Amazingly, I managed to complete this book. Overall, I suppose it is quite a nice read. This is especially true if you share my love of historical fiction set in the Far East. The Court of the Lion is an insanely long read for a story that is a relatively simple one. It centres around the love affair between Emperor Minghuang and Consort Yang, and the political and governmental upheavals undergone by T’ang dynasty China. The time of the T’ang dynasty (often considered the “golden age” of imperial China) happens to be one of my favourite historical periods, and I’ve no doubt others have been fascinated by the romantic, but tragic figure of Yang Guifei, one of the renowned Four Great Beauties of Chinese history. The history itself is fraught with political machinations, palace intrigue, and internal power struggles all to win the emperor’s favour whilst the threat of invading barbarian hordes is ever looming on the horizon, ready to bring the empire to its knees. To top it all off is a rather tragic tale of a doomed love affair between an aging king and a beautiful palace concubine. It seems a perfect moment in history for novelisation, doesn’t it?
Being quite the stickler for historic detail and accuracy, I was very impressed at how well researched The Court of the Lion was. Considering that both Eleanor Cooney and Daniel Altieri are not from China themselves and the remarkable amount of reference to Chinese customs, nuances of language etc., that suggests to me that a lot of research went into the creation of this novel. A lot of the events in the novel come from actual recorded history, and the majority of the characters we meet were real people who existed over a thousand years ago. There’s even a little snippet of historical records, translated by various authors and Chinese historians, at the start of each chapter which serves as a nice timeline and foreshadowing of the events to come.
For the most part, the prose is strong and the chapters written so seamlessly that I couldn’t for the life of me detect any subtle differences in writing which might alert me to which author contributed his or her half to the story. The descriptions were vivid, stirring and even brutal at times. Embellishments of the little details added to the feeling of being in 8th century China, and I have to commend Cooney and Altieri for their marvellous job.
Yet despite their accuracy and wonderfully organised research, I feel the authors may have been a bit overly ambitious in their storytelling. I have already mentioned how long the novel is (900+ pages!), and it was a bit of a chore to continue reading when the story’s pace slackened here and there. My biggest complaint would have to be the way exposition was handled in The Court of the Lion, which is to say, rather clumsily. I would go so far as to even estimate ~ 35/40% of the book comprises of characters relating events that have already occurred. And as most readers will know from personal experience, having to read about what has already happened in the past can really bog down a story and kill any dramatic pace that had hitherto been building. I’m not sure if this was just because Cooney and Altieri were getting caught up in the history and the backdrop of the story, rather than the story itself. As a result reading The Court of the Lion seemed painfully slow at times.
Another problem I had early on in reading this one was the character names. A lot of them look alike, so that it’s difficult to tell one from the other early on in the story. This was one of the reasons I was discouraged from continuing on with reading when I first picked up this tome. Unfortunately, I realise this has more to do with the English rendering of Chinese names (the language being tonal and lacking an alphabetical script) than anything else, but here is where Cooney and Altieri could have been a little more creative and substituted with English nicknames instead, as appropriate (e.g. Consort Plum Blossom).
Characterisation was adequate, but it was hard to get attached to any character with the multiple person viewpoint, which not surprisingly happens to be my least favourite mode of narration. The characters of General An Lushan and Chancellor Li Linfu are the exceptions to the shallow characterisation; these figures were well developed and fully fleshed personas, in comparison to the majority of largely unremarkable characters, of which I think there were far too many and who served little purpose to the story. I agree with one of the reviews here in that The Court of the Lion lacks some depth in parts, which was surprising, because a large amount of the material and expansion on character’s thoughts and feelings were quite intense. It’s hard to describe, but maybe a single person perspective would have remedied that slight deficiency. Jumping around from one character’s head to the next can be jarring, at best, and completely perplexing at worst.
My final criticism would be directed at the novel’s length. This is particularly directed at the first part of the book which seemed to drag on interminably. It did little, other than serve as the backdrop for the meeting of Minghuang and Consort Yang - and it took about ~240 odd pages for them to even meet. It doesn't encourage one to continue reading, believe me. The book itself must weigh about a kilo, so it’s not exactly something you can bring with you when you’re on the move.
My honest thoughts on the story probably amounts to about 2.5 stars, but seeing as there are no half star marks on goodreads, I will gladly round that mark up to three stars. This is mostly because I was very impressed with how the novel was laid out and the timeline organised. The story itself though, lacked that little bit of magic I wanted to see in one of my favourite historical periods.