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The Nameless Luna #3
For Her, He Falls
A nameless Luna, who was once a slave, was raised as the runt of her pack until a stranger came and claimed her as his bride. His touch is like torture, and she cannot decide whether she dreads or desires him. An exiled Alpha who is chasing down a prophecy that promises him the power to protect his pack, but only with his fated mate by his side. She holds the key to his future, but before she can help him, she will have to unlock her past. Strange whispers in the shadows speak of an ancient secret and infernal curse that could poison their mating bond, and powerful rivalries between packs threaten to tear them apart. Can they find a way to trust themselves and each other, or will fear and pride burn their love?
116 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 12, 2023
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March 16, 2025
Really it's just the last part of a book. Idk if it's worth the $30 I spent on what should have just been one book but I did read it in one sitting and it is now currently 5:45am.... So it's not a bad story 🤣
August 19, 2023
Review is for all 3 books in the series.
This trilogy had a lot working against it, unfortunately. The shifter genre has a lot of competition, so writing a story that stands out, even with the "twist" that this one has, is a very tall order.
First, the problems:
1. Each individual book of the series is under 200 pages and the 2nd two books are $9.99(US) each and barely over 100 pages. The first book is on Kindle Unlimited, but I'm still looking at $20 for essentially one book. On top of the book(s) being short, there are descriptions that are repeated. So it feels like there's even less story.
2. There are so many grammatical errors and formatting issues, at least with the Kindle versions.
3. The pacing feels rushed and uneven. Part of this is due to the repeating of descriptions and backstory slowing the plot, but there are other areas where more description and world building would have helped the story feel more immersive.
Next, good bit:
The story itself, the idea and plot, are really good and have great potential moving forward with the next generation.
This trilogy had a lot working against it, unfortunately. The shifter genre has a lot of competition, so writing a story that stands out, even with the "twist" that this one has, is a very tall order.
First, the problems:
1. Each individual book of the series is under 200 pages and the 2nd two books are $9.99(US) each and barely over 100 pages. The first book is on Kindle Unlimited, but I'm still looking at $20 for essentially one book. On top of the book(s) being short, there are descriptions that are repeated. So it feels like there's even less story.
2. There are so many grammatical errors and formatting issues, at least with the Kindle versions.
3. The pacing feels rushed and uneven. Part of this is due to the repeating of descriptions and backstory slowing the plot, but there are other areas where more description and world building would have helped the story feel more immersive.
Next, good bit:
The story itself, the idea and plot, are really good and have great potential moving forward with the next generation.
November 22, 2023
What is the point in writing a book like this? What is, literally, the point? The artistic prose? The thought-provoking story? The depth of character?
No.
You're writing for perverts who are into werewolves and you've got ONE sex scene at the end of book three. And it isn't even close to explicit.
Let me state again:
Your target audience is PERVERTS who want to get off to WEREWOLVES.
And you've failed to satisfy them.
So what was the point of any of it? What a waste of time and energy, on my part and the author's. What a nothing you have to say. What emptiness you have to offer.
Crap like this is the worst and I seriously don't understand what the point of it's existence is. Just write the smut, you're not better than it.
And you end it with a happily married (or what passes for it in wolfland) couple, with the woman PREGNANT. Oh hey yay, so dumb boring traditional human garbage then, thanks.
Repetitive, bad writing, does not pay off.
You high reviewers are so sad. So, so tragic.
No.
You're writing for perverts who are into werewolves and you've got ONE sex scene at the end of book three. And it isn't even close to explicit.
Let me state again:
Your target audience is PERVERTS who want to get off to WEREWOLVES.
And you've failed to satisfy them.
So what was the point of any of it? What a waste of time and energy, on my part and the author's. What a nothing you have to say. What emptiness you have to offer.
Crap like this is the worst and I seriously don't understand what the point of it's existence is. Just write the smut, you're not better than it.
