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Prevailed Upon to Marry is a forced marriage Pride and Prejudice variation perfect for fans of romantic comedy and chivalric heroes.

To love and be loved in return—what more could any rational person wish for? THE NEWS OF ELIZABETH BENNET'S ENGAGEMENT hits Fitzwilliam Darcy with all the force of a runaway carriage. That she is set to marry her toadying cousin, Mr Collins, only makes the travesty worse. But what can he do?

ELIZABETH BENNET DOES NOT wish to throw herself away on Mr Collins, but with the hedgerows looming ever closer, she has not much choice. When Mr Darcy arrives at Longbourn just in time to present her with an alternative, she has to ask herself—is he truly the last man in the world she could be prevailed upon to marry? Or is it Mr Collins? The answer is a simple, if surprising, one. HOWEVER A JILTED BRIDEGROOM is not so easily put aside, particularly not when it is Mr William Collins, and so Darcy and Elizabeth are required to flee to Scotland, taking the daring step of eloping together. With conflicted feelings between them and determined pursuers hard on their heels, the road to matrimony has never been bumpier but the happily ever after promises to be sweeter for it.

272 pages, Paperback

Published May 4, 2023

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Mary Smythe

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Mary Smythe is a homemaker living in South Carolina with a rather useless BA in English collecting dust in a closet somewhere. She discovered the works of Jane Austen as a teenager, thanks to the 1995 BBC Pride and Prejudice miniseries featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, and has since gone on to read everything written by Ms Austen at least once yearly, always wishing that there were more. She has been writing since 2001, but only discovered Jane Austen Fanfiction in the summer of 2018.

Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.

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1,337 reviews125 followers
March 21, 2025
Every wedding is a big wedding; especially the small ones. ~ Liz Coopersmith

Whenever Elizabeth had previously indulged in girlish fantasies of her wedding day, she crafted a lovely image of it … Most importantly, the gentleman awaiting her at the end of the aisle — tall, broad, and darkly handsome — would be one whom she could love and respect in equal measure … The greatest tragedy, however, was the bridegroom; he was a man she could neither love nor respect in any measure … Elizabeth had even dreamt that another man, a secret admirer, might arrive on her doorstep and beg to take Mr. Collins’ place because he simply could not bear to think of her married to another.

The quotes above set up the premise of this story: Elizabeth Bennet’s father has not supported her refusal of the Rev. William Collins’ proposal and has insisted she marry the pastor.

So, there she is, dawdling on the church steps, reluctant to enter and repeat her vows when, out of the blue, a carriage arrives at the church. Her dreams come true!

Well, not exactly true, but partially true.

In life, it’s not where you go, it’s who you travel with. ~ Author Unknown

Caroline Bingley, in a moment of stupidity, laughs at Elizabeth’s fate to her brother and Mr. Darcy, her intended (intended by Caroline at least). After weeks of debate, Darcy reaches an immediate decision. He will travel at once to Meryton and propose marriage to Elizabeth Bennet!

Quote from the book: Bingley hurried to keep up. “But why? Where are you going?”
“Hertfordshire.”

A second proposal is made; an acceptance is given; a blessing is received from the bride’s father. Canceling the wedding creates its own issues, including Mr. Collins’ belief in the cradle betrothal agreed upon by the former Fitzwilliam sisters.

The easiest solution resides in the carriage and a speedy trip north to wed in Scotland.

Friendship is formed and turned into a stronger feeling as the journey progresses. Quite a strong friendship, indeed.

Pursuit by an enraged but still noble patroness and a jilted clergyman follows. Mr. Collins is clearly in over his head and suffers consequences. Loved it!

Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired. ~ Robert Frost

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,680 reviews79 followers
July 13, 2023
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars

This is a fun choice for a P&P story when you're in the mood for something light.

The prologue will certainly grab your attention. It's not too long after the Netherfield ball on the morning of Elizabeth Bennet's wedding - to Mr. Collins! On the steps of the church, with everyone else waiting inside, Elizabeth pauses before she must go in and bind herself for life to her repulsive cousin. As a VERY reluctant bride, she prays for a hero to swoop by and rescue her. A carriage rolls up, and Mr. Darcy jumps out and immediately begs her not to go through with it and to marry him instead.

The book goes back in time for the first few chapters to explain how things have come to this point. Then it's a race to Gretna Green. A determined Mr. Darcy and bewildered Elizabeth rush to marry over the anvil before Mr. Collins reaches Lady Catherine, who will raise legal questions about the supposed betrothal between Darcy and her daughter, Anne.

