The premise of this book is really interesting and even though it has lots of characters I never lost track of who's who even though I have normally trouble remembering too many characters. I liked where the story was going, wanted to know more as I read on and the ending was fine if a little over the top. It's an exciting action and adventure story with some darker aspects and themes. I liked it...
BUT (yes there is a big but) this book needs an editor. I assume it did not have one, if it did they did a really poor job. There are so many typos (SO MANY!!), also lots of sentences that kind of say the same thing with just slightly different words in the same paragraph, actually repeating words in the same sentences and similar things. I'd say at least 1/4th of the book could go without any impact on the story and characters. The story could be a lot tighter and less meandering. And still I really enjoyed it which says a lot about the story. I hope in the future at some point it does get looked at by a proper editor. The story deserves it.
Also I read the ebook version of the book so maybe the print version has less errors in it.