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The Smoke That Thunders
From a debut Nigerian author: a spectacular young adult fantasy rooted in West African mythology and brimming with adventure.
In this mesmerizing fantasy rooted in Urhobo and West African folklore, sixteen-year-old Naborhi longs for a life away from her small, traditional clan in Kokori. But as her rite of passage approaches and she is betrothed to an arrogant young man, Naborhi feels her dreams slipping away from her.
Then Naborhi becomes bonded to a mysterious animal and begins having harrowing visions of a kidnapped boy. She soon meets Atai, the son of an Oracle from a rival queendom, and learns that she is being guided by the gods. She and Atai, along with Naborhi’s eager-for-adventure cousin, Tamunor, set off across the continent to rescue the mysterious boy. But when they find him―and find out his true identity―Naborhi realizes there is more than just her freedom at stake: she must stop a war that has already been set in motion.
With lush, unique worldbuilding and a dynamic cast of characters, The Smoke That Thunders is a gripping story of political intrigue, fierce love, and what it means to be free.
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In this mesmerizing fantasy rooted in Urhobo and West African folklore, sixteen-year-old Naborhi longs for a life away from her small, traditional clan in Kokori. But as her rite of passage approaches and she is betrothed to an arrogant young man, Naborhi feels her dreams slipping away from her.
Then Naborhi becomes bonded to a mysterious animal and begins having harrowing visions of a kidnapped boy. She soon meets Atai, the son of an Oracle from a rival queendom, and learns that she is being guided by the gods. She and Atai, along with Naborhi’s eager-for-adventure cousin, Tamunor, set off across the continent to rescue the mysterious boy. But when they find him―and find out his true identity―Naborhi realizes there is more than just her freedom at stake: she must stop a war that has already been set in motion.
With lush, unique worldbuilding and a dynamic cast of characters, The Smoke That Thunders is a gripping story of political intrigue, fierce love, and what it means to be free.
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304 pages, Hardcover
Published April 9, 2024
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Erhu Kome
7 books80 followersErhu Kome is an Urhobo writer of speculative fiction and sometimes normal stories. She is also the premier female Nigerian author of bizarro fiction. She grew up in Benin city and is from the Urhobo tribe, so she has eaten and knows how to cook some of the most delicious foods in the world. She loves anime, cannot stop watching Bob's Burgers, and TV shows that has Eric Kripke involved in the making.
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March 17, 2024
This is definitely more MG than YA, but despite that, I still really liked this!
While the main plotline is pretty simple (girl who's the Chosen One goes on a quest to save a kidnapped person she sees in her visions), I loved how the author infused her Urhobo culture and beliefs into the story!
This is a feminist story that's appropriate for the MG demographic. I would've loved reading this as a young girl.
Usually I find Chosen One stories to be pretty meh these days (MC is too overpowered, there aren't actual stakes because of the MC being overpowered, etc.), the author had a good grasp on it in this novel without making Naborhi the typical strong female character.
I was a huge fan of how Naborhi stays true to herself and forges her own path, despite society telling her that her lot in life as a woman is to agree to an arranged marriage and be a good wife and mother. Even with an abusive childhood, Naborhi and her sister, Tega, manage to stay close and have a healthy relationship.
I loved the found family and lite romance. Especially for MG readers, the story heavily implies that it's definitely okay if your immediate family isn't your nuclear family. This point is really driven home since the society that Naborhi lives in really emphasizes the nuclear family as the prevailing option.
I wish there was more physical worldbuilding in the beginning. When Naborhi starts on her quest, the physical worldbuilding got better. But when Naborhi was in her hometown, there weren't really any good descriptions for me to latch onto.
I'm excited to read more from this author! If this has a sequel or becomes a series, count me in!
Thank you to Norton Young Readers and NetGalley for this arc.
While the main plotline is pretty simple (girl who's the Chosen One goes on a quest to save a kidnapped person she sees in her visions), I loved how the author infused her Urhobo culture and beliefs into the story!
This is a feminist story that's appropriate for the MG demographic. I would've loved reading this as a young girl.
Usually I find Chosen One stories to be pretty meh these days (MC is too overpowered, there aren't actual stakes because of the MC being overpowered, etc.), the author had a good grasp on it in this novel without making Naborhi the typical strong female character.
I was a huge fan of how Naborhi stays true to herself and forges her own path, despite society telling her that her lot in life as a woman is to agree to an arranged marriage and be a good wife and mother. Even with an abusive childhood, Naborhi and her sister, Tega, manage to stay close and have a healthy relationship.
I loved the found family and lite romance. Especially for MG readers, the story heavily implies that it's definitely okay if your immediate family isn't your nuclear family. This point is really driven home since the society that Naborhi lives in really emphasizes the nuclear family as the prevailing option.
I wish there was more physical worldbuilding in the beginning. When Naborhi starts on her quest, the physical worldbuilding got better. But when Naborhi was in her hometown, there weren't really any good descriptions for me to latch onto.
I'm excited to read more from this author! If this has a sequel or becomes a series, count me in!
Thank you to Norton Young Readers and NetGalley for this arc.
April 15, 2024
I love the West African setting with its folklore and Urhobo culture; it was very interesting to learn about. The story is a little slow to start, but an excellent (middle grade) read once it picks up.
February 17, 2024
5 ⭐ CW: violence, domestic violence, death of a parent mention
"Despite those obstacles, despite those boulders, the water moves fast and strong. It cannot be held back. It cannot be less than it is. That is how you are Naborhi. Like the unstoppable waters."
The Smoke That Thunders by Erhu Kome is a YA fantasy focusing on Urhobo and West African folklore. I was gifted this ARC by a friend, and I cannot recommend this enough! This was such a great stand alone book. It had such a unique voice and vibe unlike a lot of Western stories. The magic and fantasy was subtle, but the Black Girl Magic was fantastic!
We follow Naborhi Tanomare, a girl from a small village who wants so much more than to be valued by her bride price and what she can bring to a husband. When Naborhi starts getting visions of a boy needing help and a spirit fox, she is plunged into a journey to save him, stop a war, and leaves her provincial life behind.
We get to learn so much about what I assume is Urhobo culture, and there is a lot of background and world-building at first that sets us up for a hero's journey type of story. I love Naborhi, she is so strong willed and only wants freedom for herself and adventure. I also really liked her companions Atai, the cute son of an Oracle, and her comic relief cousin Tamunor. They were all such great characters that all had their own similar struggles around their parents' expectations of them.
Although this story was about saving a boy and stopping a war, ultimately it was about the importance of freedom and choice. The ability to choose your own happiness despite how difficult it might be to attain. I loved seeing all the different cultures and climates as our group travelled across the continent, and the multitude of strong, capable women. This was such a fun, short read.
"Despite those obstacles, despite those boulders, the water moves fast and strong. It cannot be held back. It cannot be less than it is. That is how you are Naborhi. Like the unstoppable waters."
The Smoke That Thunders by Erhu Kome is a YA fantasy focusing on Urhobo and West African folklore. I was gifted this ARC by a friend, and I cannot recommend this enough! This was such a great stand alone book. It had such a unique voice and vibe unlike a lot of Western stories. The magic and fantasy was subtle, but the Black Girl Magic was fantastic!
