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The Nature of Grace #1.5
Unspeakable
When Mo sees a strange girl in the woods, he follows her. He soon realises they are both in a dangerous position and may not get out alive.
16 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 1, 2012
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About the author
Shelli R. Johannes
40 books425 followersShelli R. Johannes is the author of 18 books (out and forthcoming). She is the coauthor (with Kimberly Derting) of the popular CECE LOVES SCIENCE series and PENNY (An Engineering Tale of the Fourth Pig). In addition to her tween and teen novels, she is also the author of the THEO THESAURUS series and SHINE LIKE A UNICORN. Her new chapter book in Chelsea Clinton’s “She Persisted” series on FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE comes out in March 2023.
Shelli can often be found on highways and country roads saving strays and other jaywalking critters or volunteering with animal conservation groups. After earning a master’s to follow her passion of writing.
She lives in Atlanta with her own pack of unicorns: a British husband, two teens, two Goldendoodles, one sassy bird, and the many loud characters that “live” in her head. Shelli is addicted to exclamation points, puns, unicorns, and anything sciencey. You can always count on her to laugh at her own jokes, at least once.
You can find her online at srjohannes.com
Shelli can often be found on highways and country roads saving strays and other jaywalking critters or volunteering with animal conservation groups. After earning a master’s to follow her passion of writing.
She lives in Atlanta with her own pack of unicorns: a British husband, two teens, two Goldendoodles, one sassy bird, and the many loud characters that “live” in her head. Shelli is addicted to exclamation points, puns, unicorns, and anything sciencey. You can always count on her to laugh at her own jokes, at least once.
You can find her online at srjohannes.com
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August 19, 2017
A vignette of a boy and a girl playing cat and mouse in the deep woods trying to figure out what the other is doing there until real danger comes.
This was quick and well developed for all that it is so short. It was thrilling and pulled me in so that I sighed with impatience when the cliff hanger came. This is most definitely a teaser-set up short story that left me thirsty for more.
This was quick and well developed for all that it is so short. It was thrilling and pulled me in so that I sighed with impatience when the cliff hanger came. This is most definitely a teaser-set up short story that left me thirsty for more.
December 19, 2012
Rating: 3/5
As you can see by the 1.5 in the title, Unspeakable is a companion story to S.R. Johannes' first book, Untraceable. This a short story, but I still formatted my review the way I usually do (in a way that's quite extensive :p), because it's just easier for me to do it this way!
The Plot and General Story
Untraceable tells the story of 16-year-old Grace, a girl who has a knack for the wilderness and hiking. When her father, a forest ranger who taught her everything she knows about wildlife, goes missing during a patrol, Grace refuses to believe he's dead and vows to find out what really happened to him. While seeking the truth about her father's disappearance, Grace comes across Mo, a fellow wilderness-junkie who aids her on her journey. While Untraceable was told from Grace's point of view, Unspeakable takes a few scenes from Untraceable, and is told from Mo's point of view. Most of the books I read are told from a female's point of view, so I always love reading books that are told from a guy's.
Mo
Once again, I loved being able to see things from Mo's point of view. From what I remember from the first book, Mo was a great character, and it was nice to have somewhat of an "origins" story about him.
The Writing
This short story is 5,000 words, which is obviously very short. Due to the length constraits, this short story gets straight to the point, which is something that I greatly appreciated. I'm glad that all the passages were informative and useful, because with a short story, that is necessary. Johannes dived right into pivotal and familiar scenes from the first book, and they were are described in the same captivating, suspenseful way. I also liked the fact that Mo was completely confused about Grace and the things that were going on with her, because he of course doesn't have a clue! It was interesting to take that into account.