Darcy, not having experienced the Hunsford proposal and rejection, is still an elitist prig. During the long trip, Elizabeth feels torn between gratitude that she won't have to marry the loathsome Mr. Collins and fury at Darcy for his arrogant assumptions. It's quite the blow to him when he learns she was astonished at his declaration of love and does not reciprocate his feelings. The two have a great deal to work out on their way to Scotland, not the least of which is their physical attraction to each other, which grows exponentially over their several days and nights of travel.

Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins remain dogged in their pursuit despite being repeatedly thwarted along the way. The author presents them as more comical than fearsome. Lady C. is far from rational, and her cleric is a terrified idiot who idolizes her despite all the verbal flagellation she heaps upon him.

The book is very well written with a nice balance of humor and romance. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

There is mature adult content.

I received a free copy via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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832 reviews1 follower
May 23, 2023
What a fantastic and original story this turned out to be. It was so fun to see D&E get to know each other better as they traveled north. Darcy learns a lesson about pride, Elizabeth learns to give Darcy a chance, and not jump to conclusions. As for the other characters, Mr. Collins is a puffed up toad. Lady Catherine goes to great lengths to interfere. Darcy’s family is more accepting and nearly everyone at Longbourn is happy. Jane and Bingley get their happily ever after. We even get a glimpse of married life at Pemberley. It’s a quick read that I finished in a few hours. It’s so absorbing I couldn’t read fast enough or put it down. I’ve already gone back to reread several favorite scenes.

I received an ebook from the publisher via Booksprout and voluntarily leave this review. All opinions are my own.
899 reviews70 followers
May 18, 2023
My Rating: 4.5 * rounded up to 5*

“Am I too late?” (quote from the book)

Wow! Hang on to your bonnet and top hat, you are in for a wild ride! Ms. Smythe has done it again with an original premise that completely captured and held my attention! How could it not, with Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth confined to a carriage for a journey to Scotland! What they weren’t expecting was being pursued by Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine de Bourgh!

“Of course he dared; he would risk this and so much more to save her – save them both – from a lifetime of misery and regret.” (quote from the book)

After refusing Mr. Collins’ proposal and supported by her father, Elizabeth is soon being told she must marry him. What could possibly have happened that would make her father reverse his decision? Just minutes from marrying Mr. Collins, Mr. Darcy appears with Mr. Bingley. What a proposal! What drama soon begins.

“Oh, would her internal conflict never cease? One minute full of gratitude and tenderness for the man beside her, the next infuriated by him, only to return to being utterly smitten by his guileless solicitude.” (quote from the book)

What I loved best is the communication that takes place within the carriage and at the inns they must stay at. Mind you, the first day was rather bumpy with Mr. Darcy having his Hunsford moment, but each truly try to work through their misconceptions and miscommunications to come to a better understanding of each other. I loved this Mr. Darcy despite his blunders, and I also loved how Elizabeth worked through her anger by pausing to think before she said something she would come to regret.

“I would not listen to that oaf in any case. Mr. Collins is a pitiful, spiteful man with more words than sense.” (quote from the book)

As for this Mr. Collins, he gave me the shivers. He was so full of his own consequence and with his connection to Lady Catherine de Bourgh. Oh, what a pair they made and what a comeuppance he had. But I will admit to feeling he would crawl out of the woodwork and appear again.

I highly recommend this adventurous romp to Scotland!

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,333 reviews78 followers
June 12, 2023
Darcy is moved to action!
Mr. Bennet’s ill heart makes him renege on his decision to support Lizzy refusing Mr. Collins’ proposal and he demands they now marry to save the family upon his death. About to enter the church, Darcy arrives in the nick of time and begs her to marry him instead. I loved the way Darcy and Bingley find out about Elizabeth’s engagement to the toad.

““Are you married?” Elizabeth glanced back at the closed door between herself and the altar. “Not yet. I am about to be, but I needed some air.” “Thank God!” Mr Darcy collapsed to his knees and grasped her hands.”—quote from book

Darcy proposes and Elizabeth accepts him with Mr. Bennet’s approval. However, a threat from Collins appears to give Mr. Bennet some doubt and results in Jane quietly pushing them to elope, which they do. The journey to Gretna Green allows them some conversation, while unknown to them, they are being pursued by Lady Catherine and Collins. Requited love develops between them quite fast, and .