We follow Naborhi Tanomare, a girl from a small village who wants so much more than to be valued by her bride price and what she can bring to a husband. When Naborhi starts getting visions of a boy needing help and a spirit fox, she is plunged into a journey to save him, stop a war, and leaves her provincial life behind.
We get to learn so much about what I assume is Urhobo culture, and there is a lot of background and world-building at first that sets us up for a hero's journey type of story. I love Naborhi, she is so strong willed and only wants freedom for herself and adventure. I also really liked her companions Atai, the cute son of an Oracle, and her comic relief cousin Tamunor. They were all such great characters that all had their own similar struggles around their parents' expectations of them.
Although this story was about saving a boy and stopping a war, ultimately it was about the importance of freedom and choice. The ability to choose your own happiness despite how difficult it might be to attain. I loved seeing all the different cultures and climates as our group travelled across the continent, and the multitude of strong, capable women. This was such a fun, short read.
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January 29, 2024More than anything, I enjoyed the addition of Urhobo/West African folklore and seeing a young girl want to break the mold and make decisions for herself. Naborhi’s desire to experience and be more than her kingdom allows girls and women to be is what kept me reading. I wanted to see her achieve her dream.
I think early teen readers who enjoy a more simple story with low level action and adventure will like this. I’m an adult who frequently reads YA fantasy, so my issue isn’t that it’s YA. I found the conflicts to just be too easily overcome. The lack of tension and a prolonged sense of high stakes made the journey less exciting. Things were just too nice and neatly wrapped up. I’ve read middle grade plots that were more exciting.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the advanced eARC.
I think early teen readers who enjoy a more simple story with low level action and adventure will like this. I’m an adult who frequently reads YA fantasy, so my issue isn’t that it’s YA. I found the conflicts to just be too easily overcome. The lack of tension and a prolonged sense of high stakes made the journey less exciting. Things were just too nice and neatly wrapped up. I’ve read middle grade plots that were more exciting.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the advanced eARC.
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February 4, 2024i’m looking forward to reading this YA fantasy book that weaves in Urhobo and West African mythology and folklore. My 10 year old son loves mythology and is a precocious reader, i’m wondering if it would be interesting and appropriate for him to read or if it’s more teen content…
July 9, 2024
Engaging and fun - I liked the way she weaved in West African deities and culture into the classic "hero's journey" story.
November 11, 2024
"Despite those obstacles, despite those boulders, the water moves fast and strong. It cannot be held back. It cannot be less than it is. That is how you are Naborhi. Like the unstoppable waters."
The smoke that thunders is about a urhobo girl coming of age story, Naborhi is a strong 16 yr old who just wants to create her own path away from her small traditional clan in Kokori.
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I ended up really enjoyed this one, I loved west African folklore setting. We learn a lot about the background and world building, however while some world building is confusing, this one was not. I tried to read this a few times before actually getting through the book, however I think that was a me problem. I ended up listening to the audiobook and I really liked it and ended up liking the story more.
The smoke that thunders is about a urhobo girl coming of age story, Naborhi is a strong 16 yr old who just wants to create her own path away from her small traditional clan in Kokori.
Review:
I ended up really enjoyed this one, I loved west African folklore setting. We learn a lot about the background and world building, however while some world building is confusing, this one was not. I tried to read this a few times before actually getting through the book, however I think that was a me problem. I ended up listening to the audiobook and I really liked it and ended up liking the story more.
April 9, 2024
This was a quick read—I couldn’t put the book down! This is a wonderful YA story of a 16-year-old Urhobo girl (Naborhi) that wants to create her own path and not follow the traditions of her community. She wants a life of adventure and the freedom to choose her path. Naborhi has an endless amount of bravery and drive that is enviable. I loved the Urhobo and West African folklore and mythology that was included into the fantasy adventure.
I would read this again and I hope there are more books with these characters on more adventures in the future. An excellent first book debut.
*Provided a DRC (digital review copy) from the publisher for review. All opinions are my own.
I would read this again and I hope there are more books with these characters on more adventures in the future. An excellent first book debut.
*Provided a DRC (digital review copy) from the publisher for review. All opinions are my own.
December 16, 2023
This was a cute coming of age story, perfect for the early teen reader. It had a good balance of action with adventure. The characters were likable and the story was intriguing and inspirational. The implementation of elements of the authors culture was done well and really painted a detailed picture. Some parts of the story were a little long/ overly detailed but overall it was a good read. Felt like a story that your elders would share with you while sitting around the campfire.
Thank you NetGalley for the ARC
Thank you NetGalley for the ARC
April 24, 2024
Unfortunately, this wasn’t a good read for me. I wanted to like this much more than I did. The cover, West African setting, and the title really drew me to this.
The pacing wasn’t slow, but I didn’t mesh well with the writing style. So much of it felt like unnecessary details or sterile. We have a fox spirit, kidnapping, and trying to unite two kingdoms! Narborhi is educated and can fight hand-to-hand combat. Nothing about that sounds boring but the execution was.
One of the main conflicts/themes is that Narborhi has seen the horrors of marriage going wrong and leaving women destitute or shells of themselves. Her mother's experience really shaped her worldview.
I like that the book acknowledges that marriage (at least certainly at her age - 16 years old) isn't for everyone. Despite that, many of the characters (one of the male leads even) desired marriage but didn't gaslight or belittle Narborhi's feelings. There's a balance of good and terrible marriage(s) here, but the power imbalances with the majority of the young brides is made very clear.
I liked the Red Tapestry once it was introduced, a haven for women to showcase their skills and talents.
cw: spousal abuse; sexism; domestic abuse
The pacing wasn’t slow, but I didn’t mesh well with the writing style. So much of it felt like unnecessary details or sterile. We have a fox spirit, kidnapping, and trying to unite two kingdoms! Narborhi is educated and can fight hand-to-hand combat. Nothing about that sounds boring but the execution was.
One of the main conflicts/themes is that Narborhi has seen the horrors of marriage going wrong and leaving women destitute or shells of themselves. Her mother's experience really shaped her worldview.
I like that the book acknowledges that marriage (at least certainly at her age - 16 years old) isn't for everyone. Despite that, many of the characters (one of the male leads even) desired marriage but didn't gaslight or belittle Narborhi's feelings. There's a balance of good and terrible marriage(s) here, but the power imbalances with the majority of the young brides is made very clear.
I liked the Red Tapestry once it was introduced, a haven for women to showcase their skills and talents.
cw: spousal abuse; sexism; domestic abuse
February 3, 2024
*Thank you to NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for a copy of this eARC in exchange for my review*
Let me dive into one of January’s best reads, "The Smoke That Thunders.” This carefully crafted narrative skillfully weaves a tale that resonated with my inner teen reader, making me feel a wave of nostalgic emotions.
Naborhi, the central character, stands out as a wonderfully portrayed female lead, challenging the conventional norms of storytelling. What struck a chord with me was her resolute decision to defy societal expectations, particularly the concepts of an arranged marriage and the conventional roles expected of her. Naborhi's journey was a breath of fresh air as she remained committed to pursuing her own ambitions. Beyond the character dynamics, the plot and storyline held my attention effortlessly. The narrative was both engaging and cohesive, showcasing a seamless blend of adventure and character development. My only minor critique would be that the resolution felt a bit hurried. However, it's worth noting that this pace is not uncommon among some of my favorite YA authors.
