Ooohh the Stud Ranch, if there was such a place I would save every extra penny for years to go there! Hot men at your beck and call ready to service you in any way you want. Fantasy sweets, erotic massages, definitely without a doubt count me in! Just think of any fantasy you have ever had and it can be played out, oh if our dreams could come true!
The concept of this story is awesome, if you can get passed the whore house thoughts, there were a few things that pushed my buttons- such as the no condom use, but overall it was an entertaining read. I did get an earlier version to read, and have yet to read the tweaking, but the story could definitely use more climax. I was waiting for a fight or some kind of heat other than the sex that just never happened.
The story could use more oomph, but it is still engaging.