I was in love with this book until the last few chapters. The ending was such a cop-out. And even though the story continues for two more books, I don't think I will continue. This book is comprised of a fierce and heroine, and learning and noble king, and a completely useless yet witty secondary character that isn't even given a POV yet somehow comes out on top. In my opinion, the author what attempting a whole plot twist to throw readers off but all it did was change my opinion of the book as a whole and deter me from further reading her books. Don't get me wrong, the world building great and the dialogue and relationships are even better (for the most part).
SPOILERS:
Alix Black, the main character, is a noblewoman. All are required to serve the king in the army (2 years if memory serves right) She took the lowly position of a scout even though she could have been placed at a more respected assignment, simply because she has a knack for sneaking up on people (apparently). Immediately as the story begins, the king in which she serves, King Erik White is betrayed in battle by his brother, abandoned, while fighting the enemy. Alix and her companion, Liam, who's whit is enjoyable, (Despite his flirtations and mentions of his low birth, he appears to be nothing more of a friend) surges in battle to aid the king. She is equipped with a special weapon, a sword tied to her with some sort of blood magic. Alix finds herself in battle near the king as the king has become surrounded by the enemy. She saves him, although inadvertently causing him serious injury. She carries the king from the battlefield to the rest of the surviving men loyal to the king. Recovering from her own injuries in comfort bestowed by the king, she is happy to find her scouting companion and close friend, Liam, to have survived as well. Recovering and sulking over the betrayal by his brother, the king promotes her to captain of his guard and she immediately begins offering counsel as well as admonishing him for overexerting himself due to his injuries. She protects the livelihood of the king. Only a chosen few know he still lives. POV changes to that of the king. He is impressed by Alix and attracted to her. As Alix is torn between her new duties and the friend she made for herself in her service as a scout, coupled with the closeness of death, she falls in the flirtatious arms of Liam. Although the friendship has some substance (some being generous), it is another example of the hasty decisions made by Alix (some prove to be fruitful while others do not). The story progresses with a newly formed relationship between king and captain. He confides in her and trusts her judgement. Alix has a good mind for tact and isn't afraid to plead her case. When it comes to light that Alix's home is overrun by the enemy and her elder brother unaccounted for, the king deploys his general and some men to go looking, Liam included. Worried she may lose him, she sneaks out to the rest of the encampment and sleeps with her lowborn comrade, knowing that it can go no further. In Liam's absence, Alix falls into her duties and does well, avoided various attempts on King Erik's life. She and the king have various talks in confidence. Although she'd rather be with her comrades, she proves to be most acclimated in her new roll. When an attempt is made on Alix's life (she comes away with merely a wounded lip) Erik plays his hand. The kiss is rather steamy, and begins to progress to much more when the king utters Alix's nickname (that only her brother and Liam call her). Suddenly reminded of Liam, she pulls away. The king apologizes thinking that she does like want his attentions despite how much she responded in kind to his initiation. Alix is torn between her guilt about her rash decision to sleep with Liam and her attraction to the king and enjoying his advances. When Liam returns (without her brother in company) she confesses to him what happened with Erik. Liam is angry and asks her how it felt to be with the king. Alix confesses that it felt much like being with him. She comes to realization rather quickly that Liam is the former king's illegitimate son and therefore half-brother to Erik. Liam doesn't deny it. There relationship is strained at best. Alix knows that there can never be more for her and Liam but a relationship with the King is better than she could hope for. King Erik, recovered from his injuries and word of his non-death out in the open, comes to battle with the enemy, trying to gain support against his brother. On the battlefield he is met by more friends ad Alix's brother, Rig, arrives with his surviving men to win the battle. Rig and King Erik have been friends for years and their reunion is a happy one. It is no different for Alix. In war counsel, Rig notices immediately, the attraction between Erik and his sister. Alix confesses that she is torn between two but leans toward Erik. Her relationship with Erik blossoms. They open up to each other and become good friends, a relief from the mere flirtatious banter she had with Liam. Erik does not advance on Alix for sometime, focusing instead on winning his kingdom back. It is discusses to confront his brother head on at the castle and dare him to show his hand. An old counselor of Erik's arrives to advise him how to proceed. He also advises the king to forgo his long engagement to a woman he never loved and take up Alix as his intended instead. He does not agree but ponders the possibility. Alix and the King Erik share another chaste kiss and it is everything you want in a follow-up kiss yet leaving more to be desired between the two. When plans are fleshed out, the word of changing his engagement comes to light at the surprise of Alix. However, the two never get the chance to openly discuss it. Alix goes on a scouting mission (with Liam and others) to learn more about their enemy that has fights enthralled to beyond deathly injury. She and the others are almost lost in the process but make it back to the king. Erik tends to Alix (broken by what she saw) and she almost gives into her feeling for the king but he does not take advantage of her state. When time comes for the king to return home and face his brother, Alix confronts Erik about Liam being his brother. This brings his guilt to life. He finds himself much responsible for Liam's low upbringing, insisting when his father were alive that the the king's illegitimate child stay unknown to the world. Erik knows that he needs more support than ever and as a changed man (since Alix saved his life) he needs to right some wrongs. He has a private discussion with Liam and offers to recognize him as his brother, therefore giving him a title and a claim. Upon doing so he concludes that Liam and Alix are (were) lovers from a trinket Alix once carried that belongs to Liam. Erik feels guilty once again and decides that he must give up Alix (the one thing he's wanted for himself) to save his newfound relationship with Liam. How noble. I love him more every time I read from his POV. Anyway, Erik tells Liam that he will step down from Alix and that Alix still loves him. Although Liam is now a prince (his status having changed so that she now could marry him) Alix doesn't dwell on it. She believes their time has passed as lovers, though they have come to an understanding as comrades. It comes time for Erik to confront his brother. The meeting is ambushed and another attempt is made on Erik's life. Although Erik's brother helps during the attack, he is arrested and executed for his involvement in attempting to steal the throne. In the downtime of such events Liam confronts Alix to tell her that there is no engagement between her and the king (though she believed there to be) and that she is a free woman. Going against her penchant for hasty decision in her personal life, Alix takes her time. When she has made her decision, she goes to Liam and the two fall into each others arms. There is no discussion between Alix and Erik about their attraction or feelings. He doesn't fight for her. The enemy in encroaching. A plan is devised to take down the Priest among the enemy forces (the one who thralls his victims into fight to the death- like zombies) that Alix volunteers for. Liam volunteers to follow her into the enemy camp on their final scouting/sneaking mission to kill the Priest, hoping that will be a major hit to the enemy. I've never wanted a character to die so much. I thought that Liam's death would mean Alix's freedom to be with Liam without having to hurt his feelings. But no. They both survive. You can tell Erik still yearns for Alix as he carries her unconscious from the battlefield. The book abruptly ends with Alix's wedding to Liam. COP-OUT. This angered me to the bones. Liam's character has no substance other than his well written wit provided by the author. He doesn't lift up Alix, doesn't help her grow. Instead she overshadows him. However, in her encounters with Erik you see a growth in her, albeit more growth in the king due to her influences but still. I was greatly angered but that shattered hopes of an epic romance. I don't care it it's cliche. I want her to end up with the king.