Judy Fong Bates delivers eight heartfelt and poignant stories of Chinese immigrants in Canada in this debut collection. Each story includes characters that are linked through businesses in a small Ontario town, with different years and point of views all throughout, usually handled with nuance. Seeing the build-up of the setting along with its protagonists and supporting characters made for a satisfying reading experience, even if the stories sometimes shied away from heavier scenes or more intense subject matter.
On that note, the weakest part of the collection was the author’s penchant to gloss over major scenes that were needed to anchor the emotional weight of the story. “Lucky Wedding,” “The Good Luck Café,” and “The Ghost Wife” were some examples of these. The endings came suddenly and without a clear realization of how plot points were actually resolved for its characters. Skipping over parts of a climax doesn’t make the denouement nearly as enjoyable. Judy Fong Bates could have definitely beefed up each story in that regard, and maybe paid a bit more attention to the eloquence and diction of her prose. Sometimes I found typoes that took me out of the story, though this was not detrimental to her overall narratives. I will be picking up her debut novel, hoping for more breadth and sophistication in a full-length work.