Another enjoyable read I have come to expect and anticipate from Ms. Smythe. Well done.

Some content is mature, but not graphically expressed and is fade to black.

Recommend

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published ebook for my Kindle library.
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2,688 reviews201 followers
June 19, 2023
The author's story description is perfect, IMHO.

As Elizabeth decides to accept the lesser of two "evils" (in that she neither loves or admires either Collins of Darcy) she and Darcy decide to elope to Gretna Green as the quickest and safest way to protect against both Collins' and Lady Catherine's determination to prevent that marriage. And they are pursued all the way there.

I especially enjoyed reading of their interactions as they travel, with all haste, to Scotland. Darcy's disdain of her family is still there and to be dealt with. Of course, they are meant to fall in love, whether it be before they marry or after. In this story being forced together for the long journey brings that about earlier than expected for Elizabeth. Loved reading of the relationship reaching the levels described.

Yes, Darcy was already in love and that is why when he heard from Bingley about the planned wedding between Collins and Elizabeth, he rushed to Hertfordshire, hoping to be on time to prevent the ceremony.

I enjoyed this story and highly recommend it.
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372 reviews27 followers
May 22, 2023
Review also posted on my blog

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Elizabeth Bennet rejects the proposal from Mr Collins, her father’s heir. Mr Bennet supports her decision.

Mrs Bennet views the match as essential to keeping a roof over her family, after the death of Mr Bennet.

Both Elizabeth and Mr Bennet think Mr Collins is a slimy, sanctimonious fool.

Unfortunately, the following day Mr Bennet changes his mind, having discovered his heart is rapidly failing.

Elizabeth is horrified at the prospect of marrying a man she could not respect and grief stricken at the imminent loss of her beloved Papa.

She hopes someone will rescue her, but eventually resigns herself to her fate.

Fitzwilliam Darcy is in love with Elizabeth but has a duty to his family. Only a well connected and/or rich wife will do.

However, on hearing of Elizabeth’s betrothal, he decides he would rather be happy than dutiful.

Arriving minutes before Elizabeth enters the church, Darcy makes a passionate proposal, to a rather stunned Elizabeth.

While Elizabeth has never liked Mr Darcy, he is handsome, intelligent and seemingly enamoured. She quickly accepts.

Everyone is delighted, except of course Mr Collins.
Obstacles start being presented, so Jane Bennet encourages Elizabeth and the very proper Mr Darcy to elope!

The journey to Gretna Green is long and slow, but it does give our dear couple time to really get to know each other, in more ways than one.

Mr Collins is in pursuit with Darcy’s aunt, Lady Catherine de Bourgh.
Collins only wants Elizabeth so that he can mistreat her and break her spirit. All for the crime of rejecting his first proposal.

You will be pleased to know that his comeuppance is very appropriate.

The characters of Darcy and Elizabeth are well drawn. You do have to overcome the speed of Elizabeth’s volte-face and the impropriety of the couple anticipating their vows!

However, it is done in a tasteful manner.

I really enjoyed this book and read it in one sitting. I heartily recommend it.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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122 reviews2 followers
February 14, 2024
Running away from unhappiness

Moments before Elizabeth Bennet marries Mr. Collins and heads towards what she considers a very unhappy fate, the promise of salvation appears at the last moment in the unexpected appearance of Mr. Darcy.
What we have are several races: the race of the abandoned groom in front of the altar in search of his bride; Lady Catherine's race, in search of the runaway couple before they marry in Scotland, Mr. Darcy's races to not only prevent Elizabeth's marriage to Mr. Collins but to prove to her that he is the right person for her.
Abandon, only Mr. Collins, because you don't want to abandon the book at all!.

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268 reviews4 followers
June 15, 2023
Worth waiting for!

I'd been anxiously awaiting the day this story was released, and it did not disappoint! (I must say, I love a story where Mr Collins gets his comeuppance!)
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1,736 reviews133 followers
October 6, 2023
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***

>>Rating: mature due to violence and a near assault. The smarmy comments and abusive language were rather disconcerting. Collins was a brute and a future with him would have been horrible.
>>Angst Level: yeah, there was angst galore with Lady C and Mr. Collins hot on the trail.
>>Source: I borrowed this through KU on 8-8-23 and volunteered to leave a review with my thoughts and impressions. This is not my favorite story by this author: [4 stars]

Mr. Bennet was not well and the situation at Longbourn was becoming dire. Mrs. Bennet, and her nerves, were convinced that her husband was dying. She was clamoring for Elizabeth to do her duty and save the family by marrying the heir. To Elizabeth, Mr. Collins was a repugnant brute who worshiped at the feet of his patroness, Lady Catherine de Bourgh. How had things gotten so out of hand? Bingley had left the area, abandoned his leased estate Netherfield, and left behind a brokenhearted Jane Bennet. Elizabeth could see no way out.

