~ 2.5 stars ~
After the second book, I have been such a BIG fan of these. I have been buddy reading them with a friend, and we have been loving them until we both got to this book.
The main issue with this book is that it starts 6 months later, after the 2nd book ends. It opens with Kora being able to hold her own against the person who supposedly spent some months “training” her how to truly fight not just to defend but to demolish opponents. Apparently she also learns mental techniques to quiet her mind, release anxiety/stress, and how to handle dangerous situations… But none of this is really shown to readers, just told. While I don’t think I had as much of a reaction, like her being a completely different person, I really disliked her immediate changes. An example of this is when she commandeers one of the motorcycles and decides she’s driving, without ever having learned, taken classes, the guys never instructed her. I believe one of the lines in the book about this was like “I’d been watching the guys drive these bikes for months now. If I hadn’t observed enough than shame on me for not knowing”. In MY mind, I’m over here like “No ma’am. THAT is definitely not the way that works.” Her changes, were just so UNBELIEVABLE, it made this book fall so flat. Like, please instead of telling the reader this happened, PLEASE SHOW US the process, or some of it..
I had this problem with the guys too. There’s all this talk about how dark Wolfe becomes without having access to his friends, not knowing where Jace or Kora is, he’s turned into this monster inhabiting his darkest places, trapped in his past within the Hell Hounds, and yet, NONE of that is shown. He’s just moody and broody BECAUSE no one REALLY knows what happened in those 6 months. Apollo was supposedly treated like a dog, surviving with water and a blanket like a prisoner, but he still gets some sort of stipend enough that Wolfe and Apollo buy a house without Jace knowing? I’m over here like, but did you guys have it bad? Like? We’re as readers supposed to believe that, but I’m not getting that out of how these characters are acting… Like I just really needed that depth of character, and it feels like the author took the easy way out by just saying some things happened but not really showing it.
I also felt that the intimate scenes were there just to be there. They were thrown in as a second thought.. Like, it’s not time to have a *MOMENT* when the house is literally burning down around you… Especially not to the point where you’re getting trapped by flames inside the house because you could not contain yourself.. Highly improbable, if not impossible scenario.
Lastly, this series was already reminding me of the Madison Kate series by Tate James, but I did like the men and FMC better in this series…. UNTIL this book. AND THEN this book and it’s last line… I’m sorry, that plot twist is the EXACT one Tate James used in her series. Personally, I know authors use many sources for inspiration, BUT this was much too close to that series for me to be comfortable with it.
I wanted to really like this series, but this book was a NO GO!
It’s hard because I do like the world and I like the characters, but the plot just really shifted and this wasn’t as well done. This could have been so good with some changes…