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96 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 1964

...—drifted off upstairs,
downstairs, somewheres.
No more daily, trying to hit the head on the nail:
thirstless: without a think in his head
("A Strut for Roethke"; 18:10-13)
I had a most marvellous piece of luck, I died.
(25:16)
My friends,—he has been known to mourn,—I'll die;
live you, in the most wild, kindly, green
partly forgiving wood,
sort of forever and all those human sings
close not your better ears to, while good Spring
returns with a dance and a sigh.
(26:13-18)
Now—tell me, my love, if you recall
the dove light after dawn at the island and all—
(34:7-8)
Why should I tell a truth? when in the crack
of the dooming & emptying news I did hold back—
(34:13-14)
Bats have no bankers and they do not drink
and cannot be arrested and pay no tax
and, in general, bats have it made.
(63:1-3)
the sun in the willow
shivers itself & shakes itself green-yellow
(66:9-10)
and the fifteen changeless stones in their five worlds
with a shelving of moving moss stand me the thought of the ancient maker priest.
("Karesansui, Ryoan-ji"; 73:16-18)
But the snows and summers grieve and dream
(77:13)
Die Status
Old Henry came back in vain
(All: O! come on down)
A mile rowed to see ruin
(Pal: Easy, come down)
Mournful communes, no right use
(Pal: Er, ha, come down)
And sleeps consist of the death
(Pal: My god! Please! one
Tell it to the forest fire, tell it to the moon,The meaning of this could perhaps be unraveled, maybe some critic has even done it, with reference to Berryman's personal life or items in the news of the day, but more important than whatever this might mean is the poet's willingness to present the ostensibly meaningless, and not only at the level of content but of language itself, as with the dueling verbs in line five or the ambiguity of what "writhing" modifies in line six. Also representative is the contrast between lines of crystalline clarity or vividness, like "Tell it to the forest fire, tell it to the moon," with a confusing chaos of sometimes rebarbative verbal noise. While I referenced Melville and Bellow above, the Dream Songs often sound more like the end of "Oxen of the Sun" than like Moby-Dick, more like Naked Lunch than like Herzog:
mention it in general to the moon
on the way down,
he's about to have his lady, permanent;
and this is the worst of all came ever sent
writhing Henry's way.
The jane is zoned! no nightspot here, no barIn the introduction to this 2014 reprint of 77 Dream Songs, Henri Cole quotes Elizabeth Bishop: "Some pages I find wonderful, some baffle me completely. I am sure he is saying something important–perhaps sometimes too personally." If such a judgment is good enough for Elizabeth Bishop, it's good enough for me. Cole also quotes Robert Lowell comparing Berryman's difficulty to that of Hart Crane, another Elizabethan ranter adrift in the chaos of the twentieth century, speaking a seemingly private idiom in tortured syntax.
there, no sweet freeway, and no premises
for business purposes…
…literature bores me, especially great literature,The overall mode of the Dream Songs is mock-heroic. But the heroism is real—a heroism of enduring the roiling self in a roiling world, all shot through with misleading desires and bad news. From #53:
Henry bores me, with his plights & gripes
as bad as achilles,
who loves people and valiant art, which bores me.
—I seldom go to films. They are too exciting,This voice from 1964, then, is a very contemporary voice: it holds the tone of every "this is fine" quip on social media posted over some catastrophic link. Such a tone is probably inescapable for anyone in Berryman's position, anyone crossing Berryman's bridge, but I have never been comfortable with hearing it come out of my own mouth, and I am trying to think of a better name for it than "learned helplessness." Another famous line, from #45: "He stared at ruin. Ruin stared straight back." Berryman was fond of electing himself Whitman's poetic legatee; I remember what Whitman's own intellectual tutor had to say on the subject of gazing on ruins:
said the Honourable Possum.
—It takes me so long to read the 'paper,
said to me one day a novelist hot as a firecracker,
because I have to identify myself with everyone in it,
including the corpses, pal.'
Kierkegaard wanted a society, to refuse to read 'papers,
and that was not, friends, his worst idea.
Tiny Hardy, toward the end, refused to say anything,
a programme adopted early on by long Housman,
and Gottfried Benn
said:—We are using our own skins for wallpaper and we cannot win.
The ruin or the blank, that we see when we look at nature, is in our own eye. The axis of vision is not coincident with the axis of things, and so they appear not transparent but opake. The reason why the world lacks unity, and lies broken and in heaps, is, because man is disunited with himself.[2]Too severe? I doubt I could live up to it myself, and Berryman anticipates the critique in any case by semi-seriously declaring himself bored with great literature. But a literary period of which 77 Dream Songs is a major masterwork, a period still our own, should maybe think again about so lavishly indulging in nervous laughter and soppy-drunk tears amid the ruins. Whoever rebuilds in our place will assuredly be bored of us. I think I already am.
Wishin was dyin but I gotta make—can make for uncomfortable reading, yet it is important to contextualize this choice. For one thing, the sociolect Berryman here mimics is, as Helen Vendler and August Kleinzahler via Kevin Young point out, that of the minstrel show—in other words, Berryman parodies and travesties not black speech but white mens' prior parody and travesty of black speech. Another important point is the function of the minstrel voice in the Dream Songs; like all the voices in the poem, it represents a part of Henry's own consciousness, bantering with or taunting or arraigning him. Berryman thus makes the twofold claim that white American consciousness is constituted in some way by black American culture (cf. another of Berryman's friends and contemporaries, Ralph Ellison) and that the white man's idea of black culture may be only a distorted and self-serving mirror, a projection. All of this is in service to the marking of Henry not as universal subject, master of all he surveys, but with sociological precision as the white educated American middle-class male. Because such marking, such refusal of an elite class's spurious catholicity, is precisely the ideological work that critical theory calls for, I fail to see how Berryman's work (never mind the man) can be judged reactionary unless one is absolutely committed to the type of criticism Howard Hampton once so memorably labeled "holier-than-Mao."
it all this way to that bed on these feet
where peoples said to meet.
Maybe but even if I see my son
forever never, get back on the take,
free, black & forty-one.