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Dweller on the Threshold

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On a hunt to save her sister, the last thing Beri O’Dell needs is love. Aren’t demons bad enough?

Beri O’Dell, Book 1

Beri O’Dell is investigating paranormal creatures because she wants to know what she is. Taller and stronger than most men, she astral projects and can peel through dimensional layers to see the creatures and spirits beyond.

She once helped her foster sister, Detective Elsa Remington, track down killers in Jacksonville, Florida, but stopped when a nasty fire elemental turned her strength against her. Now, she finds herself pulled back when something steals Elsa’s soul and puts her into a coma.

With little time to spare, Beri searches for the reason behind her sister’s coma. She has help in her spirit guides Fred and Phro, but others come along for the ride, including a pyro-nervous witch, and an androgynous necromancer.

The last thing Beri needs is to fall in love with a mysterious stranger. But the handsome Minoan warrior Nikolos knows what creature she’s after because he’s battled it before.

It’s bad.

Really, really bad.

He calls it the Dweller on the Threshold.

Contains a worried heroine with no time, a witch with fire problems, a pissed-off necromancer, a trapped goddess, and a damned sexy, but scary, warrior. Throw in bloody battles, mass-murderer history lessons and a bit of sexy time and you get the start of Beri’s new life.

398 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 26, 2013

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Rinda Elliott

66 books426 followers
I write urban fantasy, paranormal romance and romantic suspense. Okay, and some space opera and post-apocalyptic menage as Dani Worth. I'm a lover of all kinds of romances! Some of mine (so far) are M/F, M/M/F and M/M.

Currently, I'm focusing on M/M romance because that's been my favorite for many years. I finally took the plunge in 2015 along with my good friend and co-writer, Jocelynn Drake. We are releasing long M/M romantic suspense right now (Unbreakable Bonds) and are already planning another series as well--possibly one that combines our love of MM romance with our love of urban fantasy.

I enjoy unusual stories and credit growing up in a family of curious life-lovers who moved all over the country. Books and movies full of fantasy, science fiction and romance kept us amused, especially in some of the stranger places.

I do get questions about the open series out. Beri O'Dell, Crux Survivors, The Kithran Regenesis and The Brothers Bernaux are unfortunately all on hold. That publisher is in the midst of closing so I don't know what will happen with them yet. Also, they weren't selling very well either, but I'm hoping I can self-publish the last of the stories in them at some point for the fantastic fans they do have. I'm sorry for the delay.

I’m represented by Miriam Kriss of the Irene Goodman Agency.

You can find me at http://rindaelliott.com, http://www.deadlinedames.com.
I also write erotic books as Dani Worth-http://www.daniworth.wordpress.com
And for more info on my co-authored M/M series with author, Jocelynn Drake, http://www.drakeandelliott.com


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329 reviews818 followers
May 7, 2014



Well, well, well, what do we have here? A new favorite author? I’m thinking probably. I’m going to hold off on confirming that till I finish the second book in this series, but all signs point to her as being in my Big 5: Karen Marie Moning, Stacia Kane, Devon Monk, Ilona Andrews… Rinda Elliot? EDIT 5/7/14!! NO. I do NOT have a Big 5. I couldn't even finish the second book because it was terrible. Sad face.

These are the people I know with no doubts that I’d embarrass myself if I met them, I’d be so compleltely overwhelmed that I’d probably just stand there mute with teary eyes from not blinking.
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Don’t act like you don’t all have those authors you’d feel for the same for! Sure, there are authors I’d be super excited to meet, I mean of course right because books, but then there are the people that are on a whole other level. Elliot has the potential to be in that league for me and let me tell you why.

Don’t let that cover put you off this story! I wish it was an artist rendering because it’s supposed to be Beri but it just fails. She wears pants for the record, and sure she does have an athame, but the whole thing is just bad. Beri has some seriously awesome hair, its copper red with white streaks and it effin glows, lol. I found this picture just using Google and it fits better than the cover, except that Beri is a jeans and t-shirt gal, so change her clothes and you got Beri! Oh man I love her.
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The story is about Beri and co searching for how to save the victims of a coma-like illness before they’re destroyed- both the victims and themselves. One of the best qualities of this book is the power of its characters. Beri is six feet tall and has glowing hair that grows at the speed of light, and she’s pretty amazing. She was tossed around foster families her whole life but one of the kids she met became a sister to her even though she hadn’t stayed in their family. Beri is different from anyone I can think of right now, it’s from her appearance for sure, but also her personality. She’s got the humor and snark I crave in my heroines but she’s also got a lot of goodness without having to work hard to find it. She cares deeply for those she lets in her inner circle and she’s not waiting for them to screw her over. That being said, she doesn't have a lot of friends- she's no fool.

