: A strong fantasy debut set in a vivid desert world filled with shadow magic, ancient mysteries, and moral grey areas. The world-building and atmosphere shine, and characters like Rai and his shadow Fox stand out. The ending feels rushed and pacing stumbles at times, but overall it is an engaging and promising start.