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The Game Plan #2
Time Out
Time Out is the second book of The Game Plan series. It explores the unusual relationships of the whole Johnson family.
You'll meet Krissy, Bryon's sweet little girl, as she is introduced to the concept of age play and discovers herself in the process. Suzanne and Glenn are back, and Suzanne explores her own femininity and puts pride aside to face her fears and needs as a Domme. Of course, we can't forget Rob and Cassie as they grow and indulge in their own D&S lifestyle. Worlds collide as Cassie and Krissy fight over Daddy Bryon, Bryon and Glenn fight over Suzanne, and Rob seems to be the only voice of reason that is heard.
There are more twists and turns, sizzling hot sex, and well-spanked bottoms than this quiet little suburb of Miami can handle!
Publisher’s Time Out is an erotic novel that includes consensual and non-consensual spankings, punishment enemas and anal play, exhibitionism, STRONG & SEXUAL AGE PLAY ELEMENTS, and more. Very hot! If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.
You'll meet Krissy, Bryon's sweet little girl, as she is introduced to the concept of age play and discovers herself in the process. Suzanne and Glenn are back, and Suzanne explores her own femininity and puts pride aside to face her fears and needs as a Domme. Of course, we can't forget Rob and Cassie as they grow and indulge in their own D&S lifestyle. Worlds collide as Cassie and Krissy fight over Daddy Bryon, Bryon and Glenn fight over Suzanne, and Rob seems to be the only voice of reason that is heard.
There are more twists and turns, sizzling hot sex, and well-spanked bottoms than this quiet little suburb of Miami can handle!
Publisher’s Time Out is an erotic novel that includes consensual and non-consensual spankings, punishment enemas and anal play, exhibitionism, STRONG & SEXUAL AGE PLAY ELEMENTS, and more. Very hot! If such material offends you, please don’t buy this book.
145 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 7, 2012
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About the author
Breanna Hayse
102 books464 followersI’m a native Californian gone 'wild', and had the opportunity to travel the globe and discover the world through the eyes of both a Marine Intelligence specialist and a BDSM lifestyler. I left the service to go into pediatric hospice nursing and grief counseling, eventually working as a marriage and family therapist for those involved in alternative lifestyle development. This experience has allowed me to gain unique inspiration for my books and provide realistic plots and relatable characters.
My first book, The Game Plan, was published in 2012 and opened the door to the now-booming world of Age-Play literature. Since that time, I’ve devoted my ‘spare’ time to writing, researching, community involvement, and private and group pro bono counseling in deviant behavior, alternative lifestyle, and addiction recovery.
I was formally ‘dungeon trained’ as a Domme before discovering my submissive side when I joined the service. My scenarios are pulled primarily from either personal experience or observation, including spending time in clubs as the safety/medical officer. My multi-faceted background allows me to glean from many avenues and provides a unique and intelligent literary experience through elements of fantasy and fiction. I also address the questions and psychology of the lifestyle in a manner that is fun and informative, and based on 'the real deal'.
I live with my husband, musician, and fellow-author, John Hayse, and two border collies in southern California. We practice a 24/7 D&S relationship with speckles of AP (and many trips to Build-A-Bear), and happily spend every moment together that we can. My hobbies include my puppies, hiding my vanilla salt-water taffy where John can't find it, exotic art, collecting inspirational trinkets, and developing my own paddle line. You can also see me as a featured author/instructor in professional conference settings and as a Sexpert for kinkyliterature.com.
My first book, The Game Plan, was published in 2012 and opened the door to the now-booming world of Age-Play literature. Since that time, I’ve devoted my ‘spare’ time to writing, researching, community involvement, and private and group pro bono counseling in deviant behavior, alternative lifestyle, and addiction recovery.
I was formally ‘dungeon trained’ as a Domme before discovering my submissive side when I joined the service. My scenarios are pulled primarily from either personal experience or observation, including spending time in clubs as the safety/medical officer. My multi-faceted background allows me to glean from many avenues and provides a unique and intelligent literary experience through elements of fantasy and fiction. I also address the questions and psychology of the lifestyle in a manner that is fun and informative, and based on 'the real deal'.
