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The Hunter Family #1
The Billionaire's Desire
DETERMINED TO SUCCEED
Sarah Vaughn put her life on hold to raise her brothers after their parents died, and now it was her turn to live her life. After graduating from college at 32, she landed a dream internship with an international investment firm. Sarah wants to make partner there one day and she is willing to do whatever it takes.
She commutes in to downtown on the train every morning and her special treat is seeing him every day. He fuels her fantasies and for a few minutes each day she allows herself to dream.
DREAMS BECOME REALITY
Sarah’s life changes the day he seduces her on the train. His sensual power over her is like none she has ever experienced. But that morning on the train is just the beginning of a chain of events that will change Sarah’s life forever. She doesn’t know that the gorgeous stranger is Joshua Hunter, billionaire CEO of Hunter International, and he has a voracious appetite for smart, sexy women.
When she discovers who he is, he gives her an offer she is not sure she can refuse…
Sarah Vaughn put her life on hold to raise her brothers after their parents died, and now it was her turn to live her life. After graduating from college at 32, she landed a dream internship with an international investment firm. Sarah wants to make partner there one day and she is willing to do whatever it takes.
She commutes in to downtown on the train every morning and her special treat is seeing him every day. He fuels her fantasies and for a few minutes each day she allows herself to dream.
DREAMS BECOME REALITY
Sarah’s life changes the day he seduces her on the train. His sensual power over her is like none she has ever experienced. But that morning on the train is just the beginning of a chain of events that will change Sarah’s life forever. She doesn’t know that the gorgeous stranger is Joshua Hunter, billionaire CEO of Hunter International, and he has a voracious appetite for smart, sexy women.
When she discovers who he is, he gives her an offer she is not sure she can refuse…
30 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 7, 2012
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Ashley Blake
28 books179 followersAshley Blake likes to combine a good romance with steamy love scenes. She has been reading erotic romance for years and believes a good story should have a perfect blend of both. Her goal is to write stories that stimulate your heart and your senses.
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November 26, 2012
Story: GOOD
Intimacy Level: VERY SPICY
Enjoyment: GOOD
Length: 473 Kindle / 30pages
THOUGHTS
I actually prejudged this book before I read it. I thought it would have been an eight minutes read of them meeting on a train wam bam thank you ma'am, and then shock, to know who the stranger was. However, the author was leading to a build up between the main characters which will lead to a part 2, and I would like to read that like yesterday. When the story starts out, your thinking, cute and sweet but it later becomes more.
Sarah has been raising her two brothers and has started her life later rather than sooner. Now that she has graduated at the age of 32, she is an intern and desperately wants to make an impression to earn a permanent spot in the company. Taking the train everyday, she sees the same guy, Joshua, that she feels an attraction to for the past 3 weeks, and once their paths cross and a few days of flirtatious reckless desires, Sarah is shocked to find out who is Joshua. But wait, there is more, because I thought the story ends there, nope, Joshua lays out a proposition to Sarah that has me interested since I know what her answer was and what took place after. This leads to part 2 and I'm interested n reading part 2.
Joshua was mysterious and definitely sexy with his often times smirks of, I know something you don't know looks throughout the story. While reading, of course you and I both know who he really is, but whats not clear is his intentions with Sarah. And with this proposition that has been laid out, it shows a different commanding do as I say side of Joshua. Sarah was very smart and I like that. Her character fell prey to Joshua's advances when she least expects it.
Overall, a very good and an unexpected enjoyment. Very short, but with all that aside, I really enjoyed it.
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Intimacy Level: VERY SPICY
Enjoyment: GOOD
Length: 473 Kindle / 30pages
THOUGHTS
I actually prejudged this book before I read it. I thought it would have been an eight minutes read of them meeting on a train wam bam thank you ma'am, and then shock, to know who the stranger was. However, the author was leading to a build up between the main characters which will lead to a part 2, and I would like to read that like yesterday. When the story starts out, your thinking, cute and sweet but it later becomes more.
Sarah has been raising her two brothers and has started her life later rather than sooner. Now that she has graduated at the age of 32, she is an intern and desperately wants to make an impression to earn a permanent spot in the company. Taking the train everyday, she sees the same guy, Joshua, that she feels an attraction to for the past 3 weeks, and once their paths cross and a few days of flirtatious reckless desires, Sarah is shocked to find out who is Joshua. But wait, there is more, because I thought the story ends there, nope, Joshua lays out a proposition to Sarah that has me interested since I know what her answer was and what took place after. This leads to part 2 and I'm interested n reading part 2.