Overall
I read Untraceable during January of this year, and unfortunately, I didn't know that the second book was released was in September! Lucky me, I also came across Unspeakable, and decided to read it to refresh my memory before I read the second book of the series. Although, once again, this is a very short 5,000 word read, I feel that I'm more familiar with the story again. As you can see, I gave this short story a 3/5 rating, and that's mainly because I feel that it was to short. I know it was supposed to be short, but I think it could have been better if it was a bit longer. It would have been nice to have even more insight from Mo!
As you can see by the 1.5 in the title, Unspeakable is a companion story to S.R. Johannes' first book, Untraceable. This a short story, but I still formatted my review the way I usually do (in a way that's quite extensive :p), because it's just easier for me to do it this way!
The Plot and General Story
Untraceable tells the story of 16-year-old Grace, a girl who has a knack for the wilderness and hiking. When her father, a forest ranger who taught her everything she knows about wildlife, goes missing during a patrol, Grace refuses to believe he's dead and vows to find out what really happened to him. While seeking the truth about her father's disappearance, Grace comes across Mo, a fellow wilderness-junkie who aids her on her journey. While Untraceable was told from Grace's point of view, Unspeakable takes a few scenes from Untraceable, and is told from Mo's point of view. Most of the books I read are told from a female's point of view, so I always love reading books that are told from a guy's.
Mo
Once again, I loved being able to see things from Mo's point of view. From what I remember from the first book, Mo was a great character, and it was nice to have somewhat of an "origins" story about him.
The Writing
This short story is 5,000 words, which is obviously very short. Due to the length constraits, this short story gets straight to the point, which is something that I greatly appreciated. I'm glad that all the passages were informative and useful, because with a short story, that is necessary. Johannes dived right into pivotal and familiar scenes from the first book, and they were are described in the same captivating, suspenseful way. I also liked the fact that Mo was completely confused about Grace and the things that were going on with her, because he of course doesn't have a clue! It was interesting to take that into account.
Overall
I read Untraceable during January of this year, and unfortunately, I didn't know that the second book was released was in September! Lucky me, I also came across Unspeakable, and decided to read it to refresh my memory before I read the second book of the series. Although, once again, this is a very short 5,000 word read, I feel that I'm more familiar with the story again. As you can see, I gave this short story a 3/5 rating, and that's mainly because I feel that it was to short. I know it was supposed to be short, but I think it could have been better if it was a bit longer. It would have been nice to have even more insight from Mo!
September 18, 2012
This is a super short, short story from the point of Mo. It takes a few scenes (around 3) and reworks them for Mo and how he viewed them. While it was a nice little read that I finished a few minutes before I went to bed, it was almost too short for me...or maybe it was the lack of pivotal scenes. It is a good addition though, and you could read this first without it spoiling the first book as it remains rather vague on certain aspects.
July 30, 2012
Just based off the little bit in the short story, I reallllllly want to continue reading. The characters are witty and mysterious. (What ARE they doing in the woods!?) And it ends on a cliffhanger that has me hooked. Find the rest of my thoughts on this short story on my blog: http://mrscaptkirk51.blogspot.com/201....
July 15, 2012
Oh, seeing those 2 scenes from Mo's perspective was really nice, especially with how everything ends up at the end of Untraceable!
May 1, 2013
Unspeakable is a short story accompanying the author’s Nature of Grace series. Told from the point of view of the mysterious Mo, English and Australian overtones combine in a fascinating voice. “What the bloody hell was that?” wonders Mo as he wanders the isolated paths of the forest, where there should be no “blokes” but him. But “that” turns out to be a deer in need of help, which he expertly gives.
Soon an expert hiker is intrudes on Mo’s isolation and finds him more at home chatting to deer than making friends with a girl. Still, Mo tries to find out what’s going on and ends up watching…
Well, as the author says at the end of this free short story, “If you want to find out what happens, you can purchase Untraceable.” The voice is fun, and the story’s a great introduction to the characters and location of the longer series—a sort of “try it and see if you like it” offer—and it’s free.
Disclosure: It was free and I already enjoy the series.