Blythe is a tiny little big-eyed blonde with steel in her core, and she cracked me up. She’s got these big blue eyes and she’s kinda ditzy, and then all of sudden she’s kicking demon ASS and being much tougher than she looks, and it was awesome! She’s a fiercely loyal friend, and she hasn’t even begun to see what she’s capable of- I can’t wait for more of her!

Nikolos... oh, Nikolos. He’s a thing of beauty. He strongly reminds me of Curran. I’ll let you in on a secret- if I had to choose between Curran and Barrons I’d always choose Curran. If I voted in the battle of the boyfriends I’d vote for him, and I’ve known that I swing that way for years. Nikolos is huge, powerful, smart, charismatic, and not afraid of Beri’s own power. He’s also stunningly gorgeous, but that’s beside the point not really.

Beyond the characters there is the quality writing! Everything was perfect for me, it’s this intangible quality that is so hard to describe that makes this book the winner it is. Sure, there are a couple of tropes, but they’re not done in a cheesy way. One is when the l-word was figured out, and in all fairness it worked in this story, but I know it’s going to be something that a person not in love with this genre will catch. It certainly didn’t detract from the story but I did groan a little when I read it. There is also a lot of mythology in this, which if not actually accurate, is really convincing. I don’t have the best grasp on all the gods and myths so that’s why I say that, but I checked the dictionary a couple of times just to see and it was all correct. All that leads me to believe that there was a lot of research put into this and it shows!

Now, I have to say, the ending was a bit of a letdown after being on a high for the entire time I was reading- it was a bit abrupt. I’d like to have had at least a tiny epilogue that was something as simple as “Beri and co spent time making plans in the sunshine whilst healing up”, and that would have made me happy. It isn’t a problem per se but it’s there.

This is a book that should be getting more attention, it’s that good! The world is fully realized and intriguing (magic and otherworldly creatures are sort of known), the characters are truly fabulous, the story is engrossing as all hell, and the writing is magical. This book is all that magic that pulled me into reading as a kid and never let me go. I read so many books just searching for what this book has in spades, and every single time I find it I can’t stop the giddiness.
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Don’t let it get pushed to the side if it’s something you think you could like, bad covers happen to good books, don’t let this one turn you off.

(I have a few quotes in my updates you should check out to get a hint of the story.)
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535 reviews142 followers
March 26, 2013
Posted at Yummy Men & Kick Ass Chicks

Once in a while, I pick up a first book in a new series and, once finished, want to run around the streets of my town and shout “This book was just awesome! Everybody should read this!!” This happens to me once, maybe twice a year. Well guess what? It happened after I finished Dweller on the Threshold by Rinda Elliott. And not only did I want to run through my town telling everyone about it, I wanted to run down the highway and go to the nearest city! This is an excellent urban fantasy debut and I am very excited to tell you guys all about it.

Dweller on the Threshold introduces us to Beri, a…well it’s sort of complicated what she is. She can see spirits and ghosts and can astro project, her spirit leaving her body. Also she is also stronger than most human men. She has never met anyone like herself before and she has no idea why she is the way she is. Most of her life, she has been trying to get answers but has yet to find any. Because of her circumstances Beri has not had the easiest life, having been cast out of many foster homes after having been found wandering the swamp when she was just a toddler. Her past and her abilities scare most people, and who can blame them?

She is such a layered character and she contains all of the qualities I adore in an urban fantasy protagonist. She is flawed and vulnerable, snarky and intelligent. She wants to find her place in the world and understand her role in it. I really really liked Beri. A lot. I can’t wait for you all to meet her.

In Rinda’s world, every person has one spirit guide. Except for Beri. She has two. One is her official spirit guide and one is a spirit who is mostly just tagging along. Phro took some getting used to but she does have some good lines and you can tell that she really does have Beri’s best interest at heart. Frank is like a father figure for Beri. Beri has the advantage of actually seeing her guides (not a normal talent) so she can interact with them.

