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Hmm… I'm not sure what to think of Darkness Rising, I had a lot of mixed feelings. It was good but it also kind of wasn't at the same time. I liked that the premise was something I'd never read before in an UF novel (something similar has probably been written, I've just never come across it). And I was impressed that there seemed to be quite a lot of thought and effort put into the worldbuilding — it was one of the best aspects of Darkness Rising. Most UF novels are rubbish at worldbuilding — they're so lazily written. I also appreciated the fact that the main characters weren't stereotypical. The hero (Michael) was a loner, he had no human connections, he was intense and he was kind of sociopathic. The heroine (Mary) was somewhat annoying on occasion but for the most part she was a strong and engaging character. They had distinct and layered personalities — especially Michael.
I'm not sure how to explain the plot but I'll try… Mary is seeing and hearing things and having weird vivid dreams. She doesn't know if she's going mad, but when someone tries to kill her she realises that things aren't what they seem and that mysterious forces are at play. Naturally, there's a powerful evul guy trying to fuck things up. There's also reincarnation, soulmates, powers and all kinds of other stuff. I'm making it sound lame, it's actually better in the book.
Anyway, it took a while to get invested in the plot — probably because I didn't know what the hell was going on.
The first half didn't flow very well — the writing and story felt rather forced. Everything just seemed to be thrown together with no rhyme or reason - Mary having random weird dreams and visions, the wind talking to her, gunmen chasing her, her house burning down, and running away from bad guys, birds and strange forces. I was kind of lost for a while and it wasn't until the latter half before things started to mesh together and become clearer.
I was frustrated with how long it took for Mary and Michael to actually meet. When they did meet though, I enjoyed their interactions — it was great seeing hard as fuck Michael who cares about no-one, get all protective and unsure around Mary. I love those kinds of relationships.
The main issue I had was how slow the pace was — there was a lot of stuff happening but it took too long to get to the heart of things. Actually, the entire book just felt like a very long introduction to the world, characters and plot — it didn't feel like a full story, even though it's only the first in a series and there's more to come, there just wasn't that complete feeling after finishing Darkness Rising.
I wasn't keen on the number of POV's - I would have preferred just Mary and Michael's.
At the end I still wasn't really clear on what Mary and Michael were and where they came from. Were they angels? Were they aliens? Were they some species from a parallel dimension? Were they from another planet? I needed more information about their home planet/dimension/whatever.
Oh also I was weirded out by Michael mentioning that in past lives him and Mary weren't always lovers sometimes they were parent/child, siblings or even grandparent/grandchild… It kind of tainted the romance.
Favourite quote:
His was an old, savage soul, and she had, in an instant, become the single, shining jewel that lived inside of him.
I'll definitely be reading the sequel. Mary and Michael were engrossing characters, the romance was interesting (sort of) and the plot really kicked in towards the end. Hopefully, the second book will be faster paced and I'll find myself more easily immersed in the story since most elements have already been set up and established.