3 stars simply because I like the town and characters.
It seems as if this author is now pumping books out just to get them out with no thoughts of editing or proofreading. I used to like this author, and I still kind of do, but the last few books I've read have been riddled with grammar errors and things that just plumb don't make sense, this title included.
First off, I like the characters and the setting in the Pescoli/Alvarez/Grizzly Falls series. I don't mind the fact that the town seems full of crazies, so much so that this fictional town has been plagued by serial killers for the last four years, and yet there are still fictional residents in this fictional town. I guess fictional people don't have the common sense to flee once they notice the trend of killers that keep on a' comin. Don't mind it at all, keeps me reading and involved with characters I've grown to like.
What I don't like - there are so many grammatical errors and run-on sentences that it's super confusing. There are also a whole host of words that are constantly repeated, mainly the word "damned". It's ridiculously overused, appears AT LEAST once a page. That's annoying. An author has every tool at their fingertips to expand their writing language and these tools should be implemented. And it wasn't just this book, it was all of them in the series. The whole "damned" series, I kid you not. Not to mention, everyone is constantly "muttering under their breath" or "saying under their breath" and "whispering under their breath ". I'm OK with parts not having dialogue. These random mutterings to the characters selves aren't needed just to add dialogue. It's perfectly fine to add it as a thought instead of dialogue. It's only something that adds to the readers frustration as something that is (again) constantly repeated. And the new, stupid sounding phrases that kept popping up. "Funny that." "Weird that." "Weird all that." They sound stupid and I've never heard anyone say that in my life.
Another thing - sloppy errors keep popping up. Here is an example from the book - The killer is talking to his wife in the morning, she heads to the kitchen to make coffee and breakfast. The "smell of fresh coffee wafts through the house" (quote taken from book), yet read further down the page and they are continuing the conversation while she makes said coffee. Come on, really? Think it out, let it fester, rearrange it so it makes sense. Not to mention the dog, whose name is Cisco according to all the books in this series, is alternately being called Cisco and Chico in this book, and Kayan Rule gets called Rule Kayan several times.. Sloppy mistakes! Errors in one book I can understand. Maybe an editor got fired and they are shorthanded. But when stupid errors keep popping up in every book, it makes me think that books are published just to get out there.
I have a hard time taking authors seriously when editing and proofreading seem to take a backseat to just getting the book on the shelves, and this author is no exception. Hopefully things change, because I really like(d) this author and would like to see the quality improve to what it once was.