The story itself, lots goes on. People are having their souls stolen, including Beri’s foster sister, and she has taken it upon herself t figure out what is going on. She battles some pretty spooky sh*t while trying to save the world. No way is Beri a superhero – she is just a girl who wants to help her sister who is her only family. I have never read a villain like the one in this book. I am just glad that the demons in this book don’t exist in real life. *shudder*

The story really took off for me when Beri meets Nicolos. It’s not that adding Nicolos into the mix made the story more exciting but it does add a nice element to it. Why? Because Nicolos is Yum-my! Ladies, prepare to swoon! He is a very tortured soul with a big heart and gentle soul, even though he can totally kick demon ass. His story will bring tears to your eyes. Okay, maybe not, but it is a very tragic and touching story and it definitely makes you feel strongly for this man. You want him to be happy. You feel as though he deserves to be happy. And what he does in the end, what he does to protect and save Beri…whoa. His and Beri’s chemistry is incredible. The tension between these two is also amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading Nicolos and I can’t wait to read more of him in the next book.

There are quite a few comical scenes in this book and pretty much all of the funny scenes come courtesy of Blythe and/or Dooby and people’s reactions to them. I smiled and giggled. Which was wonderful since the story itself is on the heavy side. Rinda mixed in just enough light to keep it from getting too dark. Blythe is a witch who has powers that go a little wonky now and then. And the way she is described, the big round eyes and lost puppy dog look that make you want to give into anything she wants, had me thinking of Puss in Boots in the Shrek movies. To me, that persona fit Blythe as she appears to be weak and confused but she packs quite the fire (pun intended). She is spunky and a solid addition to the series as is Dooby. We meet him near the end of the book and I’m curious to see how much of a role he will play in future installments. (And yes, I snorted a bit at the name Dooby. Rinda was very smart in picking that name for him. Dooby is a character that takes himself very seriously and it’s hard for the reader to take him super seriously with a name like that. It really works in this story. Well done with that one Rinda.)

I’m just going to throw in a quite word about one more character. Castor. He is introduced near the end of the book (even later than Dooby) and I for one cannot wait to read more about him. What a twist he throws into the story!

There are so many revelations and unanswered questions in this book. Things pop up here and there and you want to know what it means, what it all leads to. And in the end, we find out just enough to feel okay about it but there is still much to learn. The way the book ends makes you want the next book, Blood of an Ancient, now instead of having to wait until October 2013. No, the ending does not make you want to track down the author and rob her of her manuscript, but it does make you itch for the book.

I will tell you one thing: if you read the first bit of the book and find yourself a little confused, you won’t be alone. I felt that way too. I wasn’t lost, just confused. There are a lot of hints in the first few pages about what Beri is, who her companions are, how the prologue comes into play and what is actually going on and it’s all sort of thrown at you. It is not an info dump, it is an ‘hmm I wonder what is going on here?’ dump. It does create a feeling of ‘Oh, I must keep reading to find out what is going on here’ and everything that comes up as a question in those early pages does come to light by the end of the book though. Just keep at it (it really isn’t that long until things get really exciting). At first, to be honest with you all, I was thinking of rating this book 4.5 stars because of that confusion but the story is so strong and the characters are so amazing, I just couldn’t give it less than 5 stars.

While reading Dweller on the Threshold, I often thought “what an interesting book!” The world, the characters and the idea all very fascinating. And quite different too. Rinda’s writing is so visual, it paints beautiful pictures. It is very easy to envision exactly what is going on and it really helps bring the story to life. Rinda’s voice is lovely.

Dweller on the Threshold is an urban fantasy book you can’t miss. I cannot wait for you guys to read it.
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1,654 reviews241 followers
February 15, 2018
3.5

The title! I couldn't resist. I thought it's about something else, though. Nevertheless, this was fun.

All Beri O'Dell knows about herself is that she was found in a swamp near a place where serial killer had done horrible things, she has insane strength and glowing hair, and that she sees her spirit guides. Actually, one spirit guide and an ancient goddess are following her since she was a child. Recent horrible events of people slipping into a coma after what seems to be an attack and not waking up, the appearance of Dweller demons will get her close to the truth about herself. She will need all the help she can get including a witch and a mysterious ancient warrior.

At first I was afraid Beri was going to be one of those female protagonists I hate (the hitting one, you know). Yes, she's kind of hot headed and yes, she hits someone at a weird moment (that's why I was afraid she was going to be it), but she's actually a decent protagonist. Of course, there's more to her than this book gives you, but what is here is pretty good.

There's a lukewarm romance thrown in too. It happens fast and I lost the number of times the guy's size was described. Still, he and his background story are excellent additions to the overall story. The romance is one of the weakest parts.

I actually don't know what to think about this book. I started reading expecting it to be more lovecraftian (see the title), but it wasn't. I don't mind, because in the end, you do get a good story. It ends with a cliffhanger, but not for the main story. It just left a couple of things, some of them quite important, unfinished.