Soon an expert hiker is intrudes on Mo’s isolation and finds him more at home chatting to deer than making friends with a girl. Still, Mo tries to find out what’s going on and ends up watching…
Well, as the author says at the end of this free short story, “If you want to find out what happens, you can purchase Untraceable.” The voice is fun, and the story’s a great introduction to the characters and location of the longer series—a sort of “try it and see if you like it” offer—and it’s free.
Disclosure: It was free and I already enjoy the series.
September 22, 2013
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This is very short, approximately 16 pages in length, but it's so worth the read. I LOVE getting the perspectives of other characters, and that's what Johannes provides as we learn what two scenes in the novel look like through Mo's eyes. It's very well written and leaves the reader hanging in a way that makes them want to read those scenes in Untraceable all over again. I actually think that this novellete should/could be read PRIOR to reading Untraceable, even though it's labeled as 1.5, because it really piqued my interest and I think it might generate even more interest in Untraceable should it be read prior. It's currently free on Amazon and 99 cents on Barnes and Noble, so if you're interested in reading Untraceable, but aren't completely sure yet, then definitely pick up this short novellete. It's awesome.
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This is very short, approximately 16 pages in length, but it's so worth the read. I LOVE getting the perspectives of other characters, and that's what Johannes provides as we learn what two scenes in the novel look like through Mo's eyes. It's very well written and leaves the reader hanging in a way that makes them want to read those scenes in Untraceable all over again. I actually think that this novellete should/could be read PRIOR to reading Untraceable, even though it's labeled as 1.5, because it really piqued my interest and I think it might generate even more interest in Untraceable should it be read prior. It's currently free on Amazon and 99 cents on Barnes and Noble, so if you're interested in reading Untraceable, but aren't completely sure yet, then definitely pick up this short novellete. It's awesome.
October 10, 2012
Probably the shortest novella I've ever read but that's OK. It did what it should do, tie one over until the next full length book is available. Plus, it gave the reader more of Mo so who really is going to complain? Certainly not me.
What S.R. Johannes did was take a few scenes from Untraceable and rework in to Mo's point of view. I really enjoyed seeing these scenes but through his eyes. The scene with the deer before his first time meeting Grace (though, he didn't know this was her name at the current time) was absolutely precious.
If you enjoyed Untraceable and haven't read Uncontrollable yet, I abso-bloody-lutely recommend you give this a quick read. It won't take you long to finish it and then you'll wanna dive right in to the next book! Which is exactly what I'm about to do!!
What S.R. Johannes did was take a few scenes from Untraceable and rework in to Mo's point of view. I really enjoyed seeing these scenes but through his eyes. The scene with the deer before his first time meeting Grace (though, he didn't know this was her name at the current time) was absolutely precious.
If you enjoyed Untraceable and haven't read Uncontrollable yet, I abso-bloody-lutely recommend you give this a quick read. It won't take you long to finish it and then you'll wanna dive right in to the next book! Which is exactly what I'm about to do!!
September 27, 2015
Book #1.5 The Nature of Grace
I've had this book a long time in my to-read pile. I wasn't even sure what it was. I guess it is a short, different POV from a different character in Untraceable. I have not read Untraceable. But if it is anything like what this book is like, I think I would like it. In this story, I never learn any of the character's names, the the girl is spunky and full of life, and I think I would really like reading and knowing more about her. It is a very quick, enjoyable read. It ends as a cliffhanger, and that almost makes me what to track down Untraceable and read it. Maybe I will in the future.
Four stars.
I've had this book a long time in my to-read pile. I wasn't even sure what it was. I guess it is a short, different POV from a different character in Untraceable. I have not read Untraceable. But if it is anything like what this book is like, I think I would like it. In this story, I never learn any of the character's names, the the girl is spunky and full of life, and I think I would really like reading and knowing more about her. It is a very quick, enjoyable read. It ends as a cliffhanger, and that almost makes me what to track down Untraceable and read it. Maybe I will in the future.