Kome deserves so much praise for creating such vivid depictions, expert world building, and lovable characters. The beauty of this book lies not only in its fantasy elements but also in its ability to balance action and adventure without delving into excessively dark or graphic territory. This nuance made the reading experience thoroughly enjoyable and very appropriate for YA or younger readers.
This book promises a delightful experience for readers of all ages. Make sure to include it in your TBR list—missing out on it would be a literary loss.
Let me dive into one of January’s best reads, "The Smoke That Thunders.” This carefully crafted narrative skillfully weaves a tale that resonated with my inner teen reader, making me feel a wave of nostalgic emotions.
Naborhi, the central character, stands out as a wonderfully portrayed female lead, challenging the conventional norms of storytelling. What struck a chord with me was her resolute decision to defy societal expectations, particularly the concepts of an arranged marriage and the conventional roles expected of her. Naborhi's journey was a breath of fresh air as she remained committed to pursuing her own ambitions. Beyond the character dynamics, the plot and storyline held my attention effortlessly. The narrative was both engaging and cohesive, showcasing a seamless blend of adventure and character development. My only minor critique would be that the resolution felt a bit hurried. However, it's worth noting that this pace is not uncommon among some of my favorite YA authors.
Kome deserves so much praise for creating such vivid depictions, expert world building, and lovable characters. The beauty of this book lies not only in its fantasy elements but also in its ability to balance action and adventure without delving into excessively dark or graphic territory. This nuance made the reading experience thoroughly enjoyable and very appropriate for YA or younger readers.
This book promises a delightful experience for readers of all ages. Make sure to include it in your TBR list—missing out on it would be a literary loss.
March 28, 2024
Thank you to Netgalley and W.W. Norton & Company for this ebook arc!
This is a great coming-of-age story. It's engaging and a quick easy read. The balance between backstory and action/adventure is spot on. The beginning of the story draws the reader in and makes me think.
I love mythology and fantasy so this was a great read for me. I haven't read much about West African mythology and I think The Smoke That Thunders brings some of that forward (most mythology books I find focus on Greek or Roman myths). I loved the elements of West African mythology and wished there was a bit more because this book has left me very intrigued.
The Smoke That Thunders is a good book for older middle-grade readers to early young adults. This makes a very smooth transition and introduction to readers that are switching age ranges.
This is a great coming-of-age story. It's engaging and a quick easy read. The balance between backstory and action/adventure is spot on. The beginning of the story draws the reader in and makes me think.
I love mythology and fantasy so this was a great read for me. I haven't read much about West African mythology and I think The Smoke That Thunders brings some of that forward (most mythology books I find focus on Greek or Roman myths). I loved the elements of West African mythology and wished there was a bit more because this book has left me very intrigued.
The Smoke That Thunders is a good book for older middle-grade readers to early young adults. This makes a very smooth transition and introduction to readers that are switching age ranges.
April 30, 2024
The Smoke that Thunders is a debut YA Coming of age Fantasy story that is steeped in West African mythology. Readers take a journey with Naborhi, a young lady who desires more out of life and willing to fight for what she feels is right and just. In this coming of age story Naborhi discovers her true mettle. She learns about her connection to the gods and sets out on a quest of understanding and enlightenment.
Erhu Kome does an amazing job intertwining the intricacies of West African lore including but not limited to: religion, deities, female warrior tribes and lush world building. This is a YA Fantasy story that will appeal to all fantasy lovers young and old who thirst for adventure and learning about different cultures and worlds
Erhu Kome does an amazing job intertwining the intricacies of West African lore including but not limited to: religion, deities, female warrior tribes and lush world building. This is a YA Fantasy story that will appeal to all fantasy lovers young and old who thirst for adventure and learning about different cultures and worlds
April 7, 2024
Review to come! 🗡️
This was an adventure packed book rooted in West African folklore of the Urhobo people. While I thought the writing style made it feel more middle grade and the plot rushed here and there, it was still an enjoyable coming-of-age tale. 🌊
The book follows Naborhi as she finds herself dreaming of traveling the world instead of being married. While I liked that she was ambitious and had dreams that went against the norm, I found her to be rather young for some reason. Despite being 15/16 for the book, I kept thinking of her as 12/13 instead due to the writing/narration style. 😕
The side characters were enjoyable, but I do wish we got more time to know Moyo and Atai more, especially since they both come from other countries/tribes. I also think it would have been fun to see more of a focus on the relationship between Naborhi and Atai if Tamunor wasn’t there to provide comedic relief for the reader and be a weird third wheel to the duo. 🙁
Then the plot’s pacing felt rather odd. For the first third of the book, nothing really happens and then suddenly all the action starts. I wish there was a better pacing when it came to the introduction of new places and countries in the book so that the reader could get a better idea of how these places are different from each other. That and the quick introduction of the women of The Red Tapestry only to be over within two-ish chapters just felt too rushed to me. 😞
All in all, despite my misgivings and feelings that things fell into place just a bit too neatly, I did enjoy the story and characters. I just wish there was more angst and drama that I expect from a true YA adventure. ✨
Thank you to Norton Young Readers and NetGalley for letting me read this book for an honest review, and to the author for creating a fun adventure filled with folklore. 🦊
Overall: 3.5/5 ⭐️
This was an adventure packed book rooted in West African folklore of the Urhobo people. While I thought the writing style made it feel more middle grade and the plot rushed here and there, it was still an enjoyable coming-of-age tale. 🌊
The book follows Naborhi as she finds herself dreaming of traveling the world instead of being married. While I liked that she was ambitious and had dreams that went against the norm, I found her to be rather young for some reason. Despite being 15/16 for the book, I kept thinking of her as 12/13 instead due to the writing/narration style. 😕
The side characters were enjoyable, but I do wish we got more time to know Moyo and Atai more, especially since they both come from other countries/tribes. I also think it would have been fun to see more of a focus on the relationship between Naborhi and Atai if Tamunor wasn’t there to provide comedic relief for the reader and be a weird third wheel to the duo. 🙁
Then the plot’s pacing felt rather odd. For the first third of the book, nothing really happens and then suddenly all the action starts. I wish there was a better pacing when it came to the introduction of new places and countries in the book so that the reader could get a better idea of how these places are different from each other. That and the quick introduction of the women of The Red Tapestry only to be over within two-ish chapters just felt too rushed to me. 😞
All in all, despite my misgivings and feelings that things fell into place just a bit too neatly, I did enjoy the story and characters. I just wish there was more angst and drama that I expect from a true YA adventure. ✨
Thank you to Norton Young Readers and NetGalley for letting me read this book for an honest review, and to the author for creating a fun adventure filled with folklore. 🦊
Overall: 3.5/5 ⭐️
December 23, 2023
Imaginative!! May have tried to cover too much—would have liked a little more depth of character and setting development—but a good read.
March 21, 2024
Big thanks to Netgalley and the publisher (Norton Young Readers) for the chance to read an advanced copy of this book!
I liked this book a lot. It really fit what I have been looking for and desperately hoping for when I requested it. What I had been looking for was a non-western European inspired fantasy story and this book, influenced by Western African mythology and written by a Nigerian author, really fit the bill.
I like the world that's been created and really enjoy the little bits of world building that just are different from what I'm used to finding in fantasy stories. Things like what they eat and how they dress, small details that allow you to feel immersed in the world.