I live with my husband, musician, and fellow-author, John Hayse, and two border collies in southern California. We practice a 24/7 D&S relationship with speckles of AP (and many trips to Build-A-Bear), and happily spend every moment together that we can. My hobbies include my puppies, hiding my vanilla salt-water taffy where John can't find it, exotic art, collecting inspirational trinkets, and developing my own paddle line. You can also see me as a featured author/instructor in professional conference settings and as a Sexpert for kinkyliterature.com.
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September 27, 2012
Diapers, baby bottles, enemas - OH MY! Ageplay fantasy scenery overload! Be still my beating heart. (Or actually, be still my vibrating dildo.) Good Lord this one nailed every one of my dearest ageplay fantasies. Cassie returns in this story as a bratty little girl. Cassie turns into a jealous freaked out little girl when she learns of a possible new sister. Isn't this how many only children become when a new sibling enters the equation? Cassie behaves no different as her Daddy Bryon finds a little girl for himself.
Krissy is a cute cubby red head who Aunt Suzanne finds for Bryon. Krissy is quickly initiated into the world of ageplay. It's interesting watching her explore it from an intellectual and personal level. Ms. Hayse shows the plausible responses when introducing a new member into a poly type of family. Even though each couple is monogamous, they still are a poly family. The ageplay without the sexual content is a fabulous element. This was a very well done demonstration. Not many authors can present it in a way that isn't either a lecture or or plain boring. Ms. Hayes explores the different facets of ageplay and shows not only the ups but the downs too. Delightful!
The punishments in this story are increasingly focused on regressing Cassie to a younger child. This is smoking hawt. Since her behaviour is increasingly juvenile to almost childish, her drop in age is perfect. The humiliation she experiences heightens the reader's arousal. Her strict punishment, including some wicked birching is delicious. Forcing her to have enemas and wear a diaper is deviant's dream. The anal training plus some hawt anal sex pushes the arousal over the edge into a delicious climax. One can only hope there will be continued tales of Cassie and her new sister, Krissy. This kinky book is highly recommended to ageplay lovers.
Krissy is a cute cubby red head who Aunt Suzanne finds for Bryon. Krissy is quickly initiated into the world of ageplay. It's interesting watching her explore it from an intellectual and personal level. Ms. Hayse shows the plausible responses when introducing a new member into a poly type of family. Even though each couple is monogamous, they still are a poly family. The ageplay without the sexual content is a fabulous element. This was a very well done demonstration. Not many authors can present it in a way that isn't either a lecture or or plain boring. Ms. Hayes explores the different facets of ageplay and shows not only the ups but the downs too. Delightful!
The punishments in this story are increasingly focused on regressing Cassie to a younger child. This is smoking hawt. Since her behaviour is increasingly juvenile to almost childish, her drop in age is perfect. The humiliation she experiences heightens the reader's arousal. Her strict punishment, including some wicked birching is delicious. Forcing her to have enemas and wear a diaper is deviant's dream. The anal training plus some hawt anal sex pushes the arousal over the edge into a delicious climax. One can only hope there will be continued tales of Cassie and her new sister, Krissy. This kinky book is highly recommended to ageplay lovers.
April 26, 2015
Confession...I didn't read the first book so the beginning was super confusing.
There were parts of this that were spankbankable; others parts squicked me out.
IMHO, there was too much going on. I didn't know whether to focus on: Krissy & Aunt Suzanne, Krissy & Papa, Krissy and Cassie, Cassie & Robby, Cassie & Daddy, Cassie & Dad, Crissy, Robby & Byron, Suzanne & Byron &/or Suzanne & Glenn. There were too many fing relationships. I HATED the Doms and if I'm honest I wasn't to keen on Suzanne as a Domme either. This just wasn't for me. :/ I tried really hard to like it. I'm usually excited to read age play...not this time.
There were parts of this that were spankbankable; others parts squicked me out.
IMHO, there was too much going on. I didn't know whether to focus on: Krissy & Aunt Suzanne, Krissy & Papa, Krissy and Cassie, Cassie & Robby, Cassie & Daddy, Cassie & Dad, Crissy, Robby & Byron, Suzanne & Byron &/or Suzanne & Glenn. There were too many fing relationships. I HATED the Doms and if I'm honest I wasn't to keen on Suzanne as a Domme either. This just wasn't for me. :/ I tried really hard to like it. I'm usually excited to read age play...not this time.
