If I had been told the premise of this story, especially that we would basically be living a guy’s head who wasn’t happy himself inside his own head or with the situation he has ended up in, I wouldn’t have even started. But I didn’t know and … surprise, it works!
It more than works, it is sad, beautiful, revealing. I also love the tidbits of Cape Breton culture, not thrust upon the reader, but simply carefully placed. And just as something special to me, the author manages to describe certain winter events that I have witnessed but couldn’t figure out how to put into words.
Quotes that caught my eye
Overhead, the power line, two widely spaced cables, sagged gracefully toward a wooden pylon visible on the next rise, then disappeared into the snowgrayed air. (2)
The coming dark was above the snow and the woods at night asked things of you he didn’t have. (8)
He was handy to his needs—pipe and tobacco pouch on a small table, magazines, binoculars. (9)
Snow twirled powdery off the toolshed roof. The distance between houses widened in the winter months, the year-round residents fewer now, some houses empty until summer. (32) He could be describing my village.
A tree stump, so often soaked and dried out it had opened out like a book, long laminations of wooden pages. (47)
…the feathery, spiraling snow, the stark silence in simple lines, black against white, and the dark mouth of the spring, that little pattering cave, the faint pawprints. (48)
Ice, everywhere, every object he could make out was thickened, confected with ice. And the silence, like something had just come to rest a million miles deep…. Everything had been stilled so quickly time dangled or hung: there was not a tick or a drip anywhere. The rain had been caught, captured by all solid things, wind-whipped and frozen onto their shapes. It had blown like hair from the raingutter above him, rigid now, icicles angled as the wind had left them. Innis inhaled the cold, utterly quiet air. A sliver thaw they called this, Innis had heard about it, but now, under a piercing moon the clouds had set free, the solitary trees were like teetering, translucent sculptures, laden with a lively wight some could not hold, their crowns bent to the ground, their trunks bowed, gracefully tensed. Innis walked out into it, dead grass crunching under his shoes, every rut and depression giving way like delicate windows, every bare bush and cane turned to crystal. (85)
The precentors were standing, clearing their pipes for another Psalm, but this time the congregation, still seated, joined them an another precentor led, a man with sandy grey hair who ignored the Psalm book in his hand, putting out the long slow line and the worshippers picked it up and sang it back, and the volume rose now with all the added voices, old voices gathering strength, but there was something else: they had begun to rock slowly, almost imperceptibly, as they sang, Dan Rory too, and the others around him, even the girl slightly, she could not resist, Innis himself could barely hold back when he detected a slow tapping that soon turned into a measured thump of hidden Sunday shoes, at first only here and there as if some were shy or it had been so long they had to be roused to it, no hand clapping or wailing or crying out, only this diffident thumping of feet out of sight, marking the beat, to Innis it was the rhythm of his axe, of his tree felling, this cadence of their singing. It echoed something deep in him that went a long way back, this foot beat, hie could feel it even though he didn’t know what it was and his foot was going, if lightly, discreetly, after all this was beyond him, before his time. These people did not rock in trances or weep on their knees, this was the only passion you’d see from them in this holy house, this was their opening up, rocking in the cradle of the old tongue. (206)
Vocabulary I didn’t quite get
Collas: ‘And it would, by fall, light his way out of here, though at the moment collas swaying in the sun were not easy to conjure.’ (1)
‘…nothing worse in winter than coming into a cold empty house, he said, no fire or food in sight, my old dad used to call that feeling it gave you fuar-larach. (87)
I found clachan online but the only meaning listed is a tiny village. I think there’s a different meaning shown here, LOL. ‘I can see him in the kitchen there, naked as the day he was born, hands clapped over his clachan, doing a little dance in front of the stove,…’ (12)
‘That’s a snake buckle. We liked those. Mheall an nathair Eubh.’ (13) It doesn’t show up as a saying, so, even knowing that such practice is foolish, I did a word by word translation, working backwards (the reason for which will become evident): Eubh is ‘shout’ or a girl’s name, similar to Eve; nathair is snake, which makes sense in the context; and Mheall is … as a noun ‘lump’ or ‘hill’ but as a verb ‘deceive, trick, cheat, seduce, tempt, etc. Ah, so this is something about Eve and serpent in the garden of Eden? He does mention Eden few lines later but they don’t seem connected.
‘He’d pushed the rum bottle across the table, Dìreach boinneag,… (26) The first word has a whole ton of meanings; the second I couldn’t find anywhere.
Might ‘thrash’ have been a typo? ‘He piled the thrash for burning,…’ (64)
Patch grass popped up in mud, mingled with dead leaves where fresh deer hooves sank deep. (153) Is ‘patch grass’ a species or plant?
What doesn’t ring true to me anyway....
“We could go for a swim, Starr, down in that nice cove,” she said, “that nice sandy beach.”
“It’ll be dark as pitch pretty soon.” (158)
Uh, unlikely unless I have completely misunderstood where and when they are, i.e., far to the north and close to mid-summer.