The characters are all likable, even if I found Naborhi a little frustrating at times - especially early in the book. But, she is a well developed character and I especially liked that she had to struggle with the idea that her best friend and her sister both like the system that she's wanting so badly to escape. While Naborhi is very much the YA fantasy kick-butt girl, she never dismisses the girls and women that prefer more traditional roles. She's not trying to overthrow a corrupt regime, she's just trying to find her place in the world.
The two boys, Atai and Tamunor, were good characters and both very different from each other with distinct personalities. (But, let's be fair, this is Naborhi's story and they are just here.)
I love, love, love the idea of the Red Tapestry. Without giving away spoilers, the idea for a group of women like this appeals to me - and appeals to me all the more because I know where Naborhi comes from and I can see just how much it appeals to her. (Also, as someone that has a really hard time reading books that have culture/s where women are second class citizens (or worse) I loved that there were so many capable women in this story.)
Finally, I would like to note that there is attraction here, but it is minor and so not the point. Which it is super nice to find a YA book that isn't focused on the romance. Instead, it takes the time to build friendships which is a win as far as I'm concerned.
Now the problems I had were pretty minor and forgivable, but they were there.
First, I had a slight issue with the pacing. I do think most of that was the fault of the synopsis covering such a huge chunk of the book and, in fact, giving away 75% + spoilers. Because of this, I kept waiting for the things mentioned in the plot to happen, which made the first 30% or so seem really slow and then it almost felt like the rest flew by too fast.
Also this is a debut novel. And it feels like it at times. Sometimes things are … under described? There is a bit of telling instead of showing. Not a lot, definitely not enough to ruin my enjoyment, but I do really look forward to what this author can do when she really starts perfecting her craft.
This review was duel posted to Netgalley and Goodreads.
I liked this book a lot. It really fit what I have been looking for and desperately hoping for when I requested it. What I had been looking for was a non-western European inspired fantasy story and this book, influenced by Western African mythology and written by a Nigerian author, really fit the bill.
I like the world that's been created and really enjoy the little bits of world building that just are different from what I'm used to finding in fantasy stories. Things like what they eat and how they dress, small details that allow you to feel immersed in the world.
The characters are all likable, even if I found Naborhi a little frustrating at times - especially early in the book. But, she is a well developed character and I especially liked that she had to struggle with the idea that her best friend and her sister both like the system that she's wanting so badly to escape. While Naborhi is very much the YA fantasy kick-butt girl, she never dismisses the girls and women that prefer more traditional roles. She's not trying to overthrow a corrupt regime, she's just trying to find her place in the world.
The two boys, Atai and Tamunor, were good characters and both very different from each other with distinct personalities. (But, let's be fair, this is Naborhi's story and they are just here.)
I love, love, love the idea of the Red Tapestry. Without giving away spoilers, the idea for a group of women like this appeals to me - and appeals to me all the more because I know where Naborhi comes from and I can see just how much it appeals to her. (Also, as someone that has a really hard time reading books that have culture/s where women are second class citizens (or worse) I loved that there were so many capable women in this story.)
Finally, I would like to note that there is attraction here, but it is minor and so not the point. Which it is super nice to find a YA book that isn't focused on the romance. Instead, it takes the time to build friendships which is a win as far as I'm concerned.
Now the problems I had were pretty minor and forgivable, but they were there.
First, I had a slight issue with the pacing. I do think most of that was the fault of the synopsis covering such a huge chunk of the book and, in fact, giving away 75% + spoilers. Because of this, I kept waiting for the things mentioned in the plot to happen, which made the first 30% or so seem really slow and then it almost felt like the rest flew by too fast.
Also this is a debut novel. And it feels like it at times. Sometimes things are … under described? There is a bit of telling instead of showing. Not a lot, definitely not enough to ruin my enjoyment, but I do really look forward to what this author can do when she really starts perfecting her craft.
This review was duel posted to Netgalley and Goodreads.
March 30, 2024
I loved reading about Naborhi her trying to forge a path for herself while others try to keep her on the path, they think is best for her. The traditional path of marriage, taking care of her husband and become a mother. But that is not what Naborhi wants for herself and has for some time now resisted in silence by learning to read something that is not allowed for the women of her village and learning to ride a horse and even fighting. All thanks to a man who has taken her under his wing wanting to make sure she can take care of herself. You also see her growth on throughout the book as a chosen one on a quest where she struggles with her choices first at home and then to go on this quest and even at times on the quest she wonders if she is strong enough to handle what could come their way. But still, she keeps persevering because in the end she knows this is what she needs to do for herself and her country. I really enjoyed reading her coming into herself as a person once she was able to determine what she wanted for herself.
The Magic and fantasy were subtle and was more focused on Naborhi and her journey and growth. I will say I wish there had been a little more magic and fantasy as I think it could have only enhanced the story and because I am so curious for more stories focused on magic/fantasy outside of European and western stories.
This is the authors debut novel and I think the writing style was very smooth and easy to grasp making it perfect for the target audience and for older audiences who are wanting maybe a gentler read but still get a great quest out of it. I enjoyed this book and have already reached out to my friends with kids in this targeted audience who I think will enjoy this book.
This book is about Naborhi a girl who is stifled by the expectations of her village and her perceived "worth" that will come with the bride price she brings. All that is expected of her is to marry, take care of her husband and take care of their children. But Naborhi wants and dreams of more than what is expected of her and so she is trying to plan her escape from the village so that she can explore the world she has only heard about in stories. But as she prepares for her rite of passage, she finds a fox who only she can see! Turns out he is a spirit fox and by finding and helping him she is now gifted with visions of a boy in need who she must rescue. So, she sets off with new and old friends in search of this boy because while she might not know who he is she can feel that he is important and if he is not found something bad is going to happen so she has to do everything she can to find him and stop whatever this danger might be.
I received a free ARC copy from NETGALLY in exchange for an honest review.
The Magic and fantasy were subtle and was more focused on Naborhi and her journey and growth. I will say I wish there had been a little more magic and fantasy as I think it could have only enhanced the story and because I am so curious for more stories focused on magic/fantasy outside of European and western stories.
This is the authors debut novel and I think the writing style was very smooth and easy to grasp making it perfect for the target audience and for older audiences who are wanting maybe a gentler read but still get a great quest out of it. I enjoyed this book and have already reached out to my friends with kids in this targeted audience who I think will enjoy this book.
This book is about Naborhi a girl who is stifled by the expectations of her village and her perceived "worth" that will come with the bride price she brings. All that is expected of her is to marry, take care of her husband and take care of their children. But Naborhi wants and dreams of more than what is expected of her and so she is trying to plan her escape from the village so that she can explore the world she has only heard about in stories. But as she prepares for her rite of passage, she finds a fox who only she can see! Turns out he is a spirit fox and by finding and helping him she is now gifted with visions of a boy in need who she must rescue. So, she sets off with new and old friends in search of this boy because while she might not know who he is she can feel that he is important and if he is not found something bad is going to happen so she has to do everything she can to find him and stop whatever this danger might be.
I received a free ARC copy from NETGALLY in exchange for an honest review.
April 5, 2024
Thank you to Erhu Kome, Norton Young Readers, and Netgalley for sending me a copy of this book to review. Unfortunately, I got about 52% of the way into this book and decided to put it down, but I will do my best to provide feedback on this title.