Little did they know that Jane’s letter to Caroline would save the day. As the ‘Terror of London’ gleefully regaled the happenings in Meryton to her sister Louisa, Darcy and Charles entered the room. Both were stunned and shocked to learn the wedding was scheduled for the next day. A fast chase and six left London the next morning at first light and barreled toward Meryton. A frantic Darcy leaped from the carriage and saw Elizabeth about to enter the church. He could only ask if it was too late. Bingley leaped out behind him and greeted Jane when she exited the church looking for her sister.

This was a quick read and a fast run to the border with a frantic Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins in hot pursuit. It was madness as our hero and heroine attempted to elude the dastardly duo.
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1,432 reviews
July 2, 2023
Greta Green is the destination for Lizzie and Darcy

4.5 stars rounded up to 5. Well written story of Lizzie and Darcy eloping. Fun read but not a story with lots of thing happening. Easy to inhabit the story and wish this was a a Hallmak movie.
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997 reviews345 followers
December 28, 2023
What If Mr. Darcy Pilfered Mr. Collins’s Bride?

Rating: 5 out of 5 stars

Source: Gift from Publisher


TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

THE PREMISE: Mr. Bennet receives a concerning report from Mr. Jones, and so he entreats his favorite daughter to reconsider the repugnant marriage proposal she just refused (because Mr. Collins obstinately will have no other). But just when she is about to walk down the aisle, someone quite unexpected arrives and gives Elizabeth a second option…

WHAT I LOVED:

- Distressing Reality: Being a woman in this time means not always having the freedom or right to choose your life. A reality that was previously unknown to Elizabeth. But not anymore. She has no choice, no time, and no alternatives. It is a rather bleak looking future for our Lizzy. I appreciated how Mary Smythe portrayed Elizabeth’s coming to terms with her fate and the spectrum of emotions she experienced.

- A Devil May Care Darcy: Ooh! I loved this swift-acting and overcoming-any-obstacles kind of Darcy. He is determined and he is tenacious. I absolutely adored him. I loved the moment he arrived in such panic and turmoil fearing he might be too late. His precipitate and persevering actions displayed the depth and strength of his regard more than any ill-chosen words could.

- Confined Communications: The road is long and bumpy for our travelers and they have a copious amount of time to think and talk. I always love these types of situations – when the hard questions come out and there is no escape from challenging discussions. I loved witnessing these characters learn to understand each other better and grow closer together through these scenes. These tense circumstances and their extreme isolation allowed their relationship and feelings to evolve at a more accelerated rate.

- Thoughtful Understanding: Elizabeth is blindsided by the turns her life takes several times in this novel. Twice she has agreed to marry a man with whom she never fathomed as her choice. But she adapts marvelously. I appreciated how Elizabeth considered both hers and Mr. Darcy’s situation, and that she recognized his potential regret. She was very rational and was not one to willfully misunderstand or quickly judge.

- Growing Intimacy: It doesn’t take Elizabeth long to become aware of the many estimable qualities of the man she is about to marry. And as a result she warms to his company and his person. *swoon* I loved how this relationship developed. Their progress and actions felt natural and plausible with just the right timing and the right circumstances. (NOTE: some scenes – nothing explicit – are suited for mature audiences).

WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER:

I thought it all was excellent as is.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 It’s not everyday you see Mr. Darcy steal a bride and make for Scotland – what an exciting romp!

💗 A beautiful love that grows with understanding, esteem, and earnest devotion.

🙈 Mr. Collins gets what he deserves in the most satisfying of ways!

Austenesque Reviews
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89 reviews8 followers
June 26, 2023
This is a charming tale, well worded and put together to be very satisfying indeed!

The start throws you immediately into Elizabeth’s anxiety as she approaches the church door to marry the Toady Mr Collins! She is forced to do her duty and save her family from the hedgerows.

Like a knight in shining armor Darcy rescues her at the very last moment! On his knees declaring his undying love. Lizzy is probably thinking she is hallucinating!