July 15, 2012
This is the second book in the series and you really do need to have read the first for back story. You need to understand the relationships which are sort of convoluted. I enjoyed the introduction of a new baby girl here - and baby boy (perhaps he was introduced in the last one and I just don't remember) however that brings up my main issue here. There are just too many characters to keep track of interacting all over the place. It creates a complexity that, to me, makes the story less enjoyable to read. The book shifts from adult to baby/child play for one M/f, then baby/child play for one M/f, then baby/child play for F/m, then D/s play for M/f, then baby/child play for M/f but the f is the F from the other F/m relationship. See what I mean? I think it's just too much - these stories are better served by themselves being a book.
I loved the concept in the first one and it is carried here - although I'm not fond of the brat sub type (recognizing here that baby/child play means that type is prevalent regardless) and it gets a lot of play here - that's not my thing and though it can be arousing (due to punishment) it's not so much enjoyable for me to read as I end up disliking the female character. I know it is a hard balance to achieve in ageplay but when you can it just works. Here it was not quite on - it felt a bit off kilter to me the whole way through.
Overall I expect many will love this one. I liked the first one better but this one has a smoking hot scene with the REAL Dad which was HOT.
I loved the concept in the first one and it is carried here - although I'm not fond of the brat sub type (recognizing here that baby/child play means that type is prevalent regardless) and it gets a lot of play here - that's not my thing and though it can be arousing (due to punishment) it's not so much enjoyable for me to read as I end up disliking the female character. I know it is a hard balance to achieve in ageplay but when you can it just works. Here it was not quite on - it felt a bit off kilter to me the whole way through.
Overall I expect many will love this one. I liked the first one better but this one has a smoking hot scene with the REAL Dad which was HOT.
October 19, 2012
The first one pulled me in so much that I HAD to read this one right after. I enjoyed it.
Getting to watch this quirky little family balance and manage so that everyone needs was met was interesting to see. Cassie is a serious brat. I kind of felt bad for Krissy... for a newbie she was really just tossed in it without a life jacket.
The tea party scene was adorable, its interesting to see how two adult children can break down and communicate when they both no longer have to be an adult. They can get their feelings out and truly communicate.
Getting to watch this quirky little family balance and manage so that everyone needs was met was interesting to see. Cassie is a serious brat. I kind of felt bad for Krissy... for a newbie she was really just tossed in it without a life jacket.
The tea party scene was adorable, its interesting to see how two adult children can break down and communicate when they both no longer have to be an adult. They can get their feelings out and truly communicate.
July 8, 2012
I loved Game Plan and I loved this one as well. I loved seeing the relationships continue to develop. There is more healing that takes place and the whole family becomes more open. Like the first book the characters feel real and you have a sense of real caring going on. I've really come to care about this family and hope to see more. I think Pop needs to find someone special to fill his empty nest.
May 8, 2017
This is the story of a poly family with three kinky brothers, a Dom, a Daddy and a sub/little boy, and one kinky step sister...a sub/little girl. Cassie, the step sister subs for Rob, the Dom and plays the role of little girl for Bryon the Daddy. Glenn the youngest brother subs for Suzanna, who also plays aunt to Cassie. This second book in the series finds Bryon trying to find a woman that can be both his little girl and his lover. He finds that in Krissy, who quickly, joins in with the whole poly family.
There was definitely plenty of role play in this one, with little girls, little boys, daddys, aunts, uncles and a mommy. The family aspect of it was almost too much with me, especially when the boys' dad shows an interest in joining in. The age play aspects were pretty hot, and over all the writing was pretty good.
There was definitely plenty of role play in this one, with little girls, little boys, daddys, aunts, uncles and a mommy. The family aspect of it was almost too much with me, especially when the boys' dad shows an interest in joining in. The age play aspects were pretty hot, and over all the writing was pretty good.
October 11, 2019
Alright y'all this one will keep you own your toes. Not only are the girls and Glenn learning lessons. Ms. Suzanne gets one herself and has to open up. You get to see how Bryon and Krissy's relationship starts the jealousy between the girls and how its dealt with. You even het to see Glenn step up and get mad when he thinks Suzanne has been hurt by Bryon. I was really surprised by how jealous Cassie really was she wasn't as secure as I thought. I enjoyed this book also.