Having read and enjoyed Children of Blood and Bone, Forged by Blood, The Gilded Ones, and Beasts of Prey, I was eager to read The Smoke That Thunders to learn more about Urhobo and West African folklore and to appreciate the rich diversity across the African diaspora in YA literature. Although the story does well to introduce me to these parts of Urhobo and West African culture in a very simple and easy-to-understand way that would appeal to school teachers and to younger YA readers, what it lacks for me is a compelling story to support all these things.
Naborhi feels like a classic YA protagonist who shuns her arranged marriage and has haunting dreams about a boy who pleads her to save him. She completes her rite of passage, she says goodbye to her fellow friends as they get married or betrothed, she sees an animal spirit that happens to be a messenger of a god—All these things feel like they happen to her instead of her making them happen. When she wants to travel and see the world, she saves up money for the purpose of doing so but is later taken to a neighboring queendom when she is shot with a sleeping dart, which robs her once more of any tension and conflict that would propel her to travel and explore on her own.
I also couldn’t quite tell what the age of the reader was for this novel. Because of the travel, spirits, and adventure aspects, it feels more middle-grade adjacent, but Naborhi is sixteen at the start of the novel and is coming of age. There are some scenes where women are physically beaten by men and even one scene where a man declares that a woman has “lost her innocence” and “her pride” for allegedly seducing another man. He then asks, “Who will marry a broken thing like her? Not any man in his right senses,” and although Naborhi wants to step in and help, she’s ultimately made to turn away. That thinly-veiled misogyny intersecting with her feminist desire to help, learn to read, and be independent is very upper-YA, but it’s not quite fully addressed. It makes it hard for me to understand what the story’s point is thematically as a result. What does Naborhi end up wanting if she ends up getting it right away? What part of the story, according to the blurb, is political intrigue and fierce love?
To that end, I don’t think this quite hits the mark. However, I would love to read more of Erhu Kome’s works in the future and hope that I’m given the chance to do so.
Having read and enjoyed Children of Blood and Bone, Forged by Blood, The Gilded Ones, and Beasts of Prey, I was eager to read The Smoke That Thunders to learn more about Urhobo and West African folklore and to appreciate the rich diversity across the African diaspora in YA literature. Although the story does well to introduce me to these parts of Urhobo and West African culture in a very simple and easy-to-understand way that would appeal to school teachers and to younger YA readers, what it lacks for me is a compelling story to support all these things.
Naborhi feels like a classic YA protagonist who shuns her arranged marriage and has haunting dreams about a boy who pleads her to save him. She completes her rite of passage, she says goodbye to her fellow friends as they get married or betrothed, she sees an animal spirit that happens to be a messenger of a god—All these things feel like they happen to her instead of her making them happen. When she wants to travel and see the world, she saves up money for the purpose of doing so but is later taken to a neighboring queendom when she is shot with a sleeping dart, which robs her once more of any tension and conflict that would propel her to travel and explore on her own.
I also couldn’t quite tell what the age of the reader was for this novel. Because of the travel, spirits, and adventure aspects, it feels more middle-grade adjacent, but Naborhi is sixteen at the start of the novel and is coming of age. There are some scenes where women are physically beaten by men and even one scene where a man declares that a woman has “lost her innocence” and “her pride” for allegedly seducing another man. He then asks, “Who will marry a broken thing like her? Not any man in his right senses,” and although Naborhi wants to step in and help, she’s ultimately made to turn away. That thinly-veiled misogyny intersecting with her feminist desire to help, learn to read, and be independent is very upper-YA, but it’s not quite fully addressed. It makes it hard for me to understand what the story’s point is thematically as a result. What does Naborhi end up wanting if she ends up getting it right away? What part of the story, according to the blurb, is political intrigue and fierce love?
To that end, I don’t think this quite hits the mark. However, I would love to read more of Erhu Kome’s works in the future and hope that I’m given the chance to do so.
December 1, 2025
I had very high expectations for this book and it did not disappoint!🤭
It’s not just fantasy, it's one deeply rooted in Urhobo / West African mythology, and I loved how Erhu Kome managed to weave those elements seamlessly into a coming-of-age story.
The story follows Naborhi, she’s only 16, but she’s wrestling with expectations and obligations that feel too big for her shoulders and her life has already been planned but all she really wants is freedom to choose her own path.
Then she bonds with this mysterious, red furred fox-like creature, and everything changes and she starts having visions, learns she’s being guided by gods, and realizes her destiny is way more complicated than she thought.
What really sets this book apart for me is how the Author writes. It's clean and not over-the-top or flowery, but beautifully grounded in culture. She balances action and introspection so well that there are moments of self-reflection, but also real danger, political strife, and magic that feels scary and sacred.
The worldbuilding is what had me! I basically went through a portal into the book and there’s this spiritual pulse that makes the story feel larger than Naborhi’s personal fight.
I loved how the book forces Naborhi to confront not just her family’s expectations, but what she owes herself. She’s not just running away but she’s running toward something which is her identity, purpose, maybe even love.
If I had to pick my favourite moments, it’d be the ones where everything breaks open and when she almost loses the boy she’s dreaming of, when she sees the cost of freedom in blood and power. And the stakes feel real, not just for her but nations as well.
Overall, The Smoke That Thunders is now one of my favorite reads! It’s magical and grounded, spiritual and political, personal and epic. It asks big questions: What does it mean to be free? What if your fate is bigger than you? If you love fantasy that’s more than swords and spells, folklore, identity then this is the book for you💕
It’s not just fantasy, it's one deeply rooted in Urhobo / West African mythology, and I loved how Erhu Kome managed to weave those elements seamlessly into a coming-of-age story.
The story follows Naborhi, she’s only 16, but she’s wrestling with expectations and obligations that feel too big for her shoulders and her life has already been planned but all she really wants is freedom to choose her own path.
Then she bonds with this mysterious, red furred fox-like creature, and everything changes and she starts having visions, learns she’s being guided by gods, and realizes her destiny is way more complicated than she thought.
What really sets this book apart for me is how the Author writes. It's clean and not over-the-top or flowery, but beautifully grounded in culture. She balances action and introspection so well that there are moments of self-reflection, but also real danger, political strife, and magic that feels scary and sacred.
The worldbuilding is what had me! I basically went through a portal into the book and there’s this spiritual pulse that makes the story feel larger than Naborhi’s personal fight.
I loved how the book forces Naborhi to confront not just her family’s expectations, but what she owes herself. She’s not just running away but she’s running toward something which is her identity, purpose, maybe even love.
If I had to pick my favourite moments, it’d be the ones where everything breaks open and when she almost loses the boy she’s dreaming of, when she sees the cost of freedom in blood and power. And the stakes feel real, not just for her but nations as well.
Overall, The Smoke That Thunders is now one of my favorite reads! It’s magical and grounded, spiritual and political, personal and epic. It asks big questions: What does it mean to be free? What if your fate is bigger than you? If you love fantasy that’s more than swords and spells, folklore, identity then this is the book for you💕
April 13, 2025
There’s a quiet brilliance to Erhu Kome’s writing. Its simplicity is what first draws you in, but it’s the engaging narrative and vivid storytelling that keeps you turning the pages.