Joshua was mysterious and definitely sexy with his often times smirks of, I know something you don't know looks throughout the story. While reading, of course you and I both know who he really is, but whats not clear is his intentions with Sarah. And with this proposition that has been laid out, it shows a different commanding do as I say side of Joshua. Sarah was very smart and I like that. Her character fell prey to Joshua's advances when she least expects it.
Overall, a very good and an unexpected enjoyment. Very short, but with all that aside, I really enjoyed it.
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December 28, 2012
Gah! The things I read in a bid to make my target. I hang my head in shame...
April 10, 2018
Great book can't wait to read more books by this author
August 8, 2013
This book was surprisingly an ok read, very short but still ok. After reading the other reviews, I guess I need to read the other two books. This first book gets right to the point, 20% into it you get a steamy train scene. If you're looking for a quick steamy read then this is the book for you. Definitely need the rest of the books in the series.
August 25, 2022
Finished Reading August 31, 2013
2.75 Stars
A very VERY short smutty read that is part of at least 3 more books with these mc's.
I remember liking it but wanted a lot more. Which, of course, it what the author intended to happen.
However, when I realized it was 3 more books to get a 'Somewhat' of an HEA, I bailed out.
I remember the flow seemed pretty good. But it wasn't enough to get me spending money.
None of the books in the 'Serial' is more than about 75 pages.
And this IS a SERIAL , it is NOT a SERIES
HUGE difference between those two things.
Prch Amz August 26, 2013
2.75 Stars
A very VERY short smutty read that is part of at least 3 more books with these mc's.
I remember liking it but wanted a lot more. Which, of course, it what the author intended to happen.
However, when I realized it was 3 more books to get a 'Somewhat' of an HEA, I bailed out.
I remember the flow seemed pretty good. But it wasn't enough to get me spending money.
None of the books in the 'Serial' is more than about 75 pages.
And this IS a SERIAL , it is NOT a SERIES
HUGE difference between those two things.
Prch Amz August 26, 2013
June 16, 2017
For a very short story I guess it was good. It was just totally written in the land of fantasy. Nothing, nothing at all about this short story was based anywhere in the realm of reality.
So if you like a really quick totally unbelievable read. This books for you. If you want a tiny, ever so slight, bit of some reality, skip this book.
So if you like a really quick totally unbelievable read. This books for you. If you want a tiny, ever so slight, bit of some reality, skip this book.
November 28, 2020
Short and steamy
An illicit rendezvous on a train with a handsome stranger add a some much needed pep to Sarah's step as she pushes on with trying to obtain her dream job. Little does she know that she isnt as much a stranger to him as he is to her. When his true identity is revealed its a big shock for her.
An illicit rendezvous on a train with a handsome stranger add a some much needed pep to Sarah's step as she pushes on with trying to obtain her dream job. Little does she know that she isnt as much a stranger to him as he is to her. When his true identity is revealed its a big shock for her.
May 11, 2017
Great story
Brilliant story cannot wait to read some more very exciting it's got t o be very interesting bring it on
Brilliant story cannot wait to read some more very exciting it's got t o be very interesting bring it on
May 8, 2020
Awful
March 7, 2015
In the past you wouldn't catch me reading a sort story. I just felt they were a waste of money. But the past year with so many independent authors more and more shots are surfacing and most are surprisingly decent. I find now they are a great distraction while waiting for appointments or something quick before bed.The Billionaire's Desire was no different. I enjoyed it very much but it was off.
I just didn't feel pull of attraction between Sarah and Joshua. When they had their naughty freak moment in the trains washroom it I found myself cringing instead sighing. The warring desire for the two to rut was lacking. Then to add insult to injury the author conveyed that Joshua was a domineering lover in the end missed it big time. He seemed more commanding. Like a big time boss who want to play with a new toy and can use power and money to get what he desires. Ha! Intending a pun realization has just dawned.
Not having had the chance to build an affinity to any of the characters I find myself eager to read The Billionaire's Desire 2: Dubai Confidential eager to see what the next thirty (30) days has to offer in this agreement. After all, if punishment is a good fucking this is going to be one hell of ride.