Dweller on the Threshold is an entertaining story and I'm interested to see what happens next.
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1,315 reviews153 followers
November 20, 2014
Orphaned at birth, Bergdis O’Dell was rejected time and time again by a multitude of foster families who were all too scared of her to keep her because of her strange gifts and freaky hair.

Now she is desperate to save Elsa, the only foster sister to ever love her back, unconditionally. To accomplish that, she must solve the mystery behind the mass comas that have befallen a number of people, including her sister Elsa, and find answers to questions about just who, and possibly what, she really is.

With little to go on, she must rely on Blythe, a perky earth witch who’s a menace around fire but who is far more talented than she appears to be at first glance, her spirit guides - Fred and Phro - one of whom claims to be the goddess of love, a very vain, very self-assured necromancer and a immortal Minoan Warrior, Nikolos, who has quite a few secrets he's keeping.

Beri is a fairly typical heroine. She is strong, but due to her childhood and Amazonian height and abilities she also has insecurities. And if the person on the cover is supposed to represent Beri accurately, I can see why. She looks like an androgynous lady-dude to me :-/ (I guess it’s no secret that I dislike the rather trashy cover, huh?)

Nikolos is by far the most interesting character in the story. He’s been hunting the Dweller since its first appearance on the island of Aeginia (Crete) millennia ago. He’s been able to stop it before, but the entity has reincarnated time and time again, and grows more powerful with each new incarnation. Unable to die, Nikolos also carries around a dark aura consisting of trapped souls, a massive guilt because of his past actions and inability to serve his goddess Ariadne, and the loss of his mortal family. Despite his threatening aura, Beri senses good in him and feels drawn to him almost against their will. Their relationship evolves to one of mutual attraction that’s both sizzling, hot and sensual, but is he really the man she thinks, and can he be trusted?

Dweller on the Threshold is good solid writing and is well edited, but it just didn’t manage to hold my interest. I’m not really able to explain why. Might be personal preference, the crossdresser on the cover or the teeny tiny font of this book. In the end, reading it felt like a chore, and ultimately I didn’t really care how this book ended. That being said: The last few chapters were the most interesting parts of the story. Even though it had a “to be continued” ending, I’m DIScontinuing this series.
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2,345 reviews78 followers
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April 2, 2013
Got to p. 124. I'm not giving up, but I am taking a break.

My first reaction to this was "I'm a little confused but it's interesting and I'm glad the author isn't info-dumping"

My next reaction was "ok, it's starting to make a bit more sense. I'm not fully engaging with any of the characters yet but it's still interesting and I like how the world is being unfolded"

Then I started wondering "How is the author going to wrap up this storyline in one book?" and checked the ending, only to discover that it's a cliffhanger.

So, I'm putting this aside until book 2 comes out (or until the series is complete, if book 2 also ends in a cliffhanger, assuming I remember). It's interesting but not enough for me to start another open-ended series. I have too many of those going right now and I find it irritating at the best of times.

Note 1: world-building based on Greek mythology

Note 2: There seems to be a running joke about the very tall heroine along the lines "I'm not fat, I'm big-boned" (Cartman from South Park) that comes uncomfortably close to fat-joke territory to me.

Note 3: The weird hair on the cover model fits the heroine, but I do not understand why she's wearing a schoolgirl-stripper outfit -- it doesn't match my understanding of the character at all.
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Author 11 books134 followers
August 5, 2013
Originally reviewed for and posted at Vampire Book Club:

Beri O’Dell is a monster hunter searching for answers and spending her time tramping through the Florida wetlands. When she gets a panicked call from her sister about a new creature stealing people’s souls and sending them into comas, she races back to Jacksonville to help. Problem is, by the time she arrives, her sister has fallen victim. In a race against time and with the help of a witch, a necromancer, and a gorgeous ancient warrior, Beri will do whatever it takes to save her sister’s soul.

Dweller on the Threshold has everything I love about urban fantasy: strong worldbuilding, a kickass heroine, a solid and entertaining group of supporting characters, and enough smolder to set a room on fire.

Beri’s a bit different from your usual tough-girl heroine. She’s spent most of her life wondering what she is. Taller than your average woman, with attention-grabbing copper-colored hair, she can see through the different dimensions and has super strength to boot. Not many people can handle that much awesome in one package. So meeting Nikolos, a man who’s not only taller than her, but finds her strength and abilities attractive, sends her into a bit of a tizzy.

