I believe the greatest horror comes from real life. To put it another way, if something can really happen to you, it's more terrifying than say a werewolf or aliens. This is the premise of a cracking little short from Matt Shaw, who is fast becoming one of my favourite independent authors. Shaw also includes two of the scariest elements of horror...children and...no spoilers, it ruins the ending.
First of all, I've read the reviews so let's get that part out of the way. There are errors in the book. I noticed a couple of typos and changes of tense in certain sentences. However, this doesn't ruin the flow of the story. If anything, it adds to the chaos and confusion that inhabits our protagonist, a teenager called Alex who loses his little brother in a shopping mall. As I mentioned, a real situation twisted with the menace of horror...always more effective. The errors probably weren't intentional by the author but, unlike some books, they don't ruin the experience.
The reason Smile is so effective is simple: Fear. Parents, brothers, sisters, babysitters; everyone knows the fear of losing a little one, especially somewhere as chaotic and unforgiving as a shopping mall. It paralyses you and there's always the nagging doubt that searching for someone in a place so vast is taking you further away from them. This is nestled beautifully in the book itself, the tension is ever-present as Alex goes from selfish kid to nervous, irresponsible brother. By the time he gets the (useless) security guards involved, the book is fraught with tension. I couldn't stop reading, finishing it in one sitting.
4* - Smile is a little gem of a book. It's short, tense, plotted between past and present tense - using flashbacks to trace the events of the book - and very spooky. As mentioned, I won't ruin the ending for you but Smile will have you trembling a little. It would have been 5* but I think it was a little too short. There were certain other things that seemed a little unexplained - the security camera bit for example - but sometimes, in horror, this also adds to the terror, as the unknown is always more petrifying. One thing is certain...you'll never look at your kids in the same way again.