They alert Mr Bennet that Lizzy has accepted Darcy’s proposal. From there chaos erupts when he announces to the congregation and Mr Collins that there will be a wedding but with a different groom!

Collins is angry and lies that Darcy is engaged to Anne as he saw the contract.

Soon there is no choice but for our couple to take off for Scotland to marry over the anvil.

What an adventure! Saved from a life with disgusting Mr Collins and unexpectedly loved by a handsome rich man. Who she thought disliked her!

At first traveling was pleasant as they enjoyed talking about family and interests . Until Darcy plants a passionate kiss on Lizzy which both enjoyed.

But it freaks Darcy out , which begins a series of awkward interactions and miscommunications which puts a damper on an exciting adventure.

Afraid to even sit near her or touch her in any way for fear he will lose control and they will anticipate their vows! It is painful for Darcy. Which makes Lizzy doubt his feelings for her.

Meanwhile Collins informs Lady Catherine that Darcy stole his bride! She is so incensed that she demands he go with her to Scotland to stop that chit from stealing Anne’s intended.

I will not spoil the rest of the story but just know it’s one of the best P&P variations you will read! Well done Mary Smythe:)
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429 reviews46 followers
May 30, 2023
This story starts with Mr. Bennet being told he has long to live so he makes Elizabeth accept Collins when she doesn't want to. Darcy shows up on the day of the wedding and proposes to her. She accepts and due to circumstances, they elope to Scotland. Lady Catherine and Collins chase after them but Collins is the one who finds them after he is abandoned by her. They arrive at Pemberley after marrying but don't have a marriage on English soil after Scotland. That's just weird to me. There was really no conflict in this book at all except Collins and Lady Catherine chasing after them and honestly they weren't that much of an obstacle.

This book was extremely fast-paced and I would have enjoyed it was drawn out more with more of an obstacle to their marriage. I really would have enjoyed it if Collins and Lady Catherine would have had more consequences for their actions than what they received. It's an alright book if you are looking for a fast-paced and light read.

Rating: 3 stars

* I received an advanced copy from the publisher through Booksprout. All opinions are my own.
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1,211 reviews
June 14, 2023
Who knew Mr Darcy could be such a rebel? Not Elizabeth Bennet and definitely not Mr Collins!

This is a really enjoyable and well-constructed book with a clear plot which runs through to the end without distractions. The author has clearly taken her time to build a story full of adventure without slipping into farce at any point.

The emotional impact on Elizabeth of being prevailed upon to marry Collins is well described and sets the scene beautifully for the rest of the book. The shock and relief of the appearance of Mr Darcy in the nick of time followed by uncertainty and doubt of what their future will be is given just the right amount of page time. The reader is given much to ponder without being overwhelmed with emotions. I very much appreciated this as reading a book should be an interactive activity not a passive one. I enjoyed being able to explore for myself all that was happening within a well defined framework.
Once you start reading this is very difficult to put down

This is not an easy ride for Elizabeth and Darcy, the cramped conditions in a carriage and in the less than spacious inn rooms requiring them to confront their past as well as their hopes and fears for the future.

Lady Catherine and Mr Collins also had to spend time in a cramped carriage but this was a far less pleasant experience. Some of the richest descriptive passages in the book are spent in the company of their very badly matched pair and make for excellent reading.

I heartily recommend this to all who are looking for something more in their Austenesque reading.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
363 reviews8 followers
July 9, 2023
What a choice!

I was hooked from beginning to end. Nothing got done around here.

The premise of this story is that Darcy, hearing about the wedding of his dear Elizabeth to the oaf Collins flies to Meryton just in time to save Elizabeth from said wedding. He’s drop-to-his-knees romantic here and remains the hero all through the book.

However, in order to escape Collins’s accusations and lies the couple is encouraged to leave immediately and elope. What follows is an adventure, an emotional coming to a meeting of the minds and hearts, and an action chase plot to stop their flight to Gretna Green.

I can’t say much more without spoiling the great storytelling experience. Very little angst except the usual self doubts with both parties involved with ODC. But compelling in every scene. I so love this author’s books and look forward to reading the next one.

