Totally typical…. PHENOMENAL world and paradigm-building
Ok, this one is for the diminutive Asian assassin (not trademarked)…. Stealing inspiration from the ancient scrolls of Will and Grace, I am forced to admit….
I’m a Fanderle (and maybe even a little bit Fanilow, too), so, let’s face it , it’s pretty much a given that in the very least I’m gonna like it…. And I do.
The concept is well crafted, the magic system appears to be clearly and fully developed (Although, at the moment, we really know only as much as the hero does, so we are still learning, even as he is) and the essential elements (no puns intended.) of the story and plot are both “believable” and reasonable.
I had some problems with the dialogue, however, and this series bears the designation “Created by Michael Anderle,” rather than naming him the author. I’ve noticed this previously and again also note the differences in writing style so I’m leaning towards a ghost writer concept (or possibly, ***GASP*** an electronic Idiot!).
Overall, the writing shows exceptional promise with a first-class fluidity with language and word-choice. But the dialogue couldn’t sustain that. It’s difficult to describe my dissatisfaction, but much of the dialogue simply felt flat, and where it didn’t, it felt like it was rushed and the conversations over-simplified - with the characters reaching conclusions but lacking any road map showing us how they did so.
But believe me when I tell you that such consideration are but a trifle in comparison to the fun the book offers overall. So grab it, buy it, sit down and enjoy!