Awhile ago a colleague and I discussed action scenes in books, and interestingly she mentioned that sometimes she finds books with too much action sequences and she’ll skim through it. I just nodded and smiled politely, all the while thinking to myself that there’s no such thing as too much action. It’s like saying an action movie has too much action, right? Besides, action is what keeps a plot moving. I prefer that to pages and pages of monotonous world-building. Well, I’m now whistling a different tune. Though I still prefer lots of action to chapters of detailed world-building, I also now understand that a book – in this case that book would be “Savage Bay” – can indeed have too much action which did very little for the plot.
In short, I think this book is more one for the guys than for us girls. It has a solid basis and I loved the concept of a secret message hidden in our DNA code, but the author’s focus was clearly more on elaborate hand-to-hand combat and gun fight scenes, than on character and story development. I didn’t feel a thing for any of the characters and the “big reveal” was not such a big reveal at all. I’m not saying this is a terrible book. It’s not. Clearly a lot of thought went into it, but only into the tactical and technical details of the storyline, for which I really have to commend the author. He wrote the action scenes like a pro. “Savage Bay” reads word for word like an action movie script, or if you’re an FPS gamer like me, it would be easy to imagine yourself as the leader of the Titan Six squad, leading your men into combat as the author details every single move they make, every step of the way.
“Savage Bay” has a lot going for it and for many it would definitely be an exhilarating read, but it just wasn’t for me. It needs more fluffing out and a shift in focus from the less important details to the more important ones that actually drives the plot. In the hands of a skilled editor, this book has loads of potential to shine. Will I read more of this author’s books? Most definitely yes! He obviously has interesting ideas and world-building is something he’s good at as is evident in this novel.