And you end it with a happily married (or what passes for it in wolfland) couple, with the woman PREGNANT. Oh hey yay, so dumb boring traditional human garbage then, thanks.
Repetitive, bad writing, does not pay off.
You high reviewers are so sad. So, so tragic.
December 9, 2023
Better but…
My number one complaint through this series has been the price point of every book. Yet, I’ve persevered and read every grammatically incorrect sentence, the trite prose, and the rather unlikeable, to me, lead female, she’s arrogant, stupid, and selfish on so many accounts I had very little sympathy for her. I still would say, given my experience as a reader/consumer of an over abundance of both good and bad written works, if Dwinell hopes for this series to survive she needs to drop the price by more than %50 percent per book, and I would suggest a %100 percent drop for the first book. A five page sample doesn’t cut it for introducing a new series and author.
My number one complaint through this series has been the price point of every book. Yet, I’ve persevered and read every grammatically incorrect sentence, the trite prose, and the rather unlikeable, to me, lead female, she’s arrogant, stupid, and selfish on so many accounts I had very little sympathy for her. I still would say, given my experience as a reader/consumer of an over abundance of both good and bad written works, if Dwinell hopes for this series to survive she needs to drop the price by more than %50 percent per book, and I would suggest a %100 percent drop for the first book. A five page sample doesn’t cut it for introducing a new series and author.
July 1, 2024
oh…..my…..goddess
I started the first book in the series on one of those reading apps where you had to wait six hours to read the next chapter, and decided to buy it on Kindle instead, so I could read it all at once, which I did followed immediately by the second and third books, I could not put them down. Granted they are not long books. We’re not talking Harry Potter here but I read all three books in an evening. It is now almost 2 AM and I just finished the third book and I enjoyed every single solitary moment of all three books.
I started the first book in the series on one of those reading apps where you had to wait six hours to read the next chapter, and decided to buy it on Kindle instead, so I could read it all at once, which I did followed immediately by the second and third books, I could not put them down. Granted they are not long books. We’re not talking Harry Potter here but I read all three books in an evening. It is now almost 2 AM and I just finished the third book and I enjoyed every single solitary moment of all three books.
May 2, 2026
Just finished at 3:30 a.m. I read this on the Readict app, so it combined the trilogy together into one book. This third book was a bit slower paced than the first two, but it was expected since the war was over. It was a nice toddy bow at the end of the story and a setup for the next series, The Nameless Luna's Daughter. I liked this trilogy more than most werewolf/vampire stories. The characters had enough attitude to be real and the intimate scenes weren't graphic, more PG-13 than R or X rated like others. I'll be starting the next series, hoping it's as good as this one was.
September 21, 2024
Good Story
This was a nice conclusion for the story. I enjoyed it.
Though I do feel the price for each book is a tad high. These 3 books could have easily been 1. If you are going to drag a story out, then at least make the price less. I would like to read the next series since it is a continuation of this world, but due to the price of each book in that series as well, I think I'll skip it.
This was a nice conclusion for the story. I enjoyed it.
Though I do feel the price for each book is a tad high. These 3 books could have easily been 1. If you are going to drag a story out, then at least make the price less. I would like to read the next series since it is a continuation of this world, but due to the price of each book in that series as well, I think I'll skip it.
January 5, 2024
I read this in Readict, the complete series of 3 books. These are really good, (not cheap at $10 per book, but very good stories).
The war between the Nightwalkers and the wolves has come and the Nameless Luna is in the middle of it!
Readict does treat these as a single book, so I'll add the other 2 soon in Goodreads. Well worth the cost to get all 3 books!
The war between the Nightwalkers and the wolves has come and the Nameless Luna is in the middle of it!
Readict does treat these as a single book, so I'll add the other 2 soon in Goodreads. Well worth the cost to get all 3 books!