And I need to take a moment here to pay homage to Nikolos. Normally, longhaired guys just don’t do it for me, but I have to make an exception for Nikolos. Tall, strong, moves with an easy grace, has a dimple…Yum. With a capital “Y.” The chemistry between the two of them is an almost physical thing, their connection so strong that everyone around them keeps telling them to get a room. I loved how he made Beri feel normal and less like a freak. He has his own issues, and the way he chooses to deal with them is frustrating, but at the same time, why and how he does it is understandable.

The world Rinda Elliott’s created is detailed without being boring. Twisting karma, astral projection, Greek mythology and demons I would have expected to see in an episode of Grimm, it’s a complicated mix grounded in the heat of a Florida autumn, and if I got a little turned around at times, I’m pretty sure that was okay—so did Beri.

Elliott sets a brisk pace, covering a lot of ground and a lot of information in a handful of days. Everything’s on fast forward, and by the time I reached the end, I had to re-read the ending twice to make sure I wasn’t missing something. Then I kept hitting the continue button on my Kindle. I mean, that couldn’t really be the end, right? But it was, and the only thing keeping me from throwing the Kindle was the fear I’d damage the device. The set up for book two makes me glad I only have to wait until October to read it, because otherwise you could probably hear me screaming in frustration in the next county.

Sexual content: Sex
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1,066 reviews29 followers
July 19, 2013
Beri O’Dell is taller and stronger than most men. She has the power of astral projection and the ability to peel and sift through the layers separating other dimensions. She investigates the paranormal in hope of finding out whom and what she is. In the past she has also helped her foster sister, Elsa, after a case goes wrong she chooses to isolate herself. Now there is a mysterious mass outbreak of comas, and since Elsa has fallen to it, Beri decides to help.

Nikolos is an ancient Minoan warrior. Shrouded in secrets and mysteries, he says what is behind the comas is called the Dweller on the Threshold, and it is very bad news. Nikolos admits to having fought it before, spending the whole of his very long life to stopping it while having to deal with some of the most evil people in history to do so. He brings dire news, but is he telling the truth? What are his true intentions?

Time is scarce. Beri has to solve the puzzle of the Dweller on the Threshold, and she will need help. Aide comes in various forms. Her spirit guides, one claiming to be a goddess. A large, handsome, enigmatic warrior with secrets of his own. A delicate witch who is more than what she seems. And a necromancer with an ego problem. Everything points to the swamp, which harbors the demon and the secrets of Beri’s true origins. Will Beri be able to handle the demon along with the truth about her beginnings?

The story is captivating with its twist on the paranormal and its usage of mythology. I love the character of Beri. She is strong, but has her weaknesses and insecurities, which makes her feel like a real person. The storyline is dark and serious, but the cast of colorful secondary characters and the humor that comes in just at the right doses from everyone keeps it from being too dark. This book is a great beginning for a new series. The world Ms. Elliott crafts is engaging and filled with potential.

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500 reviews38 followers
November 22, 2014
Eh. It was fun, but at times it seemed like just another "Very Special arse-kicking female protagonist kicks arse for love/ money/ justice" UF read. I think maybe I'm getting a little burnt out on modern UF and I either need to find some male protagonists quickly (there has to be more than just the Dresden Files, right?) or jump to a new genre for an extended holiday to recharge my enthusiasm. I wonder if I can find any fantasy style murder mysteries, like Cadfael but with more dragons and elves. :D
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289 reviews6 followers
June 8, 2013
This was LOTS of fun! I really enjoyed the fast-paced story-line and the interesting premise of the book. I loved the blend of mythology and demonology and the main character Beri was a real winner. Powerful, conflicted and insecure Beri stands out as a really connectable MC and that Nikolos what can I say but mmmmmmmmm. This book has everything; humour, horror, action, loyalty, magic and LOVE. Very much looking forward to the next book.
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764 reviews307 followers
October 18, 2013
Review originally posted here: http://thebookpushers.com/2013/10/17/...

Publisher: Samhain
Publish Date: Out now
How I got this book: ARC from the author

Beri O’Dell is investigating paranormal creatures because she wants to know what she is. Taller and stronger than most men, she astral projects and can peel through dimensional layers to see the creatures and spirits beyond.

She once helped her foster sister, Detective Elsa Remington, track down killers in Jacksonville, Florida, but stopped when a nasty fire elemental turned her strength against her. Now, she finds herself pulled back when something steals Elsa’s soul and puts her into a coma.

With little time to spare, Beri searches for the reason behind her sister’s coma. She has help in her spirit guides Fred and Phro, but others come along for the ride, including a pyro-nervous witch, and an androgynous necromancer.

The last thing Beri needs is to fall in love with a mysterious stranger. But the handsome Minoan warrior Nikolos knows what creature she’s after because he’s battled it before.