I just didn't feel pull of attraction between Sarah and Joshua. When they had their naughty freak moment in the trains washroom it I found myself cringing instead sighing. The warring desire for the two to rut was lacking. Then to add insult to injury the author conveyed that Joshua was a domineering lover in the end missed it big time. He seemed more commanding. Like a big time boss who want to play with a new toy and can use power and money to get what he desires. Ha! Intending a pun realization has just dawned.
Not having had the chance to build an affinity to any of the characters I find myself eager to read The Billionaire's Desire 2: Dubai Confidential eager to see what the next thirty (30) days has to offer in this agreement. After all, if punishment is a good fucking this is going to be one hell of ride.
September 3, 2012
This was a complete miss for me. I did not believe or feel the "chemistry" between these two characters. I thought their first encounter in the bathroom was awkward and I found myself rolling my eyes. I was also a bit bored constantly hearing about her desire to be successful at this job and how awesome she is at this job, blah, blah, blah. I don't care. I found myself skimming thru this story and I shouldn't want to do that with a short story like this. I also didn't believe him as a Dom. Typically with a book I really enjoy, I am able to easily picture myself switched with the heroine or being an observer... But I didn't want to do either with this story.
I think that I needed to have them warm up to each other first. I missed the build up in the tension. Maybe more focus on the tension between them on the train and maybe the first actual interaction could have been a touch that cause electricity or a close encounter where you could feel the chemistry. But it wasn't there and this didn't work for me.
I think that I needed to have them warm up to each other first. I missed the build up in the tension. Maybe more focus on the tension between them on the train and maybe the first actual interaction could have been a touch that cause electricity or a close encounter where you could feel the chemistry. But it wasn't there and this didn't work for me.
November 28, 2014
I loved this book, faults and all.
Having read 'Jealous Billionaire' by this author I looked around for more of her work, now I make so secret of the fact that I hate short serial novellas/books, I've no patience for the wait in between, they usually end on a cliffhanger and work out expensive by the time you've got them all, box sets however I like since there's no wait and they generally work out cheaper. Anyway that's how I came to read this series.
The synopsis covers the book well so I'll just say that I loved it. I've read the reviews and this appears to be a love it or hate it kind of book.
I agree with the reviews, good and bad, she's too eager to become partner, he's controlling, dialogue wasn't brilliant, was protection used? not a great deal of background or build-up, was there any chemistry between them?
Despite its faults and yes I wasn't blind to them I loved this book, I can't explain it but I did.
Having read 'Jealous Billionaire' by this author I looked around for more of her work, now I make so secret of the fact that I hate short serial novellas/books, I've no patience for the wait in between, they usually end on a cliffhanger and work out expensive by the time you've got them all, box sets however I like since there's no wait and they generally work out cheaper. Anyway that's how I came to read this series.
The synopsis covers the book well so I'll just say that I loved it. I've read the reviews and this appears to be a love it or hate it kind of book.
I agree with the reviews, good and bad, she's too eager to become partner, he's controlling, dialogue wasn't brilliant, was protection used? not a great deal of background or build-up, was there any chemistry between them?
Despite its faults and yes I wasn't blind to them I loved this book, I can't explain it but I did.
November 18, 2014
What can I say that I haven't said before about controlling men & pathetic, weak women. Sarah is just way to eager to make partner at the firm that she's willing to be someone's lap dog & take orders no matter what.I didn't like her at all. In a nutshell, she's not much different than a prostitute. And Joshua is a controlling, arrogant ass. How about the fact that when they had sex in his office, there was protection used? Who just does that? They're both complete strangers to eachother & they just get down & dirty without thinking of the consequences? The writing is not that great either. I'm not a fan of books with little dialogue. It's so crucial in order for the reader to get to know the characters & see the relationships build. This lacked in so many departments. I will not be continuing this series.
November 25, 2013
Good thing by the time I came across to this books all the series is already out. Its going to be pretty much a big cliff hanger in every series. I enjoyed reading this so much that I finish this in one day. the moment they met is totally hot and to think she has all the ability every man wants; beauty, intelligent and sexy. I thought their love story is flawless but then when I reach the last series things between them are getting more serious and the situation is far more different from the first one.
October 17, 2012
I didn't like the story split up in 3 different books but once I finished reading all 3 and I wanted more!! I loved with this book that was so different with the other books I've read is that Joshua was very honest and straight forward with his feelings toward her. I would have like to read about what happened in the 9 years but all in all great book! I read Jake's story "My Forever in You" immediately. I can't wait for the next one!