One of the most striking aspects of this novel is the world-building. It is richly imagined yet effortlessly accessible. Through her use of imagery, the author crafts a world that feels both immersive and grounded, making it easy for readers to visualize and connect with the setting. Her seamless integration of Urhobo culture and traditional lore adds depth and authenticity, offering a meaningful insight into a heritage that is both fascinating and underrepresented in mainstream literature.
Naborhi, the protagonist, is a well rounded and relatable character. She is not a passive heroine thrust into an adventure by sheer luck; rather, she is prepared, trained, and equipped with the knowledge that supports her journey. This makes her growth and success all the more satisfying. I particularly appreciated how Kome portrays Naborhi’s support system not just from her family, but also from loyal friends. Even though her uncle and aunt are steeped in tradition, their love for her remains unwavering, and they stand by her when it truly matters.
Beyond the fantasy and light political intrigue, the novel explores themes that will resonate deeply with younger readers. It acknowledges the diverse paths people may choose in life. Whether one seeks adventure or desires a quiet, family centered existence, and affirms that all dreams are valid.
While The Smoke That Thunders is a YA fantasy with relatively low stakes conflict, it never feels dull or predictable. The author strikes a beautiful balance between cultural homage and creative liberty, delivering a story that is as heartwarming as it is thought provoking.
A 3.75 read.
One of the most striking aspects of this novel is the world-building. It is richly imagined yet effortlessly accessible. Through her use of imagery, the author crafts a world that feels both immersive and grounded, making it easy for readers to visualize and connect with the setting. Her seamless integration of Urhobo culture and traditional lore adds depth and authenticity, offering a meaningful insight into a heritage that is both fascinating and underrepresented in mainstream literature.
Naborhi, the protagonist, is a well rounded and relatable character. She is not a passive heroine thrust into an adventure by sheer luck; rather, she is prepared, trained, and equipped with the knowledge that supports her journey. This makes her growth and success all the more satisfying. I particularly appreciated how Kome portrays Naborhi’s support system not just from her family, but also from loyal friends. Even though her uncle and aunt are steeped in tradition, their love for her remains unwavering, and they stand by her when it truly matters.
Beyond the fantasy and light political intrigue, the novel explores themes that will resonate deeply with younger readers. It acknowledges the diverse paths people may choose in life. Whether one seeks adventure or desires a quiet, family centered existence, and affirms that all dreams are valid.
While The Smoke That Thunders is a YA fantasy with relatively low stakes conflict, it never feels dull or predictable. The author strikes a beautiful balance between cultural homage and creative liberty, delivering a story that is as heartwarming as it is thought provoking.
A 3.75 read.
March 4, 2024
The Smoke That Thunders hooks you right from the beginning and drops you into the plot which I love! It's such an adventure filled ride, with a loving take on the Urhobo people highlighting girl power, that I wish I could read a million more stories like this! In particular, the first few chapters hone in on a claustrophobic, smothered feeling of wanting to branch out and live your dreams and all I wanted was for Naborhi to leave her village! The first half of the book had me itching to know how Naborhi was going to get out from under her family and go on the mythical adventure she deserved. However, I liked the intricacies of the rights and rituals described throughout the book, particularly in Naborhi's village. During the adventure scenes, every mishap was quickly resolved, a bit too quick for my liking, as the group was always in and out of danger without a true feeling of high stakes, but that was fine because it was understood that every little adventure was taking place on top of their big mission. I loved that Naborhi got to be a leader and show everyone how capable and cunning she was, and I liked that the book acknowledged that both with her family and the kingdom honoring and respecting her in the end. I thought the happy ending was well deserved and I enjoyed learning each of Naborhi's family members' reasonings for their paths and perspectives. Overall, this is a great YA book and exploration into a Urhobo tale that had a little bit of everything for everyone including family (both found and born into), love (romantic, platonic, and familial), adventure, and a happy ending. I look forward to reading more from Erhu Kome and I can't wait to introduce her books to everyone I know!
April 9, 2024
This book is a story about a teenage girl named Naborhi who has just come into womanhood in her community and is struggling to live the life she wants. Her village, has a very very strong patriarchal structure, and for a young woman, that means preparing for marriage, succeeding at her rights of passage by proving her usefulness in hunting, cooking good meals for her husband, and birthing sons. But none of these things excite Naborhi. In fact, she dreads the idea of being lorded over by a man, especially one she does not like or care for. Unfortunately for her, her family has already accepted a marriage offer, and the time is drawing near.
This is where Naborhi struggles, as she is caught between wanting more for herself and navigating the joy she knows her family will gain from her making a good marriage. She must choose between her own dreams and freedom or staying close to the only sister she has and doing what her family expects. The choices Naborhi makes for her life lead her on an unexpected adventure, where she then meets people and creatures only taught about in folklore.
I really enjoyed this character and the journey she went on, as well as her internal dialog to arrive at her choices. Her battle for independence was nuanced, and the reader was able to fully grasp the feelings the character experienced. The patriarchy was a little heavy-handed, but I think it served to really set the scene for the scope of the journey this young girl was on and really emphiazed her bravery. If you like books based on West African mythology, chosen one adventure quests, and girls who are not afraid to fully be themselves, then I suggest giving this one a try.
Thank you to @netgalley and @w.w.norton for gifting this ARC.
This is where Naborhi struggles, as she is caught between wanting more for herself and navigating the joy she knows her family will gain from her making a good marriage. She must choose between her own dreams and freedom or staying close to the only sister she has and doing what her family expects. The choices Naborhi makes for her life lead her on an unexpected adventure, where she then meets people and creatures only taught about in folklore.
I really enjoyed this character and the journey she went on, as well as her internal dialog to arrive at her choices. Her battle for independence was nuanced, and the reader was able to fully grasp the feelings the character experienced. The patriarchy was a little heavy-handed, but I think it served to really set the scene for the scope of the journey this young girl was on and really emphiazed her bravery. If you like books based on West African mythology, chosen one adventure quests, and girls who are not afraid to fully be themselves, then I suggest giving this one a try.
Thank you to @netgalley and @w.w.norton for gifting this ARC.
July 12, 2024
Actual Rating 2.5
Naborhi is sixteen years old and finds herself facing a betrothal to an arrogant man who is planning on her becoming the perfect wife. But an unexpected event causes Naborhi to become bonded to a mysterious creature and she begins having visions. Eager for answers, Naborhi finds herself on a quest where she meets many new people and learns that more than her personal freedom is at stake.
There were some aspects the writing style that didn’t work for me. The writing often felt more MG in level than I expected, which led to things feeling a little unbalanced especially since there were some darker themes addressed in the book (including on-page domestic abuse). The simplistic and repetitive sentence structure also contributed to this. There was also much more telling than showing – this kept things from feeling as immersive and well-developed as I usually prefer in a fantasy book.
The worldbuilding was decent overall. There were details included throughout the text that added some interesting depth to the world and the setting, and I enjoyed the lore that was incorporated throughout.
Unfortunately, the characters left me wanting more. This was especially true of Naborhi, who felt like an overused YA protagonist (e.g., not like other girls). Part of the issue came from the fact that things continually happened to Naborhi, but it never really felt like she was in charge of her own destiny or had any agency.
While I wanted to love this one, it felt unbalanced and I couldn’t stay interested in it. My thanks to NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for allowing me to read this work. All thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own.