It’s bad.

Really, really bad.

He calls it the Dweller on the Threshold.

Warning: Contains a worried heroine with no time, a witch with fire problems, a pissed-off necromancer, a trapped goddess, and a damned sexy, but scary, warrior. Throw in bloody battles, mass-murderer history lessons and a bit of sexy time and you get the start of Beri’s new life.
This blurb came from the author’s website.

As some of you may know that in addition to romance, I also read science fiction and fantasy. Because of that, I do not demand that every book ends in a HEA but I do usually want the overall series to end on a positive note. When I found out that one of my erotic romance authors was working on a series that had a much darker feel, closer to a fantasy horror than romance, I was intrigued. She sent me a copy of the first book but because I was unable to get the review written within the release window that I prefer, I decided to hold onto it and schedule it closer to the release time for the second book. So this is today’s first post with my thoughts about Dweller on the Threshold and the late post today will have my thoughts on Blood of an Ancient, book 2. I hope you enjoy.

Deep in a Florida swamp an unspeakable evil lived, hid, and violently died. Or did it? Beri O’Dell is a young woman of unknown parentage, unusual height, physical, strength, hair that really has a mind of its own, and some psychic ability. After an encounter with a much more powerful being left her emotionally scarred, Beri cut out most of her full scale preternatural dealings and concentrated on minor annoyances. She was trying to exorcise a ghost when her sister called and asked for help. Elsa is normal but she has understood from a young age that more existed in the world and Beri could see and deal with the extras. In this case otherwise healthy people were suddenly collapsing into comas for no medically discernable reason. Shortly after the phone call, Elsa became one of the victims. Throughout the course of Beri’s increasingly frantic efforts to save her sister and stop whatever was causing the comas, she acquired a rather motley crew of paranormal misfits. Together their combined strengths, weaknesses, and personalities were enough to drive Beri crazy and give me several fits of laughter.

While Dweller on the Threshold introduced a rather complex world and those who appear to be the core cast of characters for the series it was done at a reader friendly pace. As the reader, I learned along with Beri as she shed some of her assumptions and false knowledge only to develop more questions, new abilities, and associated new vulnerabilities. She was never allowed to become or feel overconfident because the rules of the supernatural creatures were beyond anything she had experienced before. She also had to deal with the hidden agendas of some of her allies as well as past history left unresolved between them. The underlying sexual tension threaded through this story reminded me that Elliot is also a romance author and she took care to develop tension on a multitude of levels which helped connect and ground the characters.

One of the things that I think makes the struggle against evil so ultimately creepy is that defeating it almost always results in a loss. Sometimes it is the gradual loss of self as the person fighting would justify their actions regardless of the effect on others because they believe the end justifies the means. Other times it is the willing sacrifice of something good or dear that is required for the final defeat because that thought is so utterly against everything evil stands for. While I was reading Dweller on the Threshold I really wondered which direction Beri was going to take, and once she started down that path, if she could change her mind. I also wanted to know what, if anything would make her draw the line at what she was willing to do or support being done in order to stop what was happening. I thought Elliot did a good job of building suspense and found the ending logical as much as I emotionally wanted it to end otherwise.

Dweller on the Threshold was a very interesting engrossing read. The struggle between evil and humanity was very intense with evil appearing to gain ground regardless of what Beri and her crew attempted. I really liked how Beri demonstrated that she was learning and growing throughout the story as she tried to put everything together for the final confrontation. The way Elliot ended this story certainly kept me eager to read the next one.

I give Dweller on the Threshold a B+
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Author 2 books713 followers
April 1, 2013
DWELLER ON THE THRESHOLD gives readers a kick-ass heroine who is anything but ordinary, a world that is refreshingly different, an enemy who is both deadly and a bit of a mystery and a story that has action aplenty, an intriguing puzzle and a love interest who is most definitely interesting.

Author Rinda Elliott went out of the box when creating her characters and her story. Even her title, DWELLER ON THE THRESHOLD, is atypical of stories in the genre. But it invites readers to learn more, to meet her character Bergdis Hildegun O’Dell, a.k.a. Beri, and the other rather unconventional and uniquely named characters in her story.

DWELLER ON THE THRESHOLD follows Beri O’Dell as she tries to solve the mystery behind the mass comas that have befallen a number of people, including her sister Elsa, and find answers to questions about just who, and possibly what, she really is. With little to go on, she must rely on a perky witch named Blythe who is far more talented than she appears to be at first glance, her spirit guides – Fred and Phro – one of whom claims to be the goddess of love, and a Minoan Warrior, Nikolos, who has quite a few secrets he’s keeping.

