Someone I admire once said “perfection is doing a lot of small things very well.” Oh how I wish that were true for this book, because it had so many things going for it. It’s not often you find erotica, horror, and crime all jumbled into one, and have it be an enjoyable story. But, there’s quite a few things wrong with this, which really bums me out, because I adore so many things about this story.
Let’s start with the elephant in the room, the piss poor editing. If you’re questioning elements to the story within the first few chapters, you know something had gone horribly awry. Some of the many errors I noticed: I have no idea how old Addison is. She is described as both young and older looking, and she is described to be the sister of Joan, (and once I believe Joan is referred to as her daughter once as well which tripped me up), secondly, I swear Joan was was mentioned to be around 27 at one point, but she has a 17 year old daughter that the story just drops for no reason? I know it’s not out of the realm of possibility but it wasn’t touched on enough. Another time, Melanie is described to be gagged, but speaks, even having a whole conversation. Again, making me do a double take. I’m sure there are more, but those are the ones that’s stuck out to me. Another time, Melanie wasn’t even in a scene and it said “said Melanie”. Those are just some of the many examples I noticed.
Okay so, things I liked, and there are plenty. I can really appreciate how invested these authors are in getting a lot of the philosophy of the community correct. Also, I loved Addison and Sam. I don’t know why, and I don’t normally go for those romance plots in stories, but damn there was just something so cute about those two. Maybe I’m crazy, I probably am. Ok so another thing, the crime drama bits, were killer. I really wasn’t expecting them, since the summary delves more into Melanie than anything else, but that really deserves a mention, especially in the summary. I probably wouldn’t have put off reading this so long had I known it had that little true crime drama in it.
The “occult” aspects were lazily thrown in, absolutely no foreshadowing whatsoever made it hard to digest when it came, and felt like a major cop out ending to something I so desperately needed a banger finale to. That last chapter and the epilogue felt thrown in to tie up loose ends. Can we normalize average endings in horror again? Feels like every time I read a horror novel the ending veers of the road and crashes into another story and creates a finale that comes straight out of left field.
For as many critiques as I have for this novel, it’s only because I want so much for it to be polished. I would seriously get down on my knees and beg these two to re-release this in a more polished form, fixing the editing errors, cutting out the occult crap, and tying up characters better. I only criticize because in my eyes, this could’ve been a perfect book. It had so many things going for it; mainly let down by the editing and ending. It scratched all my itches, erotica, horror, true crime, all three of my favorite genres smashed into one, and telling a gripping and engaging story? Sign me up. I just hope one day we can get a better version of this, no matter how unlikely that is.
This book could’ve delivered so much more, it could’ve been perfection. Now this book will haunt my nightmares, only because I wonder what it could’ve been.