Ms. Davisssss....
Let me tell you what I appreciated about this book more than anything (btw first time reading your work) you were not lazy at all, you did your research, you connected all the dots and tied up all the ends you made loose.....
You were consistent and thorough with the characters (loved me some Sensei)... the H and h characters were well developed and relevant to the times, their religious persuasions and what was happening in their lives at the time....
The romance was the primary focus.... (I hate when I'm reading a romance book and its almost as if the romance is an after thought or toooo much is going on that it becomes disconnected)… you just kept it growing in leaps and bounds, you allowed them both to own their feelings - even when it was uncomfortable, even when it was disadvantageous to them....
I loved the transition of time... you didn't constrain yourself with writing each day (some authors can really mess that up in my pov), no, you transitioned into and out of weeks and months smoothly - bravo...
Usually I don't like to read about ornery women (like myself) but I really enjoyed 'Heaven'...they were a good balance...
You came out guns blazing....
You showed up consistent and believable...
You left me yearning for their magic...
Wonderful storyteller!!!
Thank you for this!!!!
Encore!!!!