Thank you to the author for an eARC of this book in exchange for honest feedback.
What an incredible world that B.S.H. Garcia has created! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this epic high fantasy adventure! The story kept me interested and entertained and the pacing felt appropriate. It didn't seem like there was any lag time. The writing style was well done and felt mature to me, which I really liked. It had complicated, yet simple aspects, making for a very enjoyable read. I touched on this a little in my review of the prequel novelette, but this book/series looks to be incorporating some great real-life politics and societal situations. Personally, I enjoy when fantasy books do this and I think this was well done here.
This book was multi-POV (6 in total, 7 including the prologue/epilogue) and was told from multiple locations of the world. This is not always easy to do and keep things tight and interesting, but I think Garcia did a good job with the spacing and timing so I didn't feel like I was gone too long from one person or place when there was a shift/jump. I also really enjoyed the mystery and how it was woven through the book. It kept me guessing and making predictions, which is an indicator, for me, of a good read. I also didn't feel like it was super predicatable. The ending was done very well with revelations and wrapping things up, but still leaving enough in the dark to pique my interest for the next installment.
The world-building was very well done, especially for a first-time author and full-length novel. I absolutely loved the world map and all of the additional reference material in the back. That's a big thing I look for in fantasy books. It makes it so much easier to understand who and what everyone/everything is. I was lucky enough to be able to purchase a paperback copy of this as well (after I had already received my eARC copy), before the official release. It made it a lot easier for me to reference things while I read, but that's just a personal preference for me I think. I actually went though and read all of that stuff before I read the book itself and I'm so glad I did! I felt a lot more prepared for who and what I was getting into. The only thing I wish it had included was a pronunciation guide, as my mind kept getting snagged on some things as I read (mostly places and peoples) since everything was brand new to me. That's really just a personal want and in no way affected my rating, but it really would have been the cherry on top!
The characters and peoples of this world/story were also very fascinating. I like reading new and fresh creations and this one definitely provided that. The names of creatures/gods/peoples was all new from the ground up which I thought was amazing and made this book feel very unique. Elaysia (FMC) was very relatable and I enjoyed reading about her journey. She definitely gets thrust into some tough shit and really has to grow up and put her big gal pants on. I was proud of her character by the end and I look forward to seeing where her journey goes. Zavik was such a cutie, loved him! Definitely gave me cute, nerdy, librarian vibes! Him and Elaysia's relationship was so sweet and I'm very eager to see what happens in the future. Lumira was that classic "give the villain a chance and they'll give you the world" type of character and I loved her for that. Also really loved her Beridian brother-in-arms Grokhion. He was an absolute saint and I hope he gets more screen time in future books. I liked that there was a queer character, Jakki, in this as well. Overall I liked the strength and resilience of her character, but I also struggled with her (I touch on that a little more below).
Some things that prevented me from giving 5 stars (very minor spoilers here):
-Elaysia seemed to be the main character of the story, and she did, in fact, have the majority of the POVs, but I still felt like I needed a bit more internal insight and development from her to really connect to her character, especially at the end. With everything that happened to her, both physically and mentally, it felt like I just didn't get quite enough internal description from her to really showcase her true development. I think it's there, but it seemed to get shrouded and overshadowed by other POVs and other things going on towards the end of the book. Kind of similar with Davier, I felt like I wanted to dive into his character more from an internal development standpoint and get more connected.
-Elaysia and Davier's relationship, while obvious at the end, just seemed to kind of happen and felt somewhat assumed to me. I felt like I didn't get enough lead up to them having true feelings for each other so I didn't feel very invested in their connection. I understand that they both still had conflicting things going on in their heads (Elaysia more so than Davier, it seemed), but I kept thinking I would have liked to have read more in the lead up. Not necessarily spicy scenes (although I'm always down for more of that!), but that doesn't have to happen to convey an advancement or progress of a budding relationship or attraction between characters. Again, I think more internal description would have helped me with this.
-While I understood the need for Zavik, Lumira, and Jakki's POVs (and was happy to read them), I would have rather read less from them and more from Elaysia and Davier's POV -OR- the whole book just been longer (100-150 pages). I think this would have given a more solid and intimate E & D portion of the story, while also conveying the events of what was going on around the rest of the world. That's just my opinion. In saying that, I also felt like I didn't really understand Jakki's whole angsty deal. I wanted more background from her. I wanted to understand her more and why she was so...umm...angry? I don't know if that's the right word. I just felt like I didn't understand why she felt so much animosity towards so many others from the beginning. I think aspects tried to come through, but I really wanted more. I also had a hard time understanding the whole old man thing that happened with her...still not sure what that was...hoping more will be revealed later.
While this is not something that prevented me from giving 5 stars, I did notice there were no content warnings at the beginning or end of this book. With high fantasy like this, I know there is probably some assumption of graphic violence and dark themes, but I felt like there really should have been at least some sort of statement or link to a list of content elements that were going to be presented. For example, there's some instances of child unaliving that the reader is not prepared for. Personally, I don't have any triggers or issues that I have found when reading as of yet, but CWs are something that I try to notice/pick up on now when reviewing books, just for the sake of others. So that would be a suggestion of mine for the future, as well as a caution for readers. I think most avid fantasy readers won't have an issue, but just be aware that there are some dark elements in here.
Overall I thought this was a great first full-length installment to this series/world and I really look forward to reading the next one. I would definitely recommend to fantasy readers, especially those who are just getting into the fantasy genre. Personally, I would recommend reading the prequel novelette prior to this full-length novel so you have some background of the world and how things came to be as they are. I think Garcia does a good job of summarizing all of the high points of that novelette within this book as they relate to the plot line, so it's not absolutely necessary, but not everything is included. Not to mention it's a good little story all on its own. Excited to see where Garcia takes this story! Happy reading! 🤙🏼💕