Sherwood’s novel, “If I Die Before I Wake” was released in film as Orson Welles’ and Rita Hayworth’s The Lady From Shanghai“ in 1947, which considerably altered the novel, including the name of the lead character. It was originally published as part of an Ace Double along with Michael Morgan’s “Decoy.” The novel is short, tersely-written, and asks the reader to suspend belief in a couple of things. First, that anyone would plead guilty to a murder they did not commit, trusting that it would all play out properly even after the arrest. Second, that any judge would allow an attorney to continue to represent a client who is accusing that attorney of having committed the very murder at issue in the trial. Putting aside the credibility of these things for literary purposes, Sherwood’s novel is a rather interesting detour into a world of noir and twisted logic.
Laurence Planter is the lead character and he is generally a seaman, that is, a guy who works now and again on tramp steamers. He is between jobs and a wealthy Long Island attorney has, without references and barely without qualifications, decided that Laurence would make a great chauffeur. So Laurence moves into the apartment over the garage and works for Bannister, who is crippled, and his gorgeous young wife, Elsa.
The genius of Sherwood is that he does not immediately center the story on a love triangle between Laurence and the Bannisters. Rather, he opens the story with Planter having a conversation with Bannister’s law partner, Grisby, a conversation about murder and getting away with murder. And, that’s when Grisby ropes Laurence in. He tells the reader: “It’s like when a slick salesman gets hold of you. You don’t want what he’s selling, maybe, but you take it. You take it because you’d rather do that than let him think you weren’t so smart after all.”
Grisby tells Laurence that he wants to get away from his wife and head off to the South Seas and that the only proper way to do this and not have her chase after him is to fake his death. So, for five thousand clams, Laurence is going to pretend they had an argument with Bannister, that Laurence shot Bannister, and tossed him off the end of the pier. He assures Laurence that, without a body, Laurence will never be prosecuted. Meanwhile, many miles away, Grisby would kill the real Bannister, but no one could be held for it since Laurence would have an alibi (killing Grisby) and Grisby would be supposedly dead. Little about this makes much sense and Laurence takes the money, but hides it under the bed, not knowing if he would go through with pretending to kill Bannister.
The twist comes quickly as the police are quickly after Laurence and he runs from them, thinking that they want to arrest him for killing Bannister. But, lo and behold, they want to arrest him for killing Grisby down on Wall Street and the five thousand dollars hidden under his mattress was the motivation. What’s more Grisby died clutching Laurence’s chauffeur cap and there is a scene in the courtroom later where the prosecutor places the cap on Laurence’s head, yelling it fits, making any astute reader realize where Johnny Cochran got the idea about the glove not fitting years later.
The heart of the matter is that Laurence – foolish everyman Laurence – is on trial for murder – having told the police a crazy story about he had an alibi because he was busy committing a different murder – and then admitting that the original story was a lie and that he pretended to kill Bannister so Grisby could kill Bannister. It is a Kafka-esque nightmare of logic for Laurence who has dug himself into a hole so deep he can never get out.
Sherwood’s slim novel may have a few problems with believability – but maybe Laurence was dense enough to believe smart lawyers like Grisby – and the book will keep you the reader interested in how Laurence could possibly scrape his way out of this situation that he has talked his way into.