Many of which look to be dark. And a few of which might just be dangerous. Especially to Beri, who can’t seem to fight her growing attraction to him.

With a wildly entertaining and eclectic cast of characters, a heroine with an acerbic tongue and “hit first, ask questions later” approach to investigating, a constant slew of grotesque and violent enemies to keep Beri busy, and a touch of sexual tension added to the mix, DWELLER ON THE THRESHOLD is an incredibly appealing, fun and exciting first book in author Rinda Elliott’s new series.

So, what more can I possibly say about DWELLER ON THE THRESHOLD?

It was witty and clever. The premise was definitely different – in a great way. The characters were not your typical character archetypes. The enemy – the dweller on the threshold – was more than a little bit scary.

The opening quotation and the prologue immediately drew me in. And while it took a few pages into the story itself before I was able to figure out just what was going on, once I discovered its rhythm I was hooked.

Beri wasn’t your typical run-of-the-mill heroine. She wasn’t a damsel in distress. And while she wasn’t always the easiest character to relate to, I loved her from the moment I met her. Her abilities were absolutely fascinating and I hope to discover more about them in future books in the series.

The story kept its focus on the urban fantasy/paranormal elements, keeping the suspense and action levels up, but didn’t shortchange the romance, which was equally important to the story’s outcome. And it was nice to discover a story whose love interest wasn’t in the least bit cookie-cutter.

From its unusual title, to its diverse characters, to their unique abilities, to the dark and disturbing world, I just knew that this book would set itself apart from the crowd. And it did that and so much more.

Rinda Elliott’s new series is definitely one I’m adding to my “must reads” list. And her character, Beri, is a new favorite.
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2,046 reviews160 followers
July 23, 2013
Beri O’Dell is taller and stronger than most men. She has the power of astral projection and the ability to peel and sift through the layers separating other dimensions. She investigates the paranormal in hope of finding out whom and what she is. In the past she has also helped her foster sister, Elsa, after a case goes wrong she chooses to isolate herself. Now there is a mysterious mass outbreak of comas, and since Elsa has fallen to it, Beri decides to help. Nikolos is an ancient Minoan warrior. Shrouded in secrets and mysteries, he says what is behind the comas is called the Dweller on the Threshold, and it is very bad news. Nikolos admits to having fought it before, spending the whole of his very long life to stopping it while having to deal with some of the most evil people in history to do so. He brings dire news, but is he telling the truth? What are his true intentions? Time is scarce. Beri has to solve the puzzle of the Dweller on the Threshold, and she will need help. Aide comes in various forms. Her spirit guides, one claiming to be a goddess. A large, handsome, enigmatic warrior with secrets of his own. A delicate witch who is more than what she seems. And a necromancer with an ego problem. Everything points to the swamp, which harbors the demon and the secrets of Beri’s true origins. Will Beri be able to handle the demon along with the truth about her beginnings? The story is captivating with its twist on the paranormal and its usage of mythology. I love the character of Beri. She is strong, but has her weaknesses and insecurities, which makes her feel like a real person. The storyline is dark and serious, but the cast of colorful secondary characters and the humor that comes in just at the right doses from everyone keeps it from being too dark. This book is a great beginning for a new series. The world Ms. Elliott crafts is engaging and filled with potential. Llaph Reviewer for Coffee Time Romance & More - See more at: http://www.coffeetimeromance.com/Book...
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1,194 reviews77 followers
June 29, 2018
This year I've really been in the mood for urban fantasy, and I'm always looking for something a bit different than the usual shifter/vampire/witch stories that have become so overdone. Dweller on the Threshold was an interesting read, and I definitely give the author points for originality. Beri O'Dell, the heroine, is a strapping six foot tall woman with unusual hair who can see spirits. She spends most of her time either hanging out by herself (and her two spirit guides) in the Florida swamps or helping her police officer sister Elsa round up bad guys. When Elsa succumbs to a mysterious coma that is sweeping the populace, Beri ends up having to fight an ancient demon--the Dweller on the Threshold--to save her.

What I liked:
1. Original ideas and a very well-done setting, along with some decent writing;
2. A heroine who manages to be tough and independent without being obnoxious;
3. Some good humorous moments, especially in the first half of the book;
4. It's available on kindle unlimited.

Why I did not give it more than three stars (which, as I always want to remind everyone, does mean "I liked it"):
1 . Cast of characters got rather over-crowded;
2. The second half of the book dragged a bit; and
3. It ended on a cliff-hanger, which is one of my pet peeves.

