I don’t usually write reviews…but this fic was just to good!
First off, the characterization is just perfection, you can tell the author researched the characters before bringing them to life.
The fic is short, with only eight chapters but I can’t stop thinking about it!! It’s like the All The Young Dudes, but with much more happiness and comfort.
The way they wrote internalized homophobia was just beautiful, it showed how Mike was dealing with it and why he was the way he was. It also really shows how despite many loving Ted in Stranger Things, he’s a very absent father who is not supportive for his kids and how it affects the family.
Also…the build up! Was just perfection, I usually don’t re-read things I read but I might just to have the same feeling again of reading this masterpiece.
The author also says how English is not their first language, that’s how you know it’s Shakespeare level. I wish I could forget the story so I could read it again with a fresh mind!
And I can’t wait for there to be a Mikes perspective, hoping someone makes it soon!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
haven’t read a fic this good in a LONG time omg!!! the author must have put crack in this cause it is intoxicatingggg- i’d forgotten this feeling of being sooo obsessed with a fanfiction it literally consumes you, and all you can do is continue reading. i truly did not want it to end (it could have been 500k words for all i care i would’ve eaten it up!!), because of how engrossed i was. anyway, now that it’s over the only thing i can do is keep thinking about it 24/7. i will not know peace until i know if byler is endgame or not. i will also not know peace if one of them tragically dies. i will also not know peace if mileven prevails. so in short, there’s not much chance i’ll know peace. but at least we will KNOWWWW
Voy a considerar esto el fanfic byler (you took my heart (I was sleeping)) que me leí en un noche y me hizo llorar y chillar como loca :)
ESTA FRASE ME HIZO MIERDA, necesito que will tenga su final feliz. “In his tired mind, Will realizes he’s never been held like this before. And maybe he never will be again. Maybe this is all he’ll ever get.”
(el resto está haciendo como q esto es el fic byler d lameparties así q voy a hacer lo mismo)
LOS AMO. M lo bebí literal, el slowburn, la tensión, cliché d una sola cama dios diossss. Mi aesteti favorito es no shippearlos mucho en la serie pero denme un fanfic bien escrito y bien representado and I'm kicking my feet!!! So so precious 💕💕
you took my heart i was sleeping ну фик норм в целом , тока слишком короткий 🤕 переоценен англ фд , как будто челики не читали реально мастерписов на 10к страниц …. но он был миленьким , хихикала над их неловкостью
That was heavenly. The slow burn and the way the characters aligned perfectly with the actual ones were incredible. The way internalized homophobia is described, and how strong each internal monologue is, really makes me think that all of this actually happened during those 18 months. I read this before Volume 2 came out, so I’m so excited to see if we’ll get anything even remotely close to this.
como el resto de las personas que hicieron sus reseñas, voy a asumir que estamos hablando de you took my heart (i was sleeping) de lameparties. excelente fic
ts was so peak ✌️💞 just the pacing was a little bit tedious for me but maybe it’s cuz i have no patience but the characterisation of mike was so good and accurate this fic changed me
Bueno, estoy viendo que están tomando este lugar para el fanfic yo también haré lo mismo jajajajajaja.
Fue muy bueno de verdad. Poder leer una versión de lo que pasó en el tiempo antes de la quinta temporada, los Byers viviendo en casa de los Wheleer. Dos amigos que necesitan arreglar su relación y además poder expresar, dejando el miedo, en palabras lo que sienten (´ε` ) muy bello .
Oh my god oh my god oh my giddy ant!!! I’m deep in the Byler fandom rn and I couldn’t stop reading this!!! Sooo well written, tense af, heart was pounding!! Kept reading every spare second I got