It's official. I'm not a fan of Patrick Larkin's writing. This book was, like the previous one, unnecessarily gory. Beyond that, though, I pinned down what else was bothering me. The writing is just... awkward. The first word I think of is "clumsy", like tripping over an ottoman. The writing is obtrusive, distracting from the story, constantly leaving me feeling like something's wrong and wondering what just happened.
E.g. The President of the United States calls his chief of staff, on an internal line inside the White House. He opens the call with, "This is Sam Castilla, Charlie." Like the chief of staff wouldn't immediately recognize the President's voice. Or have some kind of indicator that the call was coming from inside the White House, therefore limiting the number of people who could be calling. Or even know who "Sam" was, needing a last name for clarification. Did I miss something? Am I confused about whom he is calling? What just happened???
These two books are the only ones in the series so far that I haven't loved, and at the time of writing this review, I've already read the next two books after this one. That's eight books so far. These two were disappointing.