Despite these quibbles, I would definitely recommend it to fans of urban fantasy, especially if you are looking for something a little different.
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1,466 reviews21 followers
May 28, 2013
To be fair, it took a bit longer than I had hoped to finish this book but I was waylaid by life. I liked the idea of the mythology behind this story and this new series will quickly become one of my favourites. Beri is easy to like and such a great character, full of contradiction, naive in the ways of love yet street wise and world weary due to the hand that life has dealt her. She can Astral Travel as well as being able to see ghosts, two of whom are her constant companions with engaging personalities of their own. A fitting partner in crime is the ancient sexy warrior Nicolos who has more in common with Beri than just the Ankh around her neck. Both of them are keeping secrets close to the chest and time will tell if they can lower their guards and trust each other before it is too late. Full of twists and turns, moments of romance and plenty of action, this book will keep you guessing. I am looking forward to reading the next book in this series.
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30 reviews11 followers
July 15, 2013
I found this novel to be delightfully different and particularly enjoyed the mixing of serial killer, demon and Greek mythos this author brought to the table. It made for a refreshing change to urban fantasy. It was very fast paced and witty and kept the reader wondering what could possibly pop out of the closet next. I enjoyed the wonderfully quirky characters, particularly Beri's guide Phro. I am looking forward to the next installment.
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3,000 reviews134 followers
April 9, 2015
There wasn't really anything wrong with this book. It isn't badly written, it is not a horrific piece of fiction, there are no horrific characters or anything like that. I just couldn't get into it at all. There wasn't a great deal of action in the early stages so maybe it was just a bit slow for me. I just wasn't grabbed by the story so I didn't finish it.

I do thing that a lot of people will probably enjoy it.
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275 reviews26 followers
March 5, 2015
This was a refreshing read that entertains without confusing. UF is my favorite genre so I'm always excited to find a new series with a fresh story, interesting characters, and a wonderful world. I can't wait to see where this series is going. The second in the series Blood of an Ancient will be out later this year (October 2013, I think) and for me it is a must read.
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361 reviews8 followers
April 4, 2013
This was really fun. I really liked the characters and the world. The humor was great! I'm definitely in love with all the characters. I can't wait to read more from this author. And to see more from Beri for sure. New favorite series!
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12 reviews
April 5, 2013
Absoultely enjoyed this book. Loved the main character, loved the supporting cast, and loved the plot! It's an adventure, it's paranormal, its a mystery and it's certainly thrilling. Take a chance on this one.
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225 reviews4 followers
June 10, 2013
I really enjoyed this take on urban fantasy. What made this book great was the interesting combination of well understood Urban Fantasy themes juxtaposed against new elements (like god reincarnations, a karma system, etc).
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18 reviews1 follower
January 27, 2014
I really enjoyed this one! Already starting on book 2 (and very glad it is already out!) There were a few scenes where I kind of lost track of exactly what was happening but I think that was probably more thanks to my speed reading because I wanted to know what was happening next :)
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523 reviews
April 3, 2013
The creatures in this urban fantasy are a refreshing change from the normal otherworldies you encounter in this genre. A pretty good start to the series.
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203 reviews16 followers
April 10, 2013
Loved it!!! can't wait for book two!
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1,432 reviews147 followers
August 10, 2014
IT WAS SO GOOD!!!!

realistic, fascinating characters

riveting plot

red herrings <--- sometimes I like to be kept guessing, if done well, AND IT WAS

great writing


I'mma read the next one now!!!
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24 reviews
July 3, 2013
A strong 4, I found the actual plot a bit hard to follow at times but I would definitely check out the next book based on the strength of the characters and my overall enjoyment.
8 reviews
August 9, 2016
Love, love, loved this story. I really got to know these characters. It was hard for me to put down, even after I read the last page.
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Author 3 books26 followers
July 1, 2017
Don't Sleep on the Dweller

I added this book to my to-read list ages ago. The undeservedly low rating on Goodreads and the old cover image didn't much appeal to me but before I started it a few days ago I reread the blurb and noticed the Kindle edition had a new sexy interesting cover. A cover that made me want to give the book a try. I'm glad I did!

Rinda Elliot is a strong writer and her characters, world building, and magic system all make sense. Very solid, and the plot was engrossing. Overall it is a bit more romance than I anticipated, plot-wise, which if I had to highlight a weakness I would pin point.

I'm excited to read the sequel.

47 reviews
June 30, 2025
I’m giving it 4 stars for suspense and keeping my interest. None of my there’s on it panned out. Neither did the actual end of the book- WTF?
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