3.75 STARS
A little less than a month ago I was given the opportunity to read Lanie Jordan’s novel Breed of Innocence, the first book of the Breed Chronicles. I have to admit, the title threw me off a bit… breed – breeding? Should I prepare myself for some creepy story where we find out the characters are all being bred with ideal genetic traits for the benefit of science? Or does the title suggest that the characters are simply all of one particular trait – innocent; and later we will discover that this innocence has been used against them the entire time? The jury is still out after having finished the novel, truly… the series could go either way or another way entirely. But let me digress, while the title was strange to me, the summary sounded very interesting:
“Six hours ago, men in dark suits and sunglasses came looking for me.
Four hours ago, they offered me training to hunt the things that killed my family: demons.
Two hours ago, I joined their secret organization—the CGE.
Now… All I have to do is survive demon-hunting school.
The classes won’t kill me, but the finals might.”
I, personally, am all up for a novel about a bad ass chick who has a vendetta against demons. This could be an awesome new spin on the whole angels/demons/protectors of humanity thing that has been very prevalent in YA fiction as of late. And truly, I was rather happy with the results. This book had enough action to hold my interest, a bit of romance without having the reader drown in it, plenty of demon related material to keep the reader cognizant of the plot. In short, I enjoyed reading the novel.
That said, there were a few issues that did affect my pleasure while reading. While none of them were big enough to make me dislike the book, I did have to knock a few points off of the star rating. First and foremost, there were a lot of similarities between this story and Harry Potter- while I get that it’s a fantasy novel where the main character goes to school to train, so some things are going to match up simply because of the plot and setting, I still was somewhat bothered by these resemblances. For instance, the main characters in both stories are orphans due to their parent’s involvement in a particular organization, both have a main male friend, a main female friend, and a pain in the butt peer who gets them into trouble, and lastly both have a grandfatherly like figure who guides them through their schooling while withholding information about their lives, future, etc. Again, these likenesses were not completely distracting but it is noticeable and can be a little off-putting.
Another issue with the book is the world building. While the author does a great job setting up the school and classes, she almost ignores the world outside of it. The readers are given a few hints that this book is set in the future (ex: “New Orlando”) but from what I remember very little is explicitly stated about the setting. It is my opinion, that if you want to do something like this then by all means do! It can really add to the story if done well. As is, however, I would be interested in seeing the world building develop a bit. Besides for these few little hints, the society has not really changed- one would think that if this was the future there would be more futuristic-ness about it.
My final complaint (again, very minor) is that I simply hated the way that demons came to be. It seemed silly to me, and rather like a cop-out. I mean really… really??? I’m not going to give it away, but let’s just say I hope we find out in the future that this is simply a cover up story.
So to conclude my rather rambling review… I enjoyed reading this book. I hope to read its sequel in the near future. I think there is a lot of potential for the coming novels in this series and I am interested to see if any of the turns and twists I have going through my head come to fruition.
Oh and a big thank you to Lanie Jordan for a copy of her book!