I disagree with most of the reviews I've seen on Goodreads. I picked this up to take with me on vacation. I thought it would be a fun, cheesy romance, and an easy beach read. Woof. Wrong.
Let's begin with the fact that I couldn't tell who was the main character until Chapter 2. Three women were given their own in-depth storylines. Jenna, the actual main character, her mom, Mel, and her friend (but not best friend? I couldn't tell), Courtney. Each of them, for at LEAST the first half of the book, split the story time almost equally. Jenna can't make up her mind about two men, and has to deal with that. Mel is coming to a crossroads in her life and has to decide what she should do next. Courtney has a blooming business, but wants to make sure she can still keep expanding.
Once the "tragic event" mentioned in the book's blurb happens, time is so liquid, a month or more can happen in the space of a chapter, or it could take up three, or the months could ask get bypassed in the space of a sentence. And Jenna's bitterness is annoying, frustrating, and completely transparent if you're a decent enough reader, and can pick up on foreshadowing in any way. The resolution to Jenna's bitterness comes WAY too late in the book, and her decision on who's going to be by her side is SO DANG RUSHED, it's ridiculous. The storylines of the book span 15 or so months, and the last 6 happen in the space of 50 pages or less.
I had problems with the overall vibe of the book, too. There were a few recurring issues.
- Every unmarried woman (including tertiary characters, not just secondary ones, or the backup main characters) in the book has a conversation about her happiness. Each one outright says "I'm happy," only to be asked "but couldn't you be HAPPIER?!" As though a woman cannot possibly be happy without a man by her side.
- There is apparently a NO SEX BEFORE MARRIAGE clause built into two of the three main characters' contracts. Or at least, it's unacceptable before they're engaged. Jenna barely gets a few kisses before she pushes her guys away and starts talking marriage. I find that kind of unbelievable. Yes, some people do hold that type of view, and it's respectable, and I hold no ill will about it, but at the same time, the way it's portrayed here feels more unnecessarily pious and distracting than anything. It's no deal-breaker for my enjoyment of a book, but it felt like it was a belief held specifically by the author and was intentionally crammed into an otherwise bland book.
- EVERY woman under 60 has an awful/abusive/cheating/terrible ex, including the teenage daughter. Most of them are ex-husbands. But absolutely EVERY man's ex is a wonderful, kind person who they love to this day.
- Dreams are the only thing that help the characters resolve their inner turmoil. There's at least a half dozen dreams detailed in the book, maybe more, and each one helps that main/semi-main character figure out her next steps.
- If you missed the first 4 books in the series, you're missing a lot of the backstory for the women in this book. I constantly felt like I wasn't getting the while story, and that I must have missed something with the rest of the series.
- Too. Many. Characters. Involved. There are times in the book that the author just LISTS the characters in the room, including early in the book, and expects the readers to not only know who they are, but remember their significance and relationships to the mains. Cut back please!
I know this has gotten long winded, and I'll just end by saying that this book really disappointed me. It wasn't light, it wasn't really fun, and I was trudging through it like I used to with required school reading. "How many more pages until the next chapter? The next page break? The halfway point? Am I almost done yet?" So, so disappointing.