I get that this is Extreme Horror™, and extreme horror has its style and tropes.. but the whole time reading, I felt like there was a great story lurking under the surface, waiting to be told.. but by the end, it never emerged.
If there was less of a focus on graphic depictions of extremely violent sexual assault, and more of a focus on the story, this could have easily been five stars.
I usually don't want my hand held through the plot of a book or movie, and I love weird /unexplainable stories/events, but this is one of those stories where I feel like more exposition on what was happening, and why, would have been hugely appreciated.
What is happening? What are *They*? The story seems to go back and forth and just muddies up what little sense of continuity there is. Who or WHAT are *They*? Why are *They* doing what *They* are doing?
The author seems to be riiiiiiiight on the verge of explaining things a few times, or at least hinting at an explanation, but none of those breadcrumbs ever pan out to anything that explains what's going on, why, etc..
I feel like the author should read up on the concept of Chekhov's Gun; EVERYTHING that gets put into a story *MUST* be necessary and relevant, and everything that is not should be removed. The author seems to be torn between two points; telling a good, creepy/scary story, and giving extremely detailed descriptions of acts of extreme violence and sexual assault, and sadly chose to focus on the latter rather than the former.
And, I get it. Extreme Horror™ is supposed to be EXTREME! And it was! But being extreme came at the cost of telling a potentially INCREDIBLE story, and instead focused entirely too much on the sexual violence, rather than what was happening and *WHY*!
What are *They*? Where did *They* come from? Why do they look like people you know? Why are *They* here, doing what *They're* doing? There's a brief mention of someone splitting in two, but then it's passed off as a hallucination and never touched on again. There's a brief mention of a 7 foot tall tar-covered skeleton, then nothing.
Clearly something WEIRD and FUCKED UP is going on in the world, but none of that is touched on, in favor of an overly long, puerile rape -and-murder sequence that felt like reading a future school shooters' diary full of their messed up sexual power fantasies.
I would *LOVE* to find out more of.. WHATEVER is happening in this book! The apocalyptic event described is fascinating, and I was COMPLETELY engrossed in the story.. and then, rather than keep going with these weird, unexplainable events, the author decides instead to go from compelling, mature storytelling, and into the Extreme Horror™ trope of writing ultra-detailed gross-out hyper-violent rape at the expense of telling a story that I was genuinely intrigued by.
I'd LOVE to read another story that takes place during these events, and explains things more, but the story needs to take priority over the graphic descriptions of rape, because that whole scene was by far the weakest part of the book, and, combined with the complete lack of exploration into the events (and complete disregard for the Chekhov's Gun principle), turned this story from a 5/5 to a 2/5.