I couldn't figure out why this book had such good reviews. I guess it's just me. I had too many issues with it, as you can see down below.
I couldn't stand Rena. She was like this tiny, annoying gnat that kept flying around my face and wouldn't go away. After befriending Wallace, she feels like she has the right to get more involved in his life. It's strange because she doesn't seem that involved in any of her other friends' lives. What did Wallace see in her? I have no clue. Maybe considering he didn't really have many friends, she was the most attractive of the females? I honestly don't know. To me, it was one bitchy comment or stupid moment after another. I so wanted something bad to happen to her.
Wallace... What can be said about him? He seemed kinda boring to me. Yes, he was the sweet, hot boy next door kinda character, but ...
Gabby... All she does is flirt and ends up in bed with people. She's studying to become a doctor? There's no way!
Questions/Comments:
How are sweatpants and yoga pants in the same category? Sweatpants are usually baggy and make you look bigger by hiding your figure. Yoga pants are the complete opposite, they're tight/form fitting.
After the fire alarm is pulled, everyone is outside. Rena is wandering around or something, I honestly have no clue what she was doing. (This was after she talked with Gabby and Aiden.) Well, Wallace makes a comment behind her, and she's getting ready for a fight. Why? "One hand automatically shot up to block my face, and the other fisted tightly."
Rena had been drinking and was heading...wherever. Not her room because Gabby and Maverick were going there. So, "I pushed back on the bar, and the door swung open...I flew out into the night. 'Oomph!' Stones and shards of ice cut into my palms as the door came back and hit me in the hip." HUH? She doesn't fall...the door just swings back and clips her hip. So how does she end up with ice shards and stones cutting into her hands?
It was obvious that Rena was attracted to Wallace, but at the same time, had no issues with Gabby going after him. I understand that to a degree. Wallace is the 'crazy guy', it's fine to like him as a friend but nothing more. The part I don't get is that if Gabby did end up sleeping with him, would his and Rena's friendship be the same? I'm pretty the answer is no.
How was Wallace, maybe only a year older than Rena? He'd already received his associate's degree. Rena sounded as though she jumped right into college after high school. Plus, why would he be living in a dorm?
Yes, we know Rena was short. But how was it that when they're all doing laundry, Gabby's on the floor, Rena's on the bench, yet, she's able to turn and look Gabby at 'eye level'? What kind of bench was that?
Cole, Wallace, and Rena. That was where I had a major issue with Rena. For some unknown reason, she felt as though she had the right to find out what the brothers were fighting about. Again, they've only been friends for what? A few weeks. Makes sense to me. Considering she doesn't know anything about Cole or Wallace's family at that point, she still ends up basically thinking Wallace was cold because of the way he acted towards his brother. "When faced with his own flesh and blood, he just stood there. Angry, wounded, too stubborn to accept anyone's help."
I can see being friends with someone, for a while, and trying to help them with family issues. IF you know the story on both sides or have been friends for more than a few weeks! It was funny how she thought it better to find out Cole's side of the story, the unknown brother, rather than trying harder with Wallace. Just because you're friends, doesn't mean you have to tell the other person everything. "I wasn't doing anything wrong. If anything, I was going out of my way to help a friend." I just couldn't believe she actually believes that crap.
I've never had a flat tire before, and even I knew what happened with Rena's car. Just another negative on her part. Stupidity.
When Wallace arrives to 'save Rena' from his brother...again, more stupidness happens with Rena. "My eyes show wide as I flailed in a last ditch effort to grab something." That was when she was about to fall off the bed...yeah...that was it. For some reason, the author wanted her falling out of a bed to seem very traumatic. Moving on, how can Rena actually get mad when she realizes that Wallace must have been in the area? Or hadn't told her that he'd killed someone? Why would she be crying over it? "The hostage isn't going anywhere with anyone, until someone answers some damn questions." Really Rena? Wallace shouldn't have to tell her why he'd killed someone. Considering Cole had already told her the story, I just don't get it. She acted like Wallace had killed someone she knew or something. No sense there.
"Why didn't you just help him to begin with? You could have spared us both a lot of grief." Haha Wow! I can't believe she'd actually say that to Wallace when the whole fighting brothers thing didn't even involve her.
With Wallace's 'clusters', how does he not always look like he's been beaten up?
Rena and Wallace are 'getting close' at his grandma's house. He stands up trying to distance himself from Rena. Now, if a guy is trying to seem uninterested sexually in a girl, why stand up when you have a boner? He could have tried to hide it but nope.
The new waitress. "Aiden, Gabby and I gave her blank stares..." Really? All because she didn't know what they wanted to drink? Bitchy much? Or better yet, when it's mentioned the new waitress was starring at Wallace...Rena whispers to him, "I'm protective of my friends." Right. That darn waitress certainly seemed fishy and up to no good.
When Rena was with Cole, he ended up cutting her neck. A week later, she still has a bandage on it? If it would have been deep, then stitches would have been needed, but there were no stitches...
Another bitchy moment for Rena: "Oh, yeah, because having superpowers must be so damn hard...It was a reflex...but it was the truth." Yes, because being unable to have real relationships for fear of crushing the person and knowing the negative feelings they have towards you...sounds like fun, sign me up!
During their emotional/feelings talk, Rena assumes Wallace knows what's better for her...hence, he doesn't want a relationship (other than friends) with her. Right. "I want the chance. I don't know why you don't." Is she seriously this stupid?
Again, why was she surprised he'd never had a girlfriend? Does she listen to anything he tells her?
Rena's father is retired military and works as a Walmart Greeter? How old is he? Is he injured? Sorry, but the only people you see as greeters are old and/or handicapped in some way.
Gabby has a questionable stain on her blanket. She's washed her sheets but not said blanket. Why?
After waking up, Rena sees Wallace and Cole talking. They look over at her and the first thought that comes to her tiny, unintelligent brain is, "What? Were they going to tag-team me?" Seriously? What in the hell would make her even think that?
Again, back to how Rena is way too pushy, wanting to get into everything and anything Wallace is involved with. "He was trying to shield me...His problems are mine now." Um, when it comes to a group of supernatural people...unknown issues have arisen and death is on the table for the grandma...yes, it would make sense for Rena to go along with. She's tiny, with no powers, and would only get in the way. Even after Wallace calls to tell her that she's out of her league, she's still clueless.
Again, again, again with the stupidity! She gets to Wallace in the woods and it's so obvious that his cousin is controlling him, but, of course, Rena has no idea what's even going on. She assumes that Wallace is randomly being mean and hurting her. OMG.
Why is it, that even after Faye tried to kill Wallace, he goes on to say, "She's too analytical to kill us without understanding the threat we posed in that vision."