Naborhi is sixteen years old and finds herself facing a betrothal to an arrogant man who is planning on her becoming the perfect wife. But an unexpected event causes Naborhi to become bonded to a mysterious creature and she begins having visions. Eager for answers, Naborhi finds herself on a quest where she meets many new people and learns that more than her personal freedom is at stake.
There were some aspects the writing style that didn’t work for me. The writing often felt more MG in level than I expected, which led to things feeling a little unbalanced especially since there were some darker themes addressed in the book (including on-page domestic abuse). The simplistic and repetitive sentence structure also contributed to this. There was also much more telling than showing – this kept things from feeling as immersive and well-developed as I usually prefer in a fantasy book.
The worldbuilding was decent overall. There were details included throughout the text that added some interesting depth to the world and the setting, and I enjoyed the lore that was incorporated throughout.
Unfortunately, the characters left me wanting more. This was especially true of Naborhi, who felt like an overused YA protagonist (e.g., not like other girls). Part of the issue came from the fact that things continually happened to Naborhi, but it never really felt like she was in charge of her own destiny or had any agency.
While I wanted to love this one, it felt unbalanced and I couldn’t stay interested in it. My thanks to NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for allowing me to read this work. All thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own.
May 12, 2025
I think I would have loved this book as a teen. It has a lot of elements that would have appealed to my younger self - an unwanted arranged marriage, a heroine wanting adventure, a touch of magic.
My younger self would also have been as vexed as I am about the map in the book. It is printed really darkly, and the paths Naborhi took didn't make any sense if one looks at the map. Unless my eyes are really poor at making out features on the dark illustration?
I am also very confused by the fact that some of the place names, like the Agbon Kingdom and the city of Uvwie, are locations in the real world, while others, like the Ewuare Mountains and Iga, are not (but have cultural meaning).
One final quibble: Is this a very immaturely voiced young adult novel, or a maturely aged middle grade one? There's nothing in the book that would keep me from handing it to a ten-year-old (trigger warning of domestic violence notwithstanding), but the protagonist is an older teen.
But the plot is great! I was fully on board with that. The characters were interesting, particularly our trio of adventurers, as was the magic/religious system. We have a chosen one who comes into her power rather than being born with it, which is a nice change from modern youth literature.
Also, prior to reading this book, I was not familiar with the Urhobo people of Nigeria. Not only does this book fit nicely in with the trend started by Rick Riordan and his "Rick Riordan Presents" line of novels based on various mythologies of the world, it's from a culture less frequently mentioned, than even the Igbo and Yoruba cultures of the same country.
Definitely recommended for those who enjoy books steeped in world mythology.
My younger self would also have been as vexed as I am about the map in the book. It is printed really darkly, and the paths Naborhi took didn't make any sense if one looks at the map. Unless my eyes are really poor at making out features on the dark illustration?
I am also very confused by the fact that some of the place names, like the Agbon Kingdom and the city of Uvwie, are locations in the real world, while others, like the Ewuare Mountains and Iga, are not (but have cultural meaning).
One final quibble: Is this a very immaturely voiced young adult novel, or a maturely aged middle grade one? There's nothing in the book that would keep me from handing it to a ten-year-old (trigger warning of domestic violence notwithstanding), but the protagonist is an older teen.
But the plot is great! I was fully on board with that. The characters were interesting, particularly our trio of adventurers, as was the magic/religious system. We have a chosen one who comes into her power rather than being born with it, which is a nice change from modern youth literature.
Also, prior to reading this book, I was not familiar with the Urhobo people of Nigeria. Not only does this book fit nicely in with the trend started by Rick Riordan and his "Rick Riordan Presents" line of novels based on various mythologies of the world, it's from a culture less frequently mentioned, than even the Igbo and Yoruba cultures of the same country.
Definitely recommended for those who enjoy books steeped in world mythology.
April 8, 2024
I found the premise of this book super interesting, and while I think it takes a little bit for the story to get there, once it does it is really good. When I came to terms with the fact this story is better suited for a younger audience, I was ok with the level of detail and explanation. I do think the story is a little better suited for a slightly older audience (more into the YA). There are some moments that the plot points are heavy, like abuse in marriage, but I would not say necessarily that strong topics should be kept away from a younger reader. Preteens and teens grasp these concepts more than we give them credit for.
I will say this is the type of book I think you need to have a physical copy of to get a full immersion into the world and the vivid descriptions of the scenery and people. I was not able to see the vision as clearly when I was reading as I would have liked, but the descriptions I could visualize were so beautiful. Part of this I think is due to the fact that the formatting of the ebook were not great in some parts (words not properly spaced, or sentences with random breaks), but I wish I could have referred to the map at the beginning more easily as I was reading. It definitely peaks my interest to look more into the folklore that inspired the book.
This is the type of story I would have loved to see split into two books, to give the world building and plot more time to develop. The book does attempt to cover a LOT, but once it catches its footing it is good. Thank you NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
I will say this is the type of book I think you need to have a physical copy of to get a full immersion into the world and the vivid descriptions of the scenery and people. I was not able to see the vision as clearly when I was reading as I would have liked, but the descriptions I could visualize were so beautiful. Part of this I think is due to the fact that the formatting of the ebook were not great in some parts (words not properly spaced, or sentences with random breaks), but I wish I could have referred to the map at the beginning more easily as I was reading. It definitely peaks my interest to look more into the folklore that inspired the book.
This is the type of story I would have loved to see split into two books, to give the world building and plot more time to develop. The book does attempt to cover a LOT, but once it catches its footing it is good. Thank you NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
February 24, 2024
In this story we follow Naborhi, 16 year old seeking to break the mold. Wanting to break out from the ‘norms’ and expectations of a female in this society. After wandering to the forbidden forest a mysterious creature appears to her and has her curious for answers. We follow Naborhi as she seeks to embark on her journey of saving this boy who appears in her dreams. Meeting Atai along the way and finds herself in the middle of a war.
I was so excited for this story both being Urhobo and West African folklore, mythology, and YA Fantasy. I found the plot to be lacking with quick resolution to high stakes and unnecessary scene placement. Not much drive in the plot and went awry in the middle of this story. This story was largely character driven and I was pleased to see such a strong FMC eager to follow her own truth. The inner battles that were shown and not told made me eager to see Naborhi’s story to an end. I liked the relationship with Atai and Tamunor. Naborhi often struggles about the family she left behind but quick found families among other parties told in the story.
The world building was a bit front loaded for me. I liked learning more about the history of the world and the why but would have preferred more of the ‘folklore and mythology’ embedded in this story over some of the atmospheric scenes. This story felt a bit too long overall.
Thank you to Netgalley and W. W. Norton & Company, Norton Young Readers for this digital arc copy.
March 29, 2024
Thank you NetGalley and Norton Young Readers for this digital advanced reader copy!
The Smoke That Thunders is a YA fantasy novel about a young girl who dreams of a life bigger than the life she's been dealt. Naborhi wants to see the world and go on adventures, not to be constricted by the social structures in which she must marry and dedicate her life to being a wife, and who can blame her? Naborhi gets her wish, but her adventure turns treacherous as she and her friends encounter many hidden dangers along their quest.
