Vol.3-> chapter 50-75
So In episode 66 when Persephone talk with Eros about her trauma, she says she is frustrated with herself for being mad Apollo left immediately after the rape, and Eros tells her that it's ok to have complicated feelings about it. When I first read that chapter I thought it was a good portrayal of a SA victim, to show them confused about their own feelings, making them more real and complex.
However, As second time reading this Got me thinking, I’m going to be honest, this is my opinion and I mean no hate. But I couldn’t understand why this “rape” even happened. It’s not written well at all, there’s little to no building for it as to why, if I remember correctly Apollo decided to sleep with her the same day that he met her and the way he’s written it’s so bad it doesn’t even make sense to me.
Now I don't Know exactly how Aging works in GM and specifically in this Story, but I can't ignore that Persephone is sometimes written like a damn child. Really naive and gulible, and it’s so very weird. yes she was sheltered and kept in the dark for so long and her whole company were her mother who does nothing except treat her like a child and some random nymphs(plus that one time she went on killing mood) but that doesn't change the fact.
To me, all of this reads as if Persephone was taken advantage of, as if she were a child in this situation, and regrets the decision that she made here. This is obviously the case, but it just weirds me out. Even though she is 19 and is considered an adult, and issues like rape and manipulation were major topics in real Greek mythology, this situation still comes across as somehow not handled very well.
So Eros tells Persephone "girl, this is R A P E" Persephone starts to feel like shit, like she's been taken advantage of, which is valid and obvious. Then nothing happens. Eros made promise to never tell but gave her the advice to go to therapy... I can understand this. but my issue is that after this It's almost like it's forgotten about in the story until it's like, "Oh, this happened to Persephone, gotta write something about it". For the first few chapters following the SA, I personally believe it wasn't handled that bad. But after she and Hades kiss, it's put on the back burner.
all of my point being that as I am reading this the second time and knowing the major plotpoints of the story and the ending, I just can't ignore that the main event if the story is just not written well. this being a "Modern Retelling" of some greek mythology, Should have been more Modern on stuff like "Rape, manipulation, relationship etc" more. this however doesn't affect my rating and enjoyment that much. just a very big point to made.
thinking it now and the way it is handled, the whole SA thing in my opinion is just for plot’s sake too, to make Hades the knight in shining armor, and to make Persephone struggle with something (even tho her trauma is easily forgotten really quick) it’s not written well at all. I like the illustrations of it, it was really delicate, but I find it rather distasteful. It was really unnecessary.