October 8, 2018
It has been a while since reading book 1 and this one, but surprisingly I remembered the story and the characters. I liked this installment and it kind of brought some of the story to a full circle.
July 25, 2017
Ugg!
Not bdsm , minor age play. This is a stew, worst book ever. Horrible with no rhym or reason. Ug!
Not bdsm , minor age play. This is a stew, worst book ever. Horrible with no rhym or reason. Ug!
July 7, 2022
Yeah it’s definitely a vibe
STOP I WILL READ A NORMAL BOOK SOON
but yeah it fed the side that I’m like mmm hashtag twinning
STOP I WILL READ A NORMAL BOOK SOON
but yeah it fed the side that I’m like mmm hashtag twinning
June 16, 2017
While I was excited to read more about Cassie and her unique family, this book just seemed to fall short. We meet Krissy who will be Bryon's little girl and she seems lovely. We deal with jealousy and insecurity and some fun times with the original family...
Spoilers..
Then it just ends. We don't get to see the distinction between Krissy and Bryon's adult and baby relationship. We don't get a full family moment with everyone there, or hear if Pop decided to enter the lifestyle. Granted there was a short bit in the epilogue to the first book including everyone, but I felt that this book would have all of that, fill in the blanks and bring it full circle. I was let down. I really enjoyed the first book and felt this had a ton of potential.
This does not reflect negatively on Ms. Hayse's writing. I have found all of her books well written and completely enjoyable.
Spoilers..
Then it just ends. We don't get to see the distinction between Krissy and Bryon's adult and baby relationship. We don't get a full family moment with everyone there, or hear if Pop decided to enter the lifestyle. Granted there was a short bit in the epilogue to the first book including everyone, but I felt that this book would have all of that, fill in the blanks and bring it full circle. I was let down. I really enjoyed the first book and felt this had a ton of potential.
This does not reflect negatively on Ms. Hayse's writing. I have found all of her books well written and completely enjoyable.
October 2, 2013
"""Grrr- I couldn't believe it was over and ended where it did! I was lost. I couldn't cope. It couldn't be the end.
I fell in love with the characters in Game Plan and so I didn't even breath until the purchase was complete and I had downloaded and opened Time Out.
The author here does more than tell just tell a story. She makes you feel it, understand, love and even believe that you could have it.
I didn't even think I was an AP person but I could totally take Bryon up on his offer- ....if you ever need a big brother or a daddy fix, you better call. Hear me, young lady?”"""
I fell in love with the characters in Game Plan and so I didn't even breath until the purchase was complete and I had downloaded and opened Time Out.
The author here does more than tell just tell a story. She makes you feel it, understand, love and even believe that you could have it.
I didn't even think I was an AP person but I could totally take Bryon up on his offer- ....if you ever need a big brother or a daddy fix, you better call. Hear me, young lady?”"""
May 5, 2014
I enjoyed this book, but not as much as I did The Game Plan. I felt that this book spent more time setting up the lifestyle and describing it than actually living it. The Game Plan left us knowing that Krissy and Cassie were going to be sisters and that Glen was going to be their cousin, because of that I was hoping to see more interactions with the "kids." We didn't get to experience that until the very end of the book and then it was finished. Overall I give this one 3.5 stars.
January 3, 2014
Mmm. i dont really know how to feel about this one
OMG like another little gurl??? Krissy???
And the diapers scene?? i was whattttt is haaappoeeninggg hereee???
And the enddddd?? Nooo id like to see more Rob cassie and bry scene together!!!
i hope there is a third one where we can read more about the three of them!!!
So at the end i like it.. But I like the first more!
OMG like another little gurl??? Krissy???
And the diapers scene?? i was whattttt is haaappoeeninggg hereee???
And the enddddd?? Nooo id like to see more Rob cassie and bry scene together!!!
i hope there is a third one where we can read more about the three of them!!!
So at the end i like it.. But I like the first more!
September 11, 2012
It was really nice to be able to see the ups and downs of the relationship between the characters and how not every problem can be solved over night. Very light on the ageplay aspects but still a great addition to The Game Plan.
October 1, 2012
Loved the first one - wanted something more in this one. Maybe too many relationships to really get attached. Want more of Daddy/Papa's story.
September 22, 2013
4.5 stars.
March 13, 2016
We needed to see more of Krissy and Bryon's story and development...unless there's gonna be a part 3?
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