Forbidden is the first book in Jacquelyn Frank's new Bodywalker series, a spin-off of her excellent Nightwalker series. After a brief glimpse of Nightwalkers' Bella and Kestra, we learn of another Nightwalker race, the Bodywalkers, who were created when the ancient Egyptian mummification process unintentionally tied the souls of the dead to Earth. These souls exist in the "Ether", until they find a new human host and return to Earth. The human (called the "original") and the symbiote (called the "carbon") share the original's body, both souls existing and "blending" together within the one body, though the distinct personalities of both the original and the carbon are retained. Upon death of the human host body, the carbon is returned to the Ether to do it all over again with a new human host after a minimum waiting period of 100 years.
Overall, the plot of Forbidden is fairly straight forward. Unremarkable, office manager Docia Waverly is knocked off a bridge into a raging river. As she balances between life and death, she is offered the choice to either die, or become the human host to the Egyptian Queen Hapshepsut. She chooses life and upon her return to Earth, she is found by Ram, the best friend of King Menes and his second in command. He has been sent to find his Queen and protect her while she acclimates to the blending, and waits for her husband/soulmate King Menes to be reborn. However, the Queen is very quiet within Docia, so it is all Docia for the majority of the book. Ram himself is the combination of King Ramses II (yes, the pyramid builder) and Vincent, a Navy SEAL, though Ramses is the "front man" in their relationship. Throughout Ram's many lives, he has never been tempted by his Queen but this time is very different and he finds himself inappropriately drawn to Docia.
For millennia, a civil war has been raging within the Bodywalkers as they fight and kill one another, and are reborn to fight again, over and over, taking a new host body each time. King Menes and Queen Hapshepsut rule the Politico, who believe in an equal sharing of the body and respect their human hosts. They fight the Templars (priests and priestesses) who believe in the complete domination of the human host body, and who ultimately seek to rule the entire human race. The Templars want to kill Docia in order to send the Queen's soul back to the Ether where she will have to remain for the minimum 100 years. This will cause King Menes to delay his return, as he is so in love and attached to his Queen that he would choose to remain with her, no matter what might be happening on Earth. There is a large secondary plot involving Docia's police officer brother, Jackson, as he frantically searches for his missing sister. A plot twist near the end (***MAJOR SPOILER FOLLOWS***) is somewhat obvious as it turns out that Docia is not carrying the Queen after all, but a Templar priestess named Tameri, who has returned to make peace and and help defeat the evil Templar leaders, also resolving Ram's hesitation over Docia. This happens fairly rapidly and the leaders of the Templar are defeated. Ram/Vincent and Docia/Tameri get their happy ending, with the next book focusing on Docia's brother Jackson as lead.
Jacquelyn Frank is a talented writer but large parts of this book were pretty dull, as Ram and Docia don't have much chemistry. Ram is your typical alpha Hero and Docia a fairly typical, yet pretty unremarkable heroine. Other supporting characters were more interesting than the two of them, though the evil Templar leaders are straight forward evil, without any nuance. In addition, while the basic concept of the Bodywalkers is kind of intriguing, the execution resulted in an odd, crowded relationship between Ram/Vincent and Docia/Tameri, and confusing, inconsistent world building. Over time, the two souls are supposed to "blend" so that they come to think and act as one. However, it was clear that both Ram and Vincent's distinct personalities still existed and each would come forward at different times, though Ramses dominated generally. As Docia herself says "it's menage a everybody!" It helps lessen the confusion somewhat that Tameri is submerged within Docia and only comes out to express herself toward the end. Still, that means that Tameri is basically a stranger to the other three when she does finally make her presence known. Frank tries to fix this by having Ram state that "... although he was only beginning to know Tameri, he knew that he was in love with Docia, who homed her. For some intangible reason, he knew without a doubt that he was connected to Tameri just as perfectly as Menes was to Hatshepsut." But, what about Vincent? How does he feel about Tameri? We never find out. Having the four distinct personalities within the central relationship was odd and crowded and confusing.
In trying to give readers the satisfaction of a true happily-ever-after, Frank has Ram tells Docia she will be his forever, in this life and the next and the next and the next, and that they will endure just as Menes and Hatshepsut have. Well, how exactly are Ram and Docia going to endure forever when it is only the Egyptian souls (Ramses and Tameri) who will return to the Ether when their human hosts (Vincent and Docia) eventually die or are killed? The souls of the original human hosts are allowed to move on peacefully, unlike the Egyptians who return to the Ether. So, is Ram speaking to Docia or to Tameri? This is never explained and further confuses the ending. It seems that we are to assume that Ram and Docia are now so powerful and strong as a couple that they will be able to keep the host bodies alive for eternity, though not even Menes and Hapshepsut have been able to do this for their hosts.
So, overall, this new series doesn't work for me. It's possible that with the evil Templars gone, and the King and Queen on the verge of returning, that Frank will integrate the Bodywalkers more fully into the Nightwalker world which might help. However, the basic foundation on which the Bodywalkers stand is confusing and distracting with each relationship encompassing four distinct personalities that all need to fall in love with one another, with readers knowing that it is only the two Egyptian Bodywalker souls that will truly be together forever. I've loved Frank's Nightwalker series and "Drink of Me" is a stand alone favorite, but I won't be continuing with the Bodywalkers.