Highly recommended.
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410 reviews
December 22, 2025
Loved, loved this but wanted MORE - but not with ODC. This quick read could have easily been expanded to include more Jane & Bingley. I LOVED THIS JANE! Just wish we had more of her and that she would have stood up to the superior sisters. I actually wanted more of the calamity of a Collins/Lady Cat roadtrip. How long did she stay at the first blacksmith? Did Collins lose his position? I don't think the Archbishop would look kindly on him after assaulting E.
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22 reviews
June 12, 2023
I have read what feels like a million JAFF variations via Kindle Unlimited, and while I enjoy most of them, once I finish, I return the book to KU and go on to the next without much thought. Not so with Ms. Smythe's work. Other reviews will provide more details about our swoon-worthy and decisive Darcy, an exciting elopement, and ODC finding their way to understanding each other through long conversations. I'll just say that everything I love about Lizzy and Darcy is in this book. I enjoyed it so much, I bought a copy for my Kindle to support Ms. Smythe and her excellent writing. With this variation, Smythe has become an instant buy for me.
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1,222 reviews12 followers
September 17, 2023
A really different variation

If not for the prologue, I would never have read this story. A thoroughly interesting concept and an excellent job of writing it. I really enjoyed the segments with Lady Catherine. 😏😏
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183 reviews
June 12, 2023
An excellent variation, and very enjoyable too.
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273 reviews10 followers
September 20, 2023
Romantic, 3.5 stars

Darcy quite literally saves Elizabeth from a horrible fate as Mrs Collins. As they travel North, Elizabeth falls in love - and Darcy re-evaluates himself. Well edited.
1,190 reviews29 followers
June 18, 2023
Wonderful

A wonderfully romantic Darcy and Elizabeth story. Mr Bennett's health is poor, and in his desperation to see to his family's welfare after he dies, he rescinds his support of Elizabeth's refusal of Mr Collins' marriage proposal, and insists that she must now marry him, and quickly. Darcy learns about the upcoming wedding, and the news causes him to face his ongoing struggle to live without Elizabeth. He decides that he must have her, so he rushes to Meryton in order to offer himself to her as an alternate bridegroom. Elizabeth agrees, but Mr Collins makes threats that compel them to decide on an immediate elopement.

Mr Collins is pretty nasty in this version. Besides being a bumbling idiot, he's mean and brutish. As per usual, Elizabeth's feeling for Darcy in no way match his love for her, so there's a lovely period of getting to know each other for ODC during their travels to Gretna Green. Thankfully, there's an incident which ruins Elizabeth's opinion of Wickham before Darcy appears, so she's not holding that pack of lies over Darcy's head while they travel. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and I just love his character here. His attempts to win over Elizabeth and improve her opinion of him are so sweet and romantic. It's superb.

The book is well written and well edited. Besides the romance, there's a lot of drama to spice things up. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I recommend it highly for a fabulously romantic tale.
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June 13, 2023
Darcy hears that Elizabeth is to marry Mr. Collins the next day, and so he races back to Meryton to prevent the match. I adored the scene in which Darcy meets Elizabeth for the first time since he left with the Bingleys. It was swoon-worthy! It doesn't take long for Elizabeth to decide that she would be better off with Darcy than the horrible Mr. Collins, who is truly mean and unlikable in this book. Due to lies from Mr. Collins, and other circumstances, ODC find it necessary to elope to Scotland. We are able to watch Elizabeth and Darcy come to know each other better, and work through some of their misunderstandings during their travels. Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine continue to make trouble for Elizabeth and Darcy, but the two eventually reach their happily ever after!
Ms. Smythe has done an excellent job with this book. It was highly enjoyable. I read it in under 24 hours because I could not put it down. The book is very well written, and I did not see any errors. I hope that she continues to write well thought out stories that engage the reader.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
521 reviews2 followers
June 13, 2023
A wild ride and a happy ending

Elizabeth is almost forced to marry a dreadful Mr. Collins but rescued at the very last minute by our hero, Mr. Darcy. Due to complications, our dear couple embark on a wild ride to Scotland, pursued by Collins and Lady Catherine while trying to work out their history of arrogance, misunderstandings, pride, and prejudice. Very sweet romantic moments.
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588 reviews7 followers
November 4, 2024
reread
4.25*
Scandalous! Mr Darcy eloping and with Jane encouraging it no less. And... then the awkwardness begins. We spend a good half with ODC coming to know each other, correct assumptions and misconceptions on their trip northward. Sometimes painful. You can feel the tension. But you know that they get there eventually = overcoming their own obstacles and those created by others.
21 reviews
June 14, 2023
Loved it!