I loved the use of West African mythology and folklore in this book, and the story made me want to learn so much more. While this is marketed as YA, I'd say it probably reads more like a middle grade book - but rest assured, all ages can enjoy this story. There were so many times my heart swelled and broke for Naborhi, and she is a character I was rooting for the whole time.
Here are some of my favorite quotes:
"You seek happiness in the world, in yourself, and this is admirable. Though many know what their own happiness is, few have the courage to actually seek it"
"I only want the freedom to live my life how I choose, and to honor this family with my actions, not my marriage."
"Together. We'd lived this strange, beautiful life together for so long, and now we'd take on the world together."
"I was unstoppable as the mightiest river, but my friends, my family, were what fed my strength."
The Smoke That Thunders is a YA fantasy novel about a young girl who dreams of a life bigger than the life she's been dealt. Naborhi wants to see the world and go on adventures, not to be constricted by the social structures in which she must marry and dedicate her life to being a wife, and who can blame her? Naborhi gets her wish, but her adventure turns treacherous as she and her friends encounter many hidden dangers along their quest.
I loved the use of West African mythology and folklore in this book, and the story made me want to learn so much more. While this is marketed as YA, I'd say it probably reads more like a middle grade book - but rest assured, all ages can enjoy this story. There were so many times my heart swelled and broke for Naborhi, and she is a character I was rooting for the whole time.
Here are some of my favorite quotes:
"You seek happiness in the world, in yourself, and this is admirable. Though many know what their own happiness is, few have the courage to actually seek it"
"I only want the freedom to live my life how I choose, and to honor this family with my actions, not my marriage."
"Together. We'd lived this strange, beautiful life together for so long, and now we'd take on the world together."
"I was unstoppable as the mightiest river, but my friends, my family, were what fed my strength."
December 1, 2024
This was a solid young adult/middle grade story, with a dynamic and independent female main character, interesting family dynamics and meaningful friendships. I thoroughly enjoyed the Nigerian/African culture that was introduced throughout the story, not only in terms of the characters, but the descriptions of food, family, customs and environment.
I acknowledge that I am not the target audience, but the main drawback for me was the lack of tension throughout the story. Naborhi goes on this long journey to rescue a mysterious boy after receiving visions gifted from a spirit guide. First, the culture that the story takes place in is strangely accepting of these 3 teenagers traveling long distances by themselves. At every inn or checkpoint, they are completely welcomed, no questions asked. It may be that is a cultural norm, but it felt a little strange - I kept having to remind myself how old they were. Relatedly, everything just always worked out - our adventuring duo meet some strangers along the way who call the police - they conveniently but immediately escape. They run into trouble in the jungle - again, immediately and conveniently escape. For every moment they were supposed to be in danger, the danger IMMEDIATELY resolved. While I'm fine with happy endings, it just made the plot feel slow and repetitive.
Overall, a decent read but somewhat forgettable in my opinion.
I acknowledge that I am not the target audience, but the main drawback for me was the lack of tension throughout the story. Naborhi goes on this long journey to rescue a mysterious boy after receiving visions gifted from a spirit guide. First, the culture that the story takes place in is strangely accepting of these 3 teenagers traveling long distances by themselves. At every inn or checkpoint, they are completely welcomed, no questions asked. It may be that is a cultural norm, but it felt a little strange - I kept having to remind myself how old they were. Relatedly, everything just always worked out - our adventuring duo meet some strangers along the way who call the police - they conveniently but immediately escape. They run into trouble in the jungle - again, immediately and conveniently escape. For every moment they were supposed to be in danger, the danger IMMEDIATELY resolved. While I'm fine with happy endings, it just made the plot feel slow and repetitive.
Overall, a decent read but somewhat forgettable in my opinion.
March 19, 2024
ARC Review
Scale information:
1: terrible, awful, I cannot stop ranting about how bad it was; 3: this is exactly what I expect from a book of this genre; 5: I cannot stop thinking about this book, I must own a copy, I will tell everyone to read it.
[2.5 rounded up]
It's been a bit since I touched Middle Grade, but I felt like this book was a good MG-YA bridge. I've been tired of the same fantasy-inspired-by-Western-Europe and Greek Myth retellings that we see again and again, so I was excited to dive into something new.
The book started off by really showing how sexist the MC's country is. It's not the whole continent (her country shares a border with a Queendom, after all); but the focus and the time spent on showing just how less-than women and girls are in this society is... Uncomfortable. I think it was the focus of the first 25% of the book, if I'm recalling correctly. Yes, this was a big theme for the book, and yes it absolutely had it's place. But as an individual, I'm just so tired of reading fantasy where we have to read in detail how awful it is to be a woman.
Definitely would recommend as a quick MG-YA read for anyone who wouldn't mind reading the beginning!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Scale information:
1: terrible, awful, I cannot stop ranting about how bad it was; 3: this is exactly what I expect from a book of this genre; 5: I cannot stop thinking about this book, I must own a copy, I will tell everyone to read it.
[2.5 rounded up]
It's been a bit since I touched Middle Grade, but I felt like this book was a good MG-YA bridge. I've been tired of the same fantasy-inspired-by-Western-Europe and Greek Myth retellings that we see again and again, so I was excited to dive into something new.
The book started off by really showing how sexist the MC's country is. It's not the whole continent (her country shares a border with a Queendom, after all); but the focus and the time spent on showing just how less-than women and girls are in this society is... Uncomfortable. I think it was the focus of the first 25% of the book, if I'm recalling correctly. Yes, this was a big theme for the book, and yes it absolutely had it's place. But as an individual, I'm just so tired of reading fantasy where we have to read in detail how awful it is to be a woman.
Definitely would recommend as a quick MG-YA read for anyone who wouldn't mind reading the beginning!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
March 22, 2024
Naborhi has big dreams, bigger than the others in her little village. She is 16, coming of age, and wants more than anything to travel the world and not end up as some boy's wife. When she accidentally bonds with a mysterious creature while out in the woods, her predictable life gets turned upside down. Naborhi must decide if it is the best or worst thing to ever happen to her as she answers the call of a god not her own and journeys with the rival kingdom's Oracle's son.
This book was written so beautifully that I devoured it in one sitting. While two nations at war is nothing new, the way that the author wove West African and Urhobo folklore into the story gave life to tired tropes. The mythology is alive in the imagery, flowing seamlessly from one part to the next. The only thing I craved with this book was more. I would have loved more world-building, more magic explained, and more of the mysterious forces guiding Naborhi and her cohorts along their journey.
I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to see the world through the eyes of a dreamer, and who loves adventures seeped in magical meddling.
I received this book as an advanced reader copy through NetGally. It does not affect my review in any way.
Content Warnings:
Major
Violence, Domestic Abuse, Misogyny
Moderate
Death of a parent, war
This book was written so beautifully that I devoured it in one sitting. While two nations at war is nothing new, the way that the author wove West African and Urhobo folklore into the story gave life to tired tropes. The mythology is alive in the imagery, flowing seamlessly from one part to the next. The only thing I craved with this book was more. I would have loved more world-building, more magic explained, and more of the mysterious forces guiding Naborhi and her cohorts along their journey.
I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to see the world through the eyes of a dreamer, and who loves adventures seeped in magical meddling.
I received this book as an advanced reader copy through NetGally. It does not affect my review in any way.
Content Warnings:
Major
Violence, Domestic Abuse, Misogyny
Moderate
Death of a parent, war
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