After reading all the glowing reviews for this book, I came away a bit disappointed. The hero is very compelling and the story is fairly unique. But the depiction of modern superheroics is starting to lose its novelty. Every indie book (and even some in the mainstream) are now going the postmodern route of making their heroes self-aware and giving them publicists, corporate sponsorships and a line of merchandise. That's no longer interesting in and of itself.
The art was solid and the writing was better than average. But I live and die by the rule of "show, don't tell." (Especially in a comic book, where "show" is even more of a concern.) So any story where the script is 75% captions is going to lose me. I realize there isn't much space here to work with, but you have to make room for character development and not use lazy captions declaring "Heroes don't act this way" and "Neuron often comes across as self-absorbed..."