July 5, 2025
Loved the story very much
I read all three books and I really really enjoyed the story, the characters, the adventure and the ending. I wished that book 3 had a little more to read but nevertheless it was awesome. I will check out Hope Rain ellos other book cause I like the way she tells a story.
I read all three books and I really really enjoyed the story, the characters, the adventure and the ending. I wished that book 3 had a little more to read but nevertheless it was awesome. I will check out Hope Rain ellos other book cause I like the way she tells a story.
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May 15, 2023Cute reading
The story in all 3 books is cute and easy reading. But the spelling and grammar needs help. Words are missing, sentence s don't make sense in sum areas, but overall a nice story.
The story in all 3 books is cute and easy reading. But the spelling and grammar needs help. Words are missing, sentence s don't make sense in sum areas, but overall a nice story.
May 23, 2023
Pretty good storyline but…
So many spelling errors and short books for the price. Was a bit disappointed. If you’re going to charge that much I shouldn’t stumble over errors all the time. It messes with the story.
So many spelling errors and short books for the price. Was a bit disappointed. If you’re going to charge that much I shouldn’t stumble over errors all the time. It messes with the story.
September 4, 2023
Short read. Tbh all three books could have been one book altogether…
Not bad. Just expensive to read them. :(
I enjoyed the plot. I wish there would have been a little more.
If you like wolfs, vampires, and witches, you’ll enjoy this series.
Not bad. Just expensive to read them. :(
I enjoyed the plot. I wish there would have been a little more.
If you like wolfs, vampires, and witches, you’ll enjoy this series.
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May 26, 2024Loved the story
I really enjoyed the first 3 books in this series, but at $9.99 for a very short read on each book, it s almost $30 already. Guess I will skip the books about her daughter. They are well written and I did enjoy them but too expensive.
I really enjoyed the first 3 books in this series, but at $9.99 for a very short read on each book, it s almost $30 already. Guess I will skip the books about her daughter. They are well written and I did enjoy them but too expensive.
July 29, 2024
She really and truly doesn't have a name. That is intriguing. She's called Flower, bit that's truly just a nickname to give Tristan something to call her. She became a Phoenix rising out of the ashes and she is beautiful.
September 6, 2024
A good ending to the trio. It does have the same editing issues as the first two parts. It's predictable but not in a bad way and manages to give all the feels. Our MFC manages to finally get a name.
Long live Princess/Queen/Luna *Spoiler*
Long live Princess/Queen/Luna *Spoiler*
January 9, 2025
Everything you want from this series- builds to the explosive ending!
Everything you want from this series- builds to the explosive ending! Can't get enough of Tristan and "little flower's" story- along with the Rovers and Nightwalkers story.
Everything you want from this series- builds to the explosive ending! Can't get enough of Tristan and "little flower's" story- along with the Rovers and Nightwalkers story.
February 26, 2025
The nameless Luna: Book Three
Though I have not read books about vampires and werewolves, this book series covers the countless possibilities in a world of war, love, friendship, and bonds that can't be broken.
Though I have not read books about vampires and werewolves, this book series covers the countless possibilities in a world of war, love, friendship, and bonds that can't be broken.
April 18, 2024
I liked the storyline. I think she should have combined them into one book instead of three novelette.
August 30, 2024
Overall the whole series was cute. It wasn't smutty like most wolf books I've read (which I like smut sometimes but this was a nice quick read)
September 29, 2024
Loved it and can't wait to read about her daughter.
March 28, 2025
2.5 Stars, fast straightforward read again. Interesting premise carried through, HEA. Lots of showing not telling, but still has nice descriptions sprinkled in.
April 22, 2025
Great Book
Enjoyed every bit of this series. I recommend it to anyone that loves a HEA. You will definitely get that.
Enjoyed every bit of this series. I recommend it to anyone that loves a HEA. You will definitely get that.
April 28, 2024
Fun read. Good twists. With a great editor, characters and world could have been expanded, battle scenes and background stories more in depth but still a fun simple read. Had a fan fiction feel.
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