Four stars.
January 1, 2013
This review appears on my blog, Read Books and Live Green
After reading Untraceable, I really needed something to tide me over until Uncontrollable. This extremely short story did just that. I love Mo and Grace so much and reading this scene from Mo's perspective was great. You would probably want to read Untraceable before you read this short story, but for fans of The Nature of Grace series this is a must read.
After reading Untraceable, I really needed something to tide me over until Uncontrollable. This extremely short story did just that. I love Mo and Grace so much and reading this scene from Mo's perspective was great. You would probably want to read Untraceable before you read this short story, but for fans of The Nature of Grace series this is a must read.
February 19, 2014
As the narrator goes about daily life in the woods, he stumbles across a trapped baby deer. After freeing the deer, he finds and follows an unusual woman. These chance encounters cause his normal patterns to skew out of a normal cycle.
A crisp, vivid narrative quickly yet descriptively guide the reader through the actions of the forest adventures.
Characters are not fully developed, but this is a short story, so perhaps additional development is awaiting future adventures.
Overall, an interesting read.
A crisp, vivid narrative quickly yet descriptively guide the reader through the actions of the forest adventures.
Characters are not fully developed, but this is a short story, so perhaps additional development is awaiting future adventures.
Overall, an interesting read.
November 15, 2012
Immediately after reading "Untraceable" I downloaded this book. I was craving more Mo. I just wish there was more of him here! Although this was a very short interlude, it still gave me what I wanted. It's definitely worth the short amount of time it would take to read it once you've finished reading "Untraceable"
July 13, 2012
4.5/5 stars
Wonderful short story that takes several scenes from Untraceable and reworks them from Mo's point of view, reminding me just why I love that boy. Loved hearing his side of things and seeing Grace through his eyes.
It's a great teaser and intro to Untraceable!
Wonderful short story that takes several scenes from Untraceable and reworks them from Mo's point of view, reminding me just why I love that boy. Loved hearing his side of things and seeing Grace through his eyes.
It's a great teaser and intro to Untraceable!
December 28, 2012
I probably would have enjoyed this more if I had just recently read the first book....but in the end it was just kind of confusing. So yeah. Not as good as many of the male POV scenes from books I've read.
December 9, 2016
This was a short glimpse into Mo's head from just before he meets Grace up until she is caught by Al and Billy during Untraceable. Some of it is the same as the other book but from his eyes. I didn't feel like it added a lot of insight into his character, but it was kind of fun anyway.
September 19, 2012
Can't wait for the next book. :)
September 13, 2012
A nice short... like the choice of scene that was told from another perspective.
September 15, 2012
Way to short...but still loved it!
September 27, 2012
A VERY short story(?) from Mo's perspective. You follow Mo through a couple of scenes in Untraceable. A few more scenes would have been nice.
May 27, 2013
I love this book! It's AMAZING!
February 21, 2013
Ever want to know what another character is thinking? S. R. Johannes gives readers a glimpse into Mo's thoughts. Full review soon.
April 28, 2013
Tell me why were these 16 pages written............
Pointless POV.
Pointless POV.
May 20, 2013
This is Mo's side of the story to Untraceable .. Way to short they could have kept going with his side
June 2, 2013
Mo's POV!!!! *fangirls*
February 2, 2014
This short story in the POV of Mo could have had a bit more to it but it was quite interesting to get to learn his POV of his and Grace's first encounter.
November 29, 2014
This book was a short story told in Mo's point of view which was great because I love Mo and I hope him and grace come together in the end of this series.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 11, 2017
Free from internet edition
I liked seeing the two scenes from Mo's point of view.
I liked seeing the two scenes from Mo's point of view.
January 25, 2015
This is a very short story that introduces two characters in the next book Untraceable.
September 28, 2013
Way too short. I feel guilty for counting it as a book I've read this month, lol.
December 15, 2013
just okay, has me interested in reading the series
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