I read all the pride and prejudice variations when I run across them and this is definitely a favorite now.
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97 reviews
June 13, 2023
Good story, well written. Mr Collins is horrible & Lady C. Not much wickham. I will re read
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June 7, 2023
🐎 Prevailed Upon to Marry 🎄
A Pride and Prejudice Variation
In Love with Mr Darcy Series
✒️ Mary Smythe
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Release Date 06/12/2023
Publisher Quills and Quartos
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Prevailed Upon to Marry is a forced marriage Pride and Prejudice variation perfect for fans of romantic comedy and chivalric heroes.

To love and be loved in return—what more could any rational person wish for?
THE NEWS OF ELIZABETH BENNET'S ENGAGEMENT hits Fitzwilliam Darcy with all the force of a runaway carriage. That she is set to marry her toadying cousin, Mr Collins, only makes the travesty worse. But what can he do?

ELIZABETH BENNET DOES NOT wish to throw herself away on Mr Collins, but with the hedgerows looming ever closer, she has not much choice. When Mr Darcy arrives at Longbourn just in time to present her with an alternative, she has to ask herself—is he truly the last man in the world she could be prevailed upon to marry? Or is it Mr Collins? The answer is a simple, if surprising, one.
HOWEVER A JILTED BRIDEGROOM is not so easily put aside, particularly not when it is Mr William Collins, and so Darcy and Elizabeth are required to flee to Scotland, taking the daring step of eloping together. With conflicted feelings between them and determined pursuers hard on their heels, the road to matrimony has never been bumpier but the happily ever after promises to be sweeter for it.

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I confess this was not the sort of action I imagined prime and proper Mr Darcy to set in motion, yet here he is, eloping with Elizabeth.
And even if there is no disastrous Rosing Park proposal, with a Darcy ardently in love, he still sees Lizzie’s kin as inferior to his wealth and lofty position and is sort of loud about it.
Why I awaited to see when things would spiral down as I did not imagine how it could be avoided with Darcy being Darcy.
But with their somewhat forced proximity, they have no other choice for both of them to work on their prejudices and wounded pride.
Which leads them in an interesting journey as they travel the country.

Through the different Pride and Prejudice variations I have read, I have seen many versions of Mr Collins, most of them presenting him as the sycophant he is, sometimes even mean, but I never imagined him as such a resentful bully. Yet this time his boorish behavior reaches an unforgivable level. Same is to be said about Lady Catherine. Another abusive being, who believes the world must bow to her every demand.
Luckily our dear couple have more people on their side than this petty duet so set against them.

4.5 stars for this enjoyable cheering tale

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3.5 rounded up.

This book finds the Bennet family, especially Elizabeth, in different circumstances. Mr. Bennet has been told by his physician that his days are numbered. This causes him to rethink his support of Elizabeth’s refusing to marry Mr. Collins as he is concerned his family is to be homeless and destitute in the near future. Elizabeth is forced to choose between her own hopes and wishes for her future, or the welfare of her entire family. She reluctantly accepts Collins and thus the stage is set.

Miss Bingley hears of Elizabeth’s upcoming nuptials in a letter from Jane and inadvertently puts things in motion that shake things up all over the place. She shares the news of Elizabeth’s marriage with her brother and Darcy and the thought of Elizabeth being married to Collins is enough to move Darcy into action. He leaves the next morning, determined to save Elizabeth from a life with Collins by offering himself as an alternative.

Mr. Collins, of course, does not take Elizabeth’s defection well and runs to Lady Catherine and a pursuit begins. I felt like this thread of Lady C and Collins was a little over the top and didn’t especially enjoy it, but I suppose there had to be some sort of villain and some angst.

The rest of the story centers around Darcy and Elizabeth and their journey, both literal and figurative. As Elizabeth spends more time with Darcy, she realizes he is more than just the lesser of two evils. There are some lovely romantic scenes between D&E and it’s enjoyable to see them grow closer and learn to understand one another. I did feel like the speed at which the couple fell in love seemed a bit fast and hard to accept. In a matter of three or four days Elizabeth went from despising Darcy to madly in love. I also questioned the lack of ramifications of Elizabeth jilting Mr. Collins at the altar. I thought with signed written contracts, there would be legal issues. It also seemed unlikely that no scandal would touch any of the parties involved given the seriousness of the circumstances and the rules of society for that time.

Overall, I enjoyed this book. It was not my favorite from this author, but it is well written and engaging. It provides a sweet love story that most fans of P&P will enjoy.

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