Once again, I find myself in the position of having to comment on editing. Mispelled words, missing words, misused words and a continuity error were unfortunately what occurred due to the lack of editing.
However, I do have to say that the story is a great effort on the author's part. The story was descriptive and it was easy to get pulled right into the story.
I did have a couple of disappointments aside from the editing, though. First, although many of the characters were at least likeable in passing, I felt there were way too many characters introduced. The problem with that is that, with so many characters, not all can be serviced as they deserve to be, causing me to not really spend enough time with them and really connect with them and grow to care for them. Second, many of the characters had similar names, or at least names that began with the same letter causing some confusion at times: Elisa, Lisa, 2 Jacks, John, Jake, Jeanette, Jesse, Jared, etc. Third, although I did enjoy the basic story, almost all of the danger and/or tragedy happens either to characters who have just been introduced to the story or characters that were introduced solely to be killed. Therefore, I was never worried about any of my more favored characters. They were too safe at all times.
Overall, I have to say, this author has potential and I would like to see her make another attempt.