September 21, 2013
This book does exactly what it says on the tin, it's a short story filled with lust, sex and a hot billionaire, the story starts off mysterious, exciting and a little bit lusty, the middle is full of desire, wishful thinking and some awkward moments (for the main character) and the end leaves you anxious to read more, excited for what's to come and googling the author to find more of her work :)
Story: 5
Characters: 5
Cover: 5
Great short read, will be sure to follow this one
TJ
Story: 5
Characters: 5
Cover: 5
Great short read, will be sure to follow this one
TJ
April 7, 2014
Weird....The ending....What??
Why? That's the real question. It had potential and it was going well, the whole stranger encounter went off well and it was even endearing how she didn't put it together that he was the owner of the company until later. The ending and the whole 30 day setup was a terrible way to end it. I was unconvinced and it didn't make any sense, plus the proposition was ludicrous. Dubai? Why? Most importantly what is this business?
Why? That's the real question. It had potential and it was going well, the whole stranger encounter went off well and it was even endearing how she didn't put it together that he was the owner of the company until later. The ending and the whole 30 day setup was a terrible way to end it. I was unconvinced and it didn't make any sense, plus the proposition was ludicrous. Dubai? Why? Most importantly what is this business?
August 22, 2012
I think I'm officially over the poor-girl-meets-control-freak-zillionaire plot. This book falls into that category whole-heartedly. I didn't like Sarah, she seemed a little eager-beaver to me and joshua, well, I really didn't like him one bit. There was not one thing that endeared me to him at all. I'm glad it was a novella/ short story because at least it was over quick.
December 1, 2012
The story was good enough, I did find the way she let a random on the train touch her intimately a little hard to imagine but the rest of the story line followed the pattern of this type of book. I wanted to go on to read the second book but thought the price was too much for just a 70 odd page story.
January 16, 2013
I read all of The Billionaire's Desire and started the sequel My Forever is You and I really liked this series and the author's writing, but I have stopped reading the series because I refuse to pay $2.99 for unfinished stories. Stop stringing me along and write a full book and charge me one decent price! Keep that in mind if you start with this book!
September 2, 2016
I would give this more of a 3.5-4.0 it was a great start to a short story, I just hope the rest of this series holds up with the way this one started. If it keeps with how this one started then it will be a great short story.
I really like Joshua Hunters character...he's just enough cocky, and smartass.
I really like Joshua Hunters character...he's just enough cocky, and smartass.
June 16, 2013
This one HOTT start to a series. I am even more excited because there was a reference to The Blackstone Affair in the front matter of the book. The Blackstone Affair is in my top 20 so I can't wait to finish the series.
For just 30 pages the author did a great job of pulling you in and developing a great start to a series that I think will be one HOTT affair.
For just 30 pages the author did a great job of pulling you in and developing a great start to a series that I think will be one HOTT affair.
May 21, 2013
When a book starts at 8% you know it's going to be short!!! I wish that all 5 were in ONE BOOK!! Why is it that they are broken down into 5 50 page novellas at $2.99 EACH?? This one was a freebie on amazon, but now to decide if its worth buying the rest?!
November 25, 2014
Not for me definitely not a good read. The first 2 pages were great but the rest (the fantasy part) were pretty awful. Not erotic at all and very boring read. I read a lot of billionaire books and this one did not do it for me.
January 8, 2014
This is a strange one for me!
Strictly speaking I enjoyed it but I'm nature why? firstly it is very short and the speed it far too much, but also its quite harsh in the way it has been written. Theres no real emotion in it!
But if you want a little bit of fun, I say go for it!
xoxo
Strictly speaking I enjoyed it but I'm nature why? firstly it is very short and the speed it far too much, but also its quite harsh in the way it has been written. Theres no real emotion in it!
But if you want a little bit of fun, I say go for it!
xoxo
May 30, 2014
At first I wasn't sure if I was going to like this book. The whole meeting a stranger on the train that she lets seduce her without a second thought. Then having him show up at her work???? But once it's explained...a little...then you really just wanna rip the guys clothes off ;)
April 19, 2015
Really good free book from Amazon. Very sexy short story only 30 pages. Unfortunately is part one of a series which the other books are £1.99. For me story's not compelling enough to pay for next lot.
August 17, 2012
Sarah is a wonderful Character and Mr Hunter...yummy!
October 23, 2012
loved this book, can't wait for the next book.
February